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This is the story of what happened to Valt Aoi after Rise. It will be about the adventure of our old friend, with some new friends, and a new chapter will be posted every day. The beginning is slow, like any good story, so just push through the bore.
(Jan. 27, 2021  6:08 PM)Spin Stealing Wrote: [ -> ]This is the story of what happened to Valt Aoi after Rise. It will be about the adventure of our old friend, with some new friends, and the crave for power, day after day, day after night (And guess what: First thread in over 2 days!!!) A new chapter will be posted every day.

cant wait to see the story :]
May I warn you, I am not the best storyteller......

Chapter one: Not doing so well....

"Grr" yelled Valt while he was practicing his blading skills with Slash Valtryek, due to the accident with Wonder Valtryek.... he was determined to upgrade his bey again. He craved for this feeling, and he needed it to survive this crazy Bey battle coming up. He was ready to start a new beginning with his Valtryek. He was using it as a tool, and not as a partner. "Listen, you must be in sync!" Said Xander, and he ignored. The next battle is the extreme reveal, as I call it, because this is what happened, with him and Xander:

Ready. Set.
3-2-1 let iiiiiiit RIP

Slash Valtryek was flying!

Xacluis kept hitting the walls

While he was doing that, Valtryek was gaining speed, getting more and more powerful

"Triple Saber!!!" Yelled Xander

And just like that, it was done.

"Come one, Valt. I know you are better than that. You barley did anything! You aren't in sync! That was a terrible battle. I am disappointed". And with that, Valt kept trying and trying, still just using his bey.....

Like it? You know what, I'll make more than one a day because they are really short
Good!!!!!!!!
Chapter 2: The dream

That night, he dreamed a dream that was, strange. He usually has normal dreams where you're in school and you look down just to see underwear. But this time, under those blue blankets in his dark room, he dreamed of Valtryek speaking to him. This is what it had to say:

Valt Aoi, we used to be partners. I remember when I was Victory Valtryek to Genesis, then Strike, Wonder, Brave, and now Slash. Now you are using me as a tool! I can do the same to you, and you know it. You have seen Beys do it to their partners. But yet you are doing it to me! How dare you!

Valt really thought about it during the night. He then decided to truly try to become partners again. He would not evolve it again until he has learned how to do so.

---

"Goooo Valtryek!" Valt yelled after a few weeks after the dream.

"Triple Saber!" Yelled Xander

Then, just like that, as soon as the hardly skid each other, Xaciluos burst.

Valt, I am ready, said Valtryek

Oof I almost gave up on this because no one read this at first
(Feb. 05, 2021  8:39 PM)Spin Stealing Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2: The dream

That night, he dreamed a dream that was, strange. He usually has normal dreams where you're in school and you look down just to see underwear. But this time, under those blue blankets in his dark room, he dreamed of Valtryek speaking to him. This is what it had to say:

Valt Aoi, we used to be partners. I remember when I was Victory Valtryek to Genesis, then Strike, Wonder, Brave, and now Slash. Now you are using me as a tool! I can do the same to you, and you know it. You have seen Beys do it to their partners. But yet you are doing it to me! How dare you!

Valt really thought about it during the night. He then decided to truly try to become partners again. He would not evolve it again until he has learned how to do so.

---

"Goooo Valtryek!" Valt yelled after a few weeks after the dream.

"Triple Saber!" Yelled Xander

Then, just like that, as soon as the hardly skid each other, Xaciluos burst.

Valt, I am ready, said Valtryek

Oof I almost gave up on this because no one read this at first

I shall serve as your motivation

And I shall bring people from my model threads here.

And me likey story.
(Feb. 05, 2021  8:45 PM)Heavy Spriggan Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 05, 2021  8:39 PM)Spin Stealing Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2: The dream

That night, he dreamed a dream that was, strange. He usually has normal dreams where you're in school and you look down just to see underwear. But this time, under those blue blankets in his dark room, he dreamed of Valtryek speaking to him. This is what it had to say:

Valt Aoi, we used to be partners. I remember when I was Victory Valtryek to Genesis, then Strike, Wonder, Brave, and now Slash. Now you are using me as a tool! I can do the same to you, and you know it. You have seen Beys do it to their partners. But yet you are doing it to me! How dare you!

Valt really thought about it during the night. He then decided to truly try to become partners again. He would not evolve it again until he has learned how to do so.

---

"Goooo Valtryek!" Valt yelled after a few weeks after the dream.

"Triple Saber!" Yelled Xander

Then, just like that, as soon as the hardly skid each other, Xaciluos burst.

Valt, I am ready, said Valtryek

Oof I almost gave up on this because no one read this at first

I shall serve as your motivation

And I shall bring people from my model threads here.

And me likey story.

Really? Wow, I appreciate that. Just remember that it is rude a annoying to advertise anything by spamming it into threads. But suggesting it is cool
(Feb. 05, 2021  8:47 PM)Spin Stealing Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 05, 2021  8:45 PM)Heavy Spriggan Wrote: [ -> ]I shall serve as your motivation

And I shall bring people from my model threads here.

And me likey story.

Really? Wow, I appreciate that. Just remember that it is rude a annoying to advertise anything by spamming it into threads. But suggesting it is cool
I said in MY threads, so its ok, and I wont spam
Chapter 3: The Final Evolution

Once Valt had heard that, he decided to head out on a journey to forge the final Valtryek. He traveled up the lands and all over the place. He then met a man named Reo, who said that he is the first one to discover bey evolution and that he had mastered it over the years. He said that he needed proof that this was his bey and that it had some bite to back up its bark. So, Valt launched it.

Three! Two! One! Let it Rip!!!

Slash Valtyrek went flying! It hit the center of the stadium and started to go around, slowly but surely, gaining speed. Then, it started to go around and around, faster and faster and then lightning boomed in the distance. Its deafening sound startled Valt that he fell down while Valtyrek kept spinning. Wind was flying everywhere and leaves were blowing off the trees surrounding the forest.

And now, Began old man Reo, STRIKE

A red bolt of lightning started swirling in the distance and it crash right in the center of Valtryek.

-

"Ugh," complained Valt, whilst trying to stand up after all of the excitement. "Wha- What happened?"

"Here you go, young one" Said Reo, and then walked away. Valt observed the new bey. It was black and red, nothing like Valtyrek has been before. The energy layer had 3 blades like any other Valtryek, but these were black with a slender red sleek running in the center of each one. The small lines of red met in the center, forming an upside-down 'V'. The forge disc was blitz, except that it was again black with small streaks of yellow on it, since yellow is the inverted color of blue. The driver was red with b lack spirals meeting at the top. Then Valt said,

Hello, corrupt Valtryek
GaspO I love it.
This is great!
Chapter 4 will be posted today, sorry that I skipped yesterday, had some internet issues.

Chapter 4: Free is Freed
While Valt was getting used to Corrupt Valtryek, he still has never used it in battle. This was weeks later and he was still acting like he had Slash Valtyrek, because he was saving that for somebody who he was still pondering whether or not he was still more powerful then him; Free. In the Evolution World Championship, he stressed himself until he couldn't move so he was forced to forfiet. While that, Free was not all all challenged. He was simply bursting some of the world's top 50 bladers. So, Valt decided to go after him with his Corrupt Valtryek. It was rumored that he was in Brazil, while Valt was still in Japan.

-

"Hm..." hummed Valt while he on an areoplane, wondering if Free had grown much stronger. They landed in a desert like airport that was hot and dry with massive cliffs in the distance that were plain and boring. People who were coming off of the airplane were groaning because of the dry heat. Valt was super excited, completely ignoring the heat. He ran to the nearest bus stop, going to the place where Free was staying, a blading school that he had forgot the name of because he's Valt.

-

Whole Valt was walking inside of the school, he saw Free battling some opponents.

"Hey! Free! So long no see!"

Free turned to Valt and just said hey

"I have a suprise for you. It's going to be good"

"Huh? Oh, ok"

The next thing either of them new, they were standing on opposite sides of a stadium.

Ready. Set.

Three

Two

One

Let it RIP!!!


The beys went flying! Free had Giest Fafnir at the moment, a spin stealing bey. Free noticed that Valt's bey was different. Nothing unusually, as it would have been unlikely he hadn't evolved his bey in the amount of time that they haven't seen each other. But this was different. It wasn't like any other Valtyrek. And, even stranger, it had a red trail of red behind it that was flashing and moving. Free was a bit confused, as he had never seen this kind of thing happen before.
"Valtryek! Finish him!"

And just like that, Fafnir had bursted. Now Free was truly suprised. Free had not done much because he had not been expecting this.

"One more match! Please!" Said Free

Valt was curious. This was not like Free, so he decided that it would be a good idea to do so.

-

Use Giest Steal! Yelled Free

Come one, Corrupt Valtryek! Use Electric Phase!

Then, suddenly, Free had heat emitting from him. His veins were pulsing through his skin.

It's time to exploded!

BSSSSHHHHHHH


Then, all there was were three parts of a bey flying through the air with red electricity traveling through each of them. When Free grabbed Fafnir, he saw that it had 3 orange wings popping out of it that were moving up and down, like an explosion and implosion. It was Explode Fafnir.

That was one of the longer chapters. So what I am planning to do is set up more rivals for Valt, but then after that, things will get more interesting
Chapter 5: Old rival; Ages clash

After this shocking event, the news TV in the corner. All the current students turned and looked at it.

"We bring you this news of a new event going throughout the blading world. People are calling it The Surge. No one quite knows what this means, but everyone is quite excited for it. Many people will be attending. We have brought requests to all of the top bladers in the world. These include:

Valt Aoi
Agier Akaba
Shu Koreni
Free DelaHoya
Drum Koryu
Ken Midori
Sisco Karlisle
Xander


They others have already declined their participation requests. If your name was stated here, please check in the nearest Beyblade School. And now for the weather forecast..."

"Wow! I am totally going to be there! Can't wait!" Excietly said Valt. "Are you going to go, Free?"

"Well, yeah, of course. It's another Beyblade Tourney. How could I not be there?"

Later that afternoon, Valt and Free checked in and discovered that everyone else on the list was attending, as well as a few others Valt didn't know the name of.

And now, let the Tourney begin!

I know that was a short one. This is because the last one took up all my time.... hope you like it anyhow!
Awesome! When are you going to post the next chapter?
Nice story
The next chapter? I post one every day (most of the time). Also, there a lot more characters coming than just he ones listed. As well as that, I want to bring back some good characters like Ken who just got tossed in the forgotten bucket. Also, I am now calling this: Burst Ages Clash

Chapter 7: The meeting

As we saw before, Valt and Free discovered their new beys and decided to use them in the Tourney. They then drove there, and then dropped by Japan, and so on until they got to the Tourney in cal, USA. There, they met everyone they had met and made an impact on them. They met Ken, Rantora, Diago, and Waykio from when Valt was in training. From when Valt advanced from his training and met the Big Four, Lui, Xander, Zac (ew Zac), and Shu, of course. Then they met up again with Aiger, Heji, and Captain.

"Wow! Look at this! Everyone's here!"

"I know, It is exciting, isn't it?"

The sound of everyone talking and greeting each other was very loud in that half-circle building. It was sticking out of the ground in the middle of the large city like someone took a giant glass ball, cut it in half, and laid it down on the ground. There were 5 different stadiums; there was the classic stadium, a rail stadium, a spike stadium with claws end to end of it making beys burst more often, a multi-story stadium, and last but no least, an accelerator stadium with a circle spinning around in the middle making beys go much fast, if not out of control. This was like every single big event and important person in burst history. It was truly amazing. This was going to be the biggest blading event in the last 100 years.

As some people may wonder, the exact time these chapters will be posted is 10:00am-2:00pm, Mon-Fri
Chapter 8: The first battles!

"So now that we have everyone here, lets get started! First, we have Laban Vs. Ken! Lets get started!"

As they entered the arena, they decided to choose the normal stadium with nothing special about it.

"Man, I'm excited for this!" Said Laben in an exciting tone

"So are we!" Yelled both of Ken's puppets.

Ready. Set.

3

2

1
Let it Rip!!!


Vise Leopard sped around the stadium at amazing speeds, while Kerbues took the center.

"You're going for the defense side? Well, you're about to be crushed! Go Vise Leopard!"

"Kerbues! Knock it back!"

As soon as Leopard hit it, it swung around and hit the wall of the stadium. Kerbues was still going strong, but it lost some stamina and was already starting to wobble. As soon as this started happenin, Leopard hit it and it ran out of stamina!

"Yes! We got it!"

Then, the second round began

Ready. Set.

3

2

1

Let it Rip!!!


Leopard is flying and Kerbues is taking the middle! Same strats, it seems. But wait! Kerbues is gaining speed!

"End this!' Yelled Ken's blue puppet

Leopard came in, but it's teeth at the ends of it seemed to to moving by themselves!

"Aaaaaaahhhh!"

Then, Leopard just burst Kerbues. Nothing else.
Woah. That's deep.
Bonus Chapter because the other one was so short

Chapter 9: Heji vs. Rantoro

After that extreme battle, Valt thought to himself how hard the competition was going to be. After witnessing that, he realized that everyone was practicing and getting way, way stronger. After that day, he practiced to learn more and more about Corrupt Valtryek, because they were still new to each other. He wanted to learn about something special that Valtryek could do... something... powerful...

-

"Lets go Valtryek! Use Electric Slice!"

Suddenly, Valtryek's black and red blades were connecting with dark red power. Someone who didn't know either of them would think this was evil, but looks can be deceiving.

Then, they bey dummy they were using exploded; not burst, but exploded into a million pieces of plastic.

"Hm, we're getting better..."

-

"Ok, folks! We are back with yet again an amazing battle about to happen! We have Hejira on one side, and Rantro in the other! The last battle was one to really remember throughout the rest of these battles. Now that Laben won, he needs to win 1 more battle to safely secure his spot in the next part, but Ken needs to step up his game if he even has a chance! Now, lets get blading!"

"Go big bro! You got this" Yelled Captain from one the spectator seats

"Lets do this fair and square" Said Heji

Ready. Set.

3

2

1

Let it Rip!!!


Roctavor took the center on the acceltor stadium and started to gain some real speed, real fast

"I must end this before he gets to fast. Go Hercules!"

Then it tried to hit Roctovor out of the stadium but it was just to fast, knocked back Hercules, and it then went into defense mode.

"I've got this one in the bag!"

Hercules just kept going around in the stadium, slowly loosing stamina, and then it just stopped spinning.

Lets do this, Archer Hercules... I know we can!

Ready. Set.

3

2

1

Let it Rip!!!


This time, things were different. Roctavor Went for the center, but got flown around right next to the walls of the stadium. It was going for what seemed 10,000 mph while Hercules did the same thing, but when it got flown off, it went back in, thus keeping it in attack mode.

"End this!"

Then, Hercules got a burst finished.

-

"Hey, good game out there, the both of you," said Valt to Heji and Rantoro.

"Thanks. It looks like Ken isn't the only one that has to step up there game..."

"Thank you. It is all in the launch angle and power."
Hey ya'll, so I am away for vaca, so this will continue in a few days or so. Sorry for the inconvenience!
Its ok! !!
Yeah no problem!
(Feb. 17, 2021  11:34 PM)Heavy Spriggan Wrote: [ -> ]Its ok! !!

(Feb. 17, 2021  11:42 PM)Luinor4Life Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah no problem!

Ya'll been waiting for it! A chapter will be posted tomorrow!

Also is there a way to rename a thread..?
(Feb. 22, 2021  4:45 AM)Spin Stealing Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 17, 2021  11:34 PM)Heavy Spriggan Wrote: [ -> ]Its ok! !!

(Feb. 17, 2021  11:42 PM)Luinor4Life Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah no problem!

Ya'll been waiting for it! A chapter will be posted tomorrow!

Also is there a way to rename a thread..?

Go to the first post hit the ... and hit full edit.
(Feb. 22, 2021  4:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 22, 2021  4:45 AM)Spin Stealing Wrote: [ -> ]Ya'll been waiting for it! A chapter will be posted tomorrow!

Also is there a way to rename a thread..?

Go to the first post hit the ... and hit full edit.

Thanks
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