World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc. - Beyblade Burst Nemesis’s Successor

This my new beyblade fan fic that replaces the ark were in right now in sparking. This series also replaces Hikaru and Hyuga with our golden boy Valt as the protagonist,

Beys and bladers

Valt - Brave Valkyrie
Shu -
Lane -
Lui -
Hikaru -
Hyuga -
Drum -
Free -
Aiga -
Sisco -
Rantaro -
Ranjiro -
Gwyn -
Arthur -
Phi -
Hearts -
Delta -
Wakiya -
Blind -
Diana -
Damian - Ultimate Meteo L Drago Absorb

Nemesis? Oh wow lol.
For Uranus you should do Uranus The Last

(Dec. 14, 2020 10:52 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Nemesis? Oh wow lol.
For Uranus you should do Uranus The Last

Well Lane hasn’t evolved Uranus because he has Lucifer

Your forgetting Daina, And Wakiya

(Dec. 14, 2020 10:53 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Your forgetting Daina, And Wakiya

Wakiya doesn’t battle in this series he’s more of a intel guy (you’ll see why) and I’m still thinking about putting Diana in the series since he’s barely even gonna do anything

(Dec. 14, 2020 10:57 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020 10:53 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Your forgetting Daina, And Wakiya
Wakiya doesn’t battle in this series he’s more of a intel guy (you’ll see why) and I’m still thinking about putting Diana in the series since he’s barely even gonna do anything

You could put the bey he would own called Hollow Deathsycther

(Dec. 14, 2020 10:58 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020 10:57 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Wakiya doesn’t battle in this series he’s more of a intel guy (you’ll see why) and I’m still thinking about putting Diana in the series since he’s barely even gonna do anything

You could put the bey he would own called Hollow Deathsycther

But everyone has there respective role (and for some people some of the roles is just satisfaction for them) Diana would just not really fit. Like he could come as a cameo but not much else.

Sad Daina music plays

Hyuga side character?

So do the rankings change or no?

(Dec. 14, 2020 11:02 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]So do the rankings change or no?

No, everything’s the same

(Dec. 14, 2020 11:01 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]Hyuga side character?

Yep Valt is the protagonist

Beyblade Burst Nemesis’s Successor #0 “Prologue”

Valt: Brave Sword!

Yellow glowing swords appear on Valkyries wings making Valkyries attack stronger. Valkyrie then hits Ragnaruk out of the stadium giving Valt the win.

Ranjiro: Uhh come on! I was so close!
Valt: Hey, don’t beat yourself up to much. You did good!
Ranjiro: Thanks!

Rantaro then walks into the training facility.

Rantaro: So how’s my brother doing?!
Valt: He’s doing pretty good! Maybe even as good as you!
Rantaro: What!
Valt: Yep!
Rantaro: Ok we’ll see about that! Battle me little bro!
Ranjiro: Ok then. I’m just warning you, you’ll lose.
Rantaro: That’s a chance I’m willing to take.

Ranjiro and Rantaro are about to battle but then they get interrupted by Wakiya running into the room. Wakiya then stands there trying to catch his breath.

Valt: Hey Wakiya what are you doing here? I thought you were planning the tournament.
Wakiya: Yeah I’m gonna do that but something important just came in and I think you need to see this.
Valt: Ok, what is it?

Wakiya then brings Valt and the others to his office and pulls up the newest wbbo match coming up. On the screen there was Lane and a masked blader with white hair and a black mask covering his mouth and the top right of his face only revealing a 40 degree angle of his face.

Valt: Ok? I don’t see the problem.
Wakiya: I know but let me show you.

Wakiya then pulls up the masked bladers bey which was called Synthetic Revenant and had the parts 2A and destroy’. Valt then reads the name of the bey and his face goes to shock.

Valt: Oh no.

what do you think

Also

Pretty good prologue. So let me guess the person who owns Synthetic Revenant is the final boss?

(Dec. 14, 2020 11:19 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Pretty good prologue. So let me guess the person who owns Synthetic Revenant is the final boss?

Yeah. I wonder why Valts face went into shock though

(Dec. 14, 2020 11:20 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020 11:19 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Pretty good prologue. So let me guess the person who owns Synthetic Revenant is the final boss?

Yeah. I wonder why Valts face went into shock though

Cause he had a trauma back in his childhood lol

(Dec. 14, 2020 11:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020 11:20 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Yeah. I wonder why Valts face went into shock though

Cause he had a trauma back in his childhood lol

He got bite of 83’d lol

(Dec. 14, 2020  11:04 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020  11:02 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]So do the rankings change or no?

No, everything’s the same

(Dec. 14, 2020  11:01 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: [ -> ]Hyuga side character?

Yep Valt is the protagonist

Beyblade Burst Nemesis’s Successor #0 “Prologue”

Valt: Brave Sword!

Yellow glowing swords appear on Valkyries wings making Valkyries attack stronger. Valkyrie then hits Ragnaruk out of the stadium giving Valt the win.

Ranjiro: Uhh come on! I was so close!
Valt: Hey, don’t beat yourself up to much. You did good!
Ranjiro: Thanks!

Rantaro then walks into the training facility.

Rantaro: So how’s my brother doing?!
Valt: He’s doing pretty good! Maybe even as good as you!
Rantaro: What!
Valt: Yep!
Rantaro: Ok we’ll see about that! Battle me little bro!
Ranjiro: Ok then. I’m just warning you, you’ll lose.
Rantaro: That’s a chance I’m willing to take.

Ranjiro and Rantaro are about to battle but then they get interrupted by Wakiya running into the room. Wakiya then stands there trying to catch his breath.

Valt: Hey Wakiya what are you doing here? I thought you were planning the tournament.
Wakiya: Yeah I’m gonna do that but something important just came in and I think you need to see this.
Valt: Ok, what is it?

Wakiya then brings Valt and the others to his office and pulls up the newest wbbo match coming up. On the screen there was Lane and a masked blader with white hair and a black mask covering his mouth and the top right of his face only revealing a 40 degree angle of his face.

Valt: Ok? I don’t see the problem.
Wakiya: I know but let me show you.

Wakiya then pulls up the masked bladers bey which was called Synthetic Revenant and had the parts 2A and destroy’. Valt then reads the name of the bey and his face goes to shock.

Valt: Oh no.

what do you think

Also

Nice dialogue bit bland though.

When you realize its gonna get scary
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(Dec. 14, 2020 11:58 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020 11:04 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]No, everything’s the same

Yep Valt is the protagonist

Beyblade Burst Nemesis’s Successor #0 “Prologue”

Valt: Brave Sword!

Yellow glowing swords appear on Valkyries wings making Valkyries attack stronger. Valkyrie then hits Ragnaruk out of the stadium giving Valt the win.

Ranjiro: Uhh come on! I was so close!
Valt: Hey, don’t beat yourself up to much. You did good!
Ranjiro: Thanks!

Rantaro then walks into the training facility.

Rantaro: So how’s my brother doing?!
Valt: He’s doing pretty good! Maybe even as good as you!
Rantaro: What!
Valt: Yep!
Rantaro: Ok we’ll see about that! Battle me little bro!
Ranjiro: Ok then. I’m just warning you, you’ll lose.
Rantaro: That’s a chance I’m willing to take.

Ranjiro and Rantaro are about to battle but then they get interrupted by Wakiya running into the room. Wakiya then stands there trying to catch his breath.

Valt: Hey Wakiya what are you doing here? I thought you were planning the tournament.
Wakiya: Yeah I’m gonna do that but something important just came in and I think you need to see this.
Valt: Ok, what is it?

Wakiya then brings Valt and the others to his office and pulls up the newest wbbo match coming up. On the screen there was Lane and a masked blader with white hair and a black mask covering his mouth and the top right of his face only revealing a 40 degree angle of his face.

Valt: Ok? I don’t see the problem.
Wakiya: I know but let me show you.

Wakiya then pulls up the masked bladers bey which was called Synthetic Revenant and had the parts 2A and destroy’. Valt then reads the name of the bey and his face goes to shock.

Valt: Oh no.

what do you think

Also
Nice dialogue bit bland though.

What’s bland about it? Can you be more pacific so I can make it better in the next chapter

(Dec. 14, 2020 11:59 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]When you realize its gonna get scary

Or is it

(Dec. 15, 2020 12:00 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 14, 2020 11:58 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Nice dialogue bit bland though.

What’s bland about it? Can you be more pacific so I can make it better in the next chapter

More emotion in the talking is what I mean

(Dec. 15, 2020 12:00 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 15, 2020 12:00 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]What’s bland about it? Can you be more pacific so I can make it better in the next chapter
More emotion in the talking is what I mean

Ok I can do that

We need to scare Alex

(Dec. 15, 2020 12:01 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]We need to scare Alex

I think I could add some creepy elements

Or........
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(Dec. 15, 2020 12:05 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Or........

Freddy isn’t coming to this series lol

(Dec. 15, 2020 12:06 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 15, 2020 12:05 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: [ -> ]Or........

Freddy isn’t coming to this series lol

I know but its to make Alex tremble lol