Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM
Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:25 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
Include cookie monster.
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:26 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]I will, I’ll probably make bloopers for a group of chapters and I’ll add those characters(Oct. 20, 2020 1:26 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]I was thinking more of characters from fnaf because this story is gonna get pretty deep
Ok, but can you please add cookie monster, or big bird.
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:31 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 20, 2020 1:28 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]I will, I’ll probably make bloopers for a group of chapters and I’ll add those characters
Thank you. Cookie monster is my idol (not actually)
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:47 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Fazbears fright #0 “the beginning”
Waitress:”good morning, I hope your having a nice day. Here’s your breakfast”
Matt: “Thanks ma’am I hope your having a good day too”
Waitress: “do you need any refills or anything”
Matt: “No thanks ma’am”
Waitress: “alright just tell me when to give you the check. Enjoy your meal sir”
Matt: “alright thanks ma’am.”
Matt: “I only have enough money to get this one plate of food for today, but that’s fine.”
*phone rings*
Matt: “Hello? Who’s this”
Phone guy: “HeLlO We’Re CaLlInG Fr0m FaZbEaRs EnTeRtAiNmEnt LoOkInG FoR A NeW SeCuRiTy GuArD....”
Matt: “Hey your cutting out. You still there?”
Phone guy: “We’Re MaKiNg A NeW *fixes mic* establishment called fazbears fright”
Matt: “ Alright also thanks for fixing the mic”
Phone guy” no problem, we’re just facing some technical difficulties here since it’s new”
Matt: “alright what’s this place called”
Phone guy: “fazbears fright the horror attraction”
Matt: “alright but first thing. How did you get my number? Not like I’m saying I won’t take the job because I need a job since my apartments about to be closed”
Phone guy: “Yeah like it’s totally taken care of, we just need a security guard”
Matt: “I understand but like how did you get my number?”
Phone guy: “that doesn’t matter. We just need a security guard. You’ll be working from midnight to 6 in the morning. Sorry if I messed up your day it’s just I’ve been calling people all day your just the only one that picked up”
Matt: “oh whatever man. When do I come to get the interview”
Phone guy: “just come tomorrow morning and we can have it”
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:31 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]Thank you. Cookie monster is my idol (not actually)
I finished the prologue if you wanna read it and give me a score of how I did
cheetoblader this is my prologue for my fan fic and I would like for you to rate it since I’ve seen you rate some other fan fics
(Oct. 20, 2020 3:09 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]I like it but it’s so predictable it’s basically the fnaf 4 story just with a tiny difference because it’s a fan fiction. I would rate this like a 9/10 if it was actually a unique story but since it’s basically like fnaf 4 I give it a 4/10.
(Oct. 20, 2020 3:38 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]I mean fnaf 3 fazbears fright, spring trap, broken animatronics, etc(Oct. 20, 2020 3:09 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]I like it but it’s so predictable it’s basically the fnaf 4 story just with a tiny difference because it’s a fan fiction. I would rate this like a 9/10 if it was actually a unique story but since it’s basically like fnaf 4 I give it a 4/10.
How’s it fnaf 4? In fnaf 4 you play as Michael afton (the brother of the bite of 83 victim) getting tortured in his dreams by golden freddy
Also we haven’t even got into the plot this is just basically introducing the characters
(Oct. 20, 2020 4:17 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 20, 2020 3:38 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]How’s it fnaf 4? In fnaf 4 you play as Michael afton (the brother of the bite of 83 victim) getting tortured in his dreams by golden freddyI mean fnaf 3 fazbears fright, spring trap, broken animatronics, etc
Also we haven’t even got into the plot this is just basically introducing the characters
(Oct. 20, 2020 4:29 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]The security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that(Oct. 20, 2020 4:17 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]I mean fnaf 3 fazbears fright, spring trap, broken animatronics, etc
Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever done
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
(Oct. 21, 2020 5:57 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 20, 2020 4:29 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever doneThe security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
(Oct. 21, 2020 8:18 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]He wouldn’t have took the job if he knew moving animatronics that can murder him are here. He probably thought those were just rumors and this place was made around these rumors.(Oct. 21, 2020 5:57 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]The security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that
I like those ideas I might use them. The security guard isn’t really panicked he’s really just weirded out. Also he did research on the franchise and mystery’s so he would’ve already heard of this.
(Oct. 21, 2020 8:38 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 21, 2020 8:18 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]I like those ideas I might use them. The security guard isn’t really panicked he’s really just weirded out. Also he did research on the franchise and mystery’s so he would’ve already heard of this.He wouldn’t have took the job if he knew moving animatronics that can murder him are here. He probably thought those were just rumors and this place was made around these rumors.
(Oct. 21, 2020 5:57 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 20, 2020 4:29 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Oh well we haven’t got into the plot yet and trust me this is something no fnaf game has ever doneThe security guard seems way to calm for too long seeing a broken down animatronic moving. Everything else is pretty good like how he can’t leave the pizzeria. Here’s a good ending to the story, these are just ideas it’s up to you though. During the day shift he goes crazy while people are touring the attraction screaming “run” or he will catch you! Then this was reported to the head manager, William Afton (I know he’s in springtrap suit but still) another alternate ending could be he gets trapped in there forever something like that
Fazbears fright #2 “the first night”
The bunny: “you must be the new security guard.”
Matt: “uhhh, yeah. Your not supposed to be doing that. What’s going on?! How are you talking and moving around?”
The bunny: “well aren’t we a smart cookie. What you will know and what I will find out, will be in the future.”
Matt: “what does that mean?”
The bunny: “you’ll find out”
Matt: “ok bunny, can you go back to the stage or wherever you came from”
The bunny: “I’m not named bunny! My name is springtrap, and I’m gonna enjoy torturing you.”
Matt: “ok I’m sorry springtrap. And hey you don’t have to say stuff like that we can be friends.”
Springtrap: “do you not know who I am?”
Matt: “um, I mean, I think i do. I did some research on the franchise.”
Springtrap: “hmm, you might live a night or two. Now I’m gonna find more fun things to do.”
Matt: “um, what?”
Springtrap: “I’ll be able to get in sooner or later.”
Matt gets panicked thinking of what he could do to defend himself from springtrap. He looks at his door and closes it. But then a voice comes from the vents.
Balloon boy: “hello!”
Matt: “um,hi?”
Balloon boy: “hey, can I come in?”
*springtrap then talks over the microphone connected through the building*
Springtrap: “balloon you idiot. He’s not gonna let you in.”
Balloon boy: “hey at least I tried.”
Springtrap mutters: “you stupid statue”
Matt then looks at his door it first had the number 100% but now it says 95%. Matt then made the connection he probably has a limited amount of power. He then finds a book from a past security guard that has wrote what to do against all the animatronics. He sees the page called balloon boy it says “to get rid of balloon just flash him with your flashlight”. Matt then does that and balloon boy crawls away from the vent.
Springtrap: “nightguard, power”
Matt: “what do you mean there’s nothing wrong with my power.”
He then looks at his power and it’s at 75% some how. Springtrap then darts at his door but Matt was able to close it in time. Matt looks back and Springtrap has disappeared. He opens back his door in confusion. He looks at his watch it said 1 am. Matt then whispered to himself “just 5 more hours” to calm himself down. Matt then has to fend against animatronics the rest of the night till 6 am.
*at 6am*
Springtrap: “we’ll be back”
Matt: “alright, sure you will.”
Matt then thinks “I need to get out of here” he then books it to the door but then when he gets out of the pizzeria he gets teleported back to the office, He try’s it again but then gets teleported back to the office. He then makes the connection that he now is trapped here.
I’ll be posting 2 chapters a day
(Oct. 23, 2020 1:35 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Fazbears frights #3 “the choice”okay this is actually really good lol also on chapter two how is he in his room when he is trapped in the fnaf 3 location? Was his room just the security office? I didn’t get that part. my rating goes to a 8/10 few grammar mistakes but chapter three just wow that was good and fixed the last chapters that were not the best
Matt wakes up to see a note on his bed saying “come to the gift box”. Matt goes to the gift box to see the puppet is there. He walks in very hesitant but the puppet waves for him to come in.
Puppet: Thank you for coming here
Matt: why do you want me here puppet? You want to kill me?
Puppet: no, I do not desire to do such thing. And you can call me by my real name Charlie
Matt: Wait your names Charlie? Not from the franchise, your names the puppet
Puppet: it’s the name I had when I was still a child. Do you not remember who I am?
Matt: no? How would I
Puppet: You don’t remember do you?
Matt: remember what?
Puppet: Michael please come back to me
Matt’s past memories then flash back to him. How he killed his brother with the fredbear animatronic, how he got scooped, and how he set the last location to a blaze.
Charlie: do you now remember?
Michael: yes I do. Thanks for getting my memory’s back
Charlie: it’s alright but this isn’t what I called you back here for. This place is not a real pizzeria, we were sent here by someone. I don’t know who though. But we must free everyone. I tried to free freddy on my own but it didn’t work. I need your help Michael, to free Gabriel and everyone else.
Michael: alright, wait you said there’s other spirits here. Who are they?
Charlie: well there’s Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, Frits, Kelsey, Andrew, and your father. We must free them all, even your father. He was not in the right straight of mind when he killed us, so he is technically innocent like us all.
Michael: alright who are we doing first
Charlie: on your 3rd night come to my gift box and I will tell you how we will save Gabriel
Michael: alright then, I’ll see you tonight
(Oct. 23, 2020 2:17 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 23, 2020 1:35 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Fazbears frights #3 “the choice”okay this is actually really good lol also on chapter two how is he in his room when he is trapped in the fnaf 3 location? Was his room just the security office? I didn’t get that part. my rating goes to a 8/10 few grammar mistakes but chapter three just wow that was good and fixed the last chapters that were not the best
Matt wakes up to see a note on his bed saying “come to the gift box”. Matt goes to the gift box to see the puppet is there. He walks in very hesitant but the puppet waves for him to come in.
Puppet: Thank you for coming here
Matt: why do you want me here puppet? You want to kill me?
Puppet: no, I do not desire to do such thing. And you can call me by my real name Charlie
Matt: Wait your names Charlie? Not from the franchise, your names the puppet
Puppet: it’s the name I had when I was still a child. Do you not remember who I am?
Matt: no? How would I
Puppet: You don’t remember do you?
Matt: remember what?
Puppet: Michael please come back to me
Matt’s past memories then flash back to him. How he killed his brother with the fredbear animatronic, how he got scooped, and how he set the last location to a blaze.
Charlie: do you now remember?
Michael: yes I do. Thanks for getting my memory’s back
Charlie: it’s alright but this isn’t what I called you back here for. This place is not a real pizzeria, we were sent here by someone. I don’t know who though. But we must free everyone. I tried to free freddy on my own but it didn’t work. I need your help Michael, to free Gabriel and everyone else.
Michael: alright, wait you said there’s other spirits here. Who are they?
Charlie: well there’s Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, Frits, Kelsey, Andrew, and your father. We must free them all, even your father. He was not in the right straight of mind when he killed us, so he is technically innocent like us all.
Michael: alright who are we doing first
Charlie: on your 3rd night come to my gift box and I will tell you how we will save Gabriel
Michael: alright then, I’ll see you tonight
(Oct. 23, 2020 11:05 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Oh that’s kinda cool but a bit odd lol(Oct. 23, 2020 2:17 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ]okay this is actually really good lol also on chapter two how is he in his room when he is trapped in the fnaf 3 location? Was his room just the security office? I didn’t get that part. my rating goes to a 8/10 few grammar mistakes but chapter three just wow that was good and fixed the last chapters that were not the best
Thanks, and his room isn’t the office. This isnt the fnaf 3 location it’s a different fazbears fright and there’s a room that the nightguard can sleep in
It’s in the left of the security room
(Oct. 20, 2020 1:25 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ](Oct. 20, 2020 1:24 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Ok this is for my fnaf fan fic I’m making. I will be posting the chapters here for you all to read. If you have any ideas for characters you can suggest them to me through here or in dms.
Include cookie monster.