(Oct. 24, 2020 3:24 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Oct. 24, 2020 3:17 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: [ -> ]Fazbears fright #5 “the logbook”
Michael wakes up in his office and finds a logbook on his lap. It was a fazbear logbook but it was flipped to the last page with the letter C written in a faded like text. Michael then remembered spirits can talk to people by making their own faded text in books. So he thought it was Charlie communicating to him. He goes to the gift box to meet Charlie to see what she was trying to say.
Michael: hey Charlie I found this logbook here that you were trying to talk to me in. So what did you want to tell me?
Charlie: No i didn’t. If I wanted to talk to you I would send you hallucinations or notes like I always do.
Michael: wait if this isn’t you then why is it written in faded text.
Charlie: I have fingers dude I can write with a pencil. But what did it even say,
Michael: it just says C
Charlie: weird but I think it’s connected to something
Michael: and what’s that?
Charlie brings Michael to the room where Gabriel had his birthday and on the wall written in the fake blood “stop”. Michael was confused reading it thinking Charlie was pulling a prank on him. But Charlie looked concerned. Charlie sat Henry down to talk to him.
Charlie: you know how I said this pizzeria is fake
Michael: yeah what about that
Charlie: well, turns out that someone or something is in control of this place and I think it’s the one that wrote that on the wall. And the one that wrote C in the logbook. And since it’s a spirit text then someone is in control here.
Michael then looked down thinking. Who could this mysterious spirit be. And why did the spirit not one them to free the souls and write C in the logbook.
Charlie: anyway the next spirit we’re going to free is Jeremy who possesses Bonnie
Michael: alright so tell me about him so we can think of a way to free him
Charlie: well he was a kid that really liked music and wanted a guitar. He was supposed to get a guitar on his birthday but then was killed by your father.
Michael: alright then we should give him a guitar
Charlie: yeah, isn’t there a guitar we could use to give it to him
Michael: yeah it’s from the old toy Bonnie models guitar from the 1987 location
Charlie: alright is it in good condition
Michael: it’s in pretty decent condition I could fix it up and have it read again at 5 am tomorrow
Charlie: alright sounds good
The 2 plan to give Bonnie his guitar at 5 am tomorrow and set his soul free. But it seems like there is another spirit in control of this place.
???: uhh, they’re ruining my plans. Maybe I’ll give them someone else tonight to have fun with
That was good I like how they give him something to remember his past which would free their spirit and I like how Charlie is going around with Michael helping him to free every spirit. The last sentence was cool and amonous But was worded a bit weirdly. And there were a few grammar issues all I say you could improve on is some grammar but that’s all. 9/10 is my rating
Thank you for your response I’ll work on my grammar on the next one
Fazbears fright #6 “The black freddy”
Michael finds the guitar and puts it in his security room and starts working on it. But something interrupts Michael when he’s fixing the guitar. He sees a black freddy walk through a wall. He comes out of the security room and it seems like the freddy is looking for something. Michael then saw Charlie hiding behind a table. Carlie waves at him to come to her. Michael sneaks behind the tables and reaches Charlie.
Michael: What is that thing?
Charlie: I don’t know. But all I know is that is not a animatronic.
Michael: It doesn’t look like its physical since it can walk through walls.
Charlie: It’s almost like it’s a projection.
Michael: Yeah, but I need to head to my office. It’s almost 12 am and the animatronics are probably about to wake up.
Charlie: Alright I’ll try to do the same thing like I did yesterday.
Michael runs back to his office to work on the guitar. He closes his door has to fend against the animatronics. But sometimes the black freddy would come into the office and look around. He hid in the vents when it was in the office but he noticed it could float. But Charlie did a good job luring it and the others away and eventually Michael finished the guitar.
*5 am*
Michael meets Charlie at the gift box and they meet Bonnie.
Charlie: Hey Jermey my friend here Michael has a gift for you.
Bonnie: Puppet who is Jeremy? Also why are you not attacking the human. Is your programming ok?
Michael then hands Bonnie the guitar and the memory’s returned to Bonnie and he realized where he was.
Jermey: Thank you for the guitar. This is a guitar I always wanted on my birthday.
Tears start coming out of Bonnie’s eyes and he hugs Charlie and Michael. Black smoke then come out of Bonnie and it blinds Charlie and Michael. When they could see again they see Bonnie with his guitar in his hand smiling.
Charlie: Good job Michael. Now his soul is free like Gabriel’s.
Michael: Thanks but you did good too Charlie.
Charlie then looks behind her in shock. Michael looks behind him to see the black freddy staring at them. The black freddy then attacks Michael and Charlie. Michael wakes up in his office, but something was different. His skin looked more rotten. Michael runs to see Charlie and when he finds Charlie he finds her but more broken down. There were holes in her suit and face.
Michael: What happened? And are you ok?
Charlie: Yeah I’m fine, but what about you. You look more rotten.
Michael: Yeah I don’t know why. I think the black freddy was responsible for it though.
Charlie: Yeah it was probably responsible for my animatronic being more broken.
Michael then finds a urge to look at the logbook for some reason. But finds in the logbook there is another letter. It was the letter A.
Charlie: What are you looking at?
Michael: The letter A is now written in the spirit text in my logbook.
Charlie: It seems like every time we free a spirit a letter appears.
Michael: Yeah it does.
Charlie: We should keep an eye on that logbook now to see if it says anything.
Michael: Yeah we should.
Michael then goes to his room for a nap whole Charlie rests in her gift box.
???: Uhh, they got Jermey too. WHY DO THEY HAVE TOO RUIN MY PLANS! My Shadow Freddy should take care of them though.