(Aug. 03, 2020 6:20 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ] (Aug. 03, 2020 3:37 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: [ -> ]um this actually the dual Layer era, not the superking or the God layer era, Lane is 5 seasons too early to apear, Akira is good, Free is 1 season too early to appear so make some other characters, like Gabe, Jin, Naoki, Wakiya, and other bois
some backstory of Bonnie
no spoiler
im going to skip every detail like how Byakuya and Bonnie Disbanded from a team, who was one of the members of The Supreme 4 on Bonnie's Radar, etc.
So Bonnie was just an ordinary blader who wanted to be top (Skip Timeline no spoilers) Bonnie is Different from any other villain, Like Zenos, Tyrant
(the next characters are not mine shoutout to ,Courtesy and Ownership of The characters owns to him not mine, remember this is just a Example), Zaida, Cole, And Nova, and etc. Who sees the main character as a pain in the neck, He is much more of an Hisoka type villain, Who Saves some bladers for the last so that they will be worthy Destroying the blader, That's the case for (spoiler). So yeah, Bonnie won't be very savage, he is Chaotic Neutral.
Thanks for the shoutout my guy, but uh Zaida isnt the villain of her series, Vallery is.
oh wait sory I'll correct it
Synopsis-This takes place on the events of Burst 1st season, Trio buddies, Keishi Ichisuno, Mikazuki Kageyama and Emily Hagakure are Normal Bladers until they meet a dramatic Stage player kid, a Serious blader with a Darker past and a whacky Foreign Russian-Japanese Exchange student, They also met the Beigoma Kids and try to fight them but little did they know that an Dangerous Blader with a strong blader trys to lock on to Keishi, This is an adventure of friendship, Rivalry, Alliance and Comedy where they meet familiar faces and Brand new ones
Ep-5 Grim Attack!
*At School*
Emily:Why are you here?
Byakuya:Oh I Hereby Tell Something to Keishi Ichisuno!
Emily:*becomes Irritated* the only reason your here is to Trap us Again like what you did to Keish
Byakuya:oh no no no……. we are alone promise
Mikazuki:Proof?
Byakuya:The girls did not notice me…….
*Points at the Schoolyard where all girls are*
Mikazuki:ok spit it out
Byakuya:Well remember When you Defeated Valt and Shu?
Mikazuki:HEY HOW DI-----
*Emily stops Mikazuki*
Emily:*dark aura activates*don't get us teamed…..
Mikazuki:I'm terribly sorry
Byakuya:no need, but one of their Club members has a bounty to you three.
*dramatic Suspense Scene*
The Three:Nani?
Byakuya:that kid is no way to be trifled or take too lightly, he is called
*later*
Emily:who
Keishi:is
Mikazuki:Daigo?
Emily:but anyways, he left us a clue on his bey
Keishi:he said…..
*Flashbacks*
Byakuya:i will give a clue to his bey, he is one who appears when you die, He wears a hood with a cape covering his body, a face of a human skeleton and holds a tool, a big tool, he is the one reason in European mythology people feared him*
*Flashbacks ends*
Emily:I don't know what he meant?
Keishi:lets see……. he has a hood, a cape that covers his body, A face of a skeleton, and,
Everyone:!
Mikazuki:*gulps*DON'T TELL ME……..
Emily:Y-y-your kidding!!!!!
Keishi:*grim Terrified face*Nope he wasn't…… really wasn't
the three:a grim reaper?????
???:correct….
Keishi:?
Emily:?
Mikazuki:?
Daigo:yo, my name is Daigo Kurogami!
Keishi:!
Keishi:BINGO! DEATH!!!!!!
Daigo:?
Emily:Eh?????
Mikazuki:Nani?????
Daigo:yes…..
Daigo:I was hoping that you were thrilling but I just met a bunch of Immature Simpletons!
Keishi:PUNK! REPEAT THAT AGAI----
Daigo:my bey will make your beys dig their graves
Daigo:Meet your demise! Destroyer Doomscizor!
*later*
Byakuya:His name is Daigo? i know that name,
Emily:then who was that freak?
Byakuya:he's a member of Beigoma
The Trio:Beigoma?
Byakuya:it's a prestigious school actually, that's where legend Valt Aoi Study and the Supreme 4 Shu also
Keishi:never thought someone from a different school would send an Hitman
Byakuya:he is no hitman, He is a Grim reaper…..
Keishi:we know!
Keishi:but now what? we don't the power of his bey, He looks strong but how strong is he?
Byakuya:That is what I'm wondering about…..
Mikazuki:but it looks like he has some Type of Scythe in one of his blades…..
Keishi:good idea, but that might be design
Mikazuki:good point
*later*
Daigo:so you have Came? took you so long
Keishi:I came how you promised
Daigo:then let's duel?
*Battle stance*
Daigo:Ready set!
Daigo and Keishi:3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!!!
*both Beys lands on the stadium*
Daigo:DOOMSCIZOR!
*Doomscizor's Scythe Shines and hits Kirin very hard*
Keishi:Woah Hey there bud……
Keishi:That was an attack but not enough!
*Kirin recovers and Hits Doomscizor*
Daigo:*grins*you thought you could Loose me then think again!!
Daigo:GO DOOMSCIZOR! QUAKE LAUNCH!!!!!
*Doomscizor makes an After images and unpredictably Hits Kirin*
Keishi:After images????
*Kirin Recovers*
Keishi:*in mind*I'll have to Do something like a special Move, but how?
*Flashbacks*
Shu:the more you are connected, the more stronger your bond is….
*Flashback ends*
Keishi:Shu, thank you for the reminder
Keishi:hey, Kirin! need some assistance here!
*Kirin's layer shines*
Keishi:Now! KI SLAM SECOND VARIANT:BURSTING DISCHARGE!!!!!!
*Kirin's avatar appears and speeds up and channels all its energy to the big blades*
Daigo:NOT LETTING YOU! DOOMSCIZOR!!!!!! HUNT LAUNCH!!!!!!
*Doomscizor Utilizes Jaggy and heads towards Kirin*
the both:AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
*both clashes and Doomscizor bursts*
Daigo:Gah…..
*Doomscizor's parts flies away out of the stadium*
Keishi:yeah get noscoped!
Daigo:I respect you, Nevermind i change my mind to you….
Keishi:Too embarrassing, just say good game….
Daigo:but that was not the last of me
Keishi:sound like your preparing malicious Purposes
Daigo:you said now bye……
*Later*
Daigo:*Pats Valt in the shoulders* be careful when teaching that twerp.
Valt:don't worry I'll be careful next time
Daigo:*huffs*lets go
???:they are also aware that he is evolving
???:not now, my bey, we will battle when the time comes
*the end*
now some additional rule when creating your characters
ALL parts, characters, Story
MUST BE in the
DUAL LAYER SYSTEM ERA, Characters like Free, Lane, Fubuki, Aiger, Silas, etc.
IS NOT ALLOWED IN THE FRIENDS OR RELATIONSHIPS LIST, Parts like Chassis like 1A, 2D, 2A, 1D, Mobius, Number coded discs (such as 10,11,4,12,3,6),and other parts not in the Burst Era
IS NOT Allowed also
AND ALSO ALL CHARACTERS MUST BE IN THE 1ST SEASON, NOT SECOND OR ANYTHING, JUST THE 1ST SEASON
also The submissions will be closed tomorrow
Episode List 2 (6-10) (the Tournament arc)
6-Red, Hot Flaming Demon
7-Apocalypse? Now!
8-Legendary Snowing Bigfoot
9-Dog Guard from the Underworld
10-Finals! Handless dragon
mily has an point….. 
ign up for an District tournament! 
k 3v1, don't cry when we corner you! 
ual spin Stamina type Gravity Claw 4 Wings 2 Go in 2 go out Orange black and Green see pokemon Kapu koeko
ARTNER!!!!!!!!