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This is a fan fiction I worked on which ended up Winning ‘s Writing Contest. I wanted to share the first chapter, and will probably continue work on the second one at some point in between A Beyblade’s Bizarre Adventure chapters. This fan fiction is another crossover, this time being Beyblade Burst and Death Note.

Warning: This fan fiction contains content that is 13+. Read at your own risk.

Anyways, Bey Note:

Bey Note

Prologue: Shu is an 18 year old senior who goes to a high school in Japan. Only a few months remain before he finishes 12th grade and would be off to college a few months after. He has a stay at home mom and a dad who works with the police force in his town in Japan. He lives in a neighborhood which was inside the city he lived in, so he was considered middle class. One Friday heading home to school is about to change his life forever.

The Story
Never read or watched Death Note before (but its insanely popular and my friends watch it, so of course non-fans would know the basics and characters even without reading/watching), but I think this is interesting so far! I like how well you crossed two different series together into something that isnt outlandish as other crossovers. It has the potential to be its own original idea, too C: awesome so far
Maybe you should add that this is 13+? Anyways this is a great idea
(Jul. 13, 2020  1:44 AM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]Maybe you should add that this is 13+? Anyways this is a great idea

That’s actually probably a good idea. Also thanks.
(Jul. 13, 2020  1:47 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jul. 13, 2020  1:44 AM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]Maybe you should add that this is 13+? Anyways this is a great idea

That’s actually probably a good idea. Also thanks.

No prob dude
Death Note is next on my never ending list of anime, but ill check this out


Also should I watch Death Note before I read this?
(Jul. 13, 2020  2:18 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: [ -> ]Death Note is next on my never ending list of anime, but ill check this out


Also should I watch Death Note before I read this?

I am wanting to make this crossover more unique than my previous one, so it will likely not have plot points Death Note has. I would not worry too much about spoilers for Death Note, but it is possible major spoilers will stay in this crossover, so I might watch Death Note before going far into this fan fiction.
Death note plus Beyblade? I SEE THIS IS AN ABSOLUTE WIN!

(bruv pls hate me cuz i dont watch death note :(.......)
Chapter 2: Encounter
Again, this is amazing so far. Love the nicely-paced dialogue and the mood the story sets up so far