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This is my new story! It is set to have 13 chapters, expect 1-2 every month

Plot
It has been 5 years after beyblade burst had just been released, and Ketto just enrolled into Girato Academy. He wasn't particularly into blading, however one fateful encounter would send him into the world of beyblade, on a road to be the champion. 

Main Characters
Ketto Riagani-11-Middle School Class A-Uses Kaiser Dragon
"Akuma" Noshito-12-Middle School Class C-Uses Oni Diabolos
Tobu Koriyen-11-Middle School Class B-Uses Lightning Pegasus


Beys (uses the God layer system)
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Lightning Pegasus,Sting,Onguard| Onguard is an aggressive tip, with rubber at an angle for constant attacks|God Ability: Brutal Strike|It has 2 blades on the side of its layer, each time they suffer a strong attack they move up 1 time. After they move up 3 times a golden rubber blade is revealed under the blades for an ultimate attack.
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Oni Diabolos,Requiem,Venom | Requiem is perfectly balanced with a ring of sharp angled rubber around it| Venom can push down during battle, which pushes in the tip making it go into Attack mode. | God Ability: Hell Crusher | Venom goes into attack mode, and Diabolos tilts back, exposing the rubber on Requiem. Diabolos goes crazy with multiple rubber strikes, bursting the opponent.
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Kaiser Dragon,Bash,Quick | Bash features strong metal blades | God Ability: Crush Claw | After Dragon clicks a few times, Bash is aligned with the layer for an extra powerful attack
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?????????? ???? | nothing is known about this bey |
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King Kerbeus,00,shield,orbit | the shield frame provides a large octagon shaped ring to protect the bey from attacks. | God Ability: Claw Guard | The rubber on Kerbeus' layer pushing in, absorbing then pushes back out to bounce back the opponent. During this time if it gets knocked off balance, it can go to the rim of the stadium, then speed up for a counter attack |
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Ghost Orion,0,proof,bearing | God Ability: Invisible Scream- When Orion takes the center it starts spinning faster and creates a invisible forcefield in which a bey can’t enter blocking all. Attacks and making them lose lots of stamina. |
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Dierin Tenebris Tesser(Prototype) End(Prototype) | Dieren Tenebris- A dark warrior with dark rays of light surrounding him, has spikes which can retract, extend, go backwards, and go forwards. | Tesser(prototype)- 1Dimension- a flat, sheet of metal extends as far as the layer when launched. | End(prototype)- A driver that when you spin, it screws downward, and then shoots around the stadium, zigzagging all around.
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Horrific Sloth,12,wall,quest.
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Lol, Beyblade Burst Fusion already exists. It was made by . Lol
(May. 15, 2020  1:16 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Lol, Beyblade Burst Fusion already exists. It was made by . Lol

oops lol
Ketto's bey will be revealed tomorrow, along with a chapter 1 preview

just a little preview I guess, the main character will have a Dragon bey centered around going fast and delivering powerful attacks
Episode 1 Teaser
"Go shoot!" A bey circled around the stadium, knocking around the other one. As Ketto watched the battle he swore.....he saw something in it. A giant pegasus looming over the other bey, In sync with the kid that was using it. "Blow it away!" The kid said. As if it heard him, the bey struck the other one and burst it. Over kids were talking "That's Lightning Pegasus for ya!" "I wonder if you can even beat that bey?". This peaked Ketto's interest. He went over to the kid with Lightning Pegasus. "Hey um...what's your name?" "I'm Tobu Koriyen and this is my partner Pegasus!" "What's up?". Ketto responded. "Could you...help me make a bey?"

if you want a character to be added, just post their name and bey. Post each parts of the bey, and if its a new part explain what is does. Also explain what their god ability is, as of now characters can only have one.

Also I have up to chapter 3 summarized, I'll wait like a week. If there are no submissions to base chapters on I'll continue
1 more bey will be revealed today

name reveal (spoilers I guess)
Chapter 1- The start of a journey

Chapter 2- The Demon Lord

Chapter 3- Improve your skills
Im'a start writing again now. still feel free to submit a character if you see this and are interested.
is this about the god system? If so I probably won't submit Nash
(May. 21, 2020  6:10 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: [ -> ]is this about the god system? If so I probably won't submit Nash
yes. a bey with a God Ability, you can submit multiple however they wont all be used till later.


however I will allow a couple beys from seasons after god, was planning to have some to add some extra challenge to the bladers that only have god beys.
May I submit one?
(May. 21, 2020  6:17 PM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: [ -> ]May I submit one?

go ahead. list the bey's name and its parts, if it has a new forge disc and/or layer describe what is is, also describe its god ability (if its a god layer system bey. if not just describe whatever gimmick it has, if it has one.)
Chris Bartier
Ghost Orion 0Proof Bearing
Ghost Orion- Upgraded layer from Phantom Orion
God Ability: Invisible Scream- When Orion takes the center it starts spinning faster and creates a invisible forcefield in which a bey can’t enter blocking all. Attacks and making them lose lots of stamina.
(May. 21, 2020  6:25 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: [ -> ]Chris Bartier
Ghost Orion 0Proof Bearing
Ghost Orion- Upgraded layer from Phantom Orion
God Ability: Invisible Scream- When Orion takes the center it starts spinning faster and creates a invisible forcefield in which a bey can’t enter blocking all. Attacks and making them lose lots of stamina.

great, I'll use it around chapter 4 Smile
Ok thank you
Character Name: Typheranous Night

Character Bio: The future father of Morrin Night. Is 15 at the moment. Has purple hair, and glasses. He often goes out at night and stares at the sky. His eyes are usually gold, but when his aura flares up, they turn a bloody red that sends chills down your spine. Often wears a blue hoodie.

Bey: Dierin Tenebris Tesser(Prototype) End(Prototype)

Dieren Tenebris- A dark warrior with dark rays of light surrounding him, has spikes which can retract, extend, go backwards, and go forwards.
Tesser(prototype)- 1Dimension- a flat, sheet of metal extends as far as the layer when launched.
End(prototype)- A driver that when you spin, it screws downward, and then shoots around the stadium, zigzagging all around.
Name: Bei Balayde

Beyblade: Horrific Sloth 12 wall quest.
(May. 21, 2020  6:51 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Bei Balayde

Beyblade: Horrific Sloth 12 wall quest.

what system is this bey?
(May. 21, 2020  6:52 PM)snoc Wrote: [ -> ]
(May. 21, 2020  6:51 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Bei Balayde

Beyblade: Horrific Sloth 12 wall quest.

what system is this bey?

single layer.
thx for all the beys, will be asking for more submissions a little while later