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Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story

Context: This story takes place around the same time as the first season of Beyblade Burst. This also means that this takes place during the dual layer era. Ugen is a 11 year old male who, at the time of the first chapter, had been blading for six months. His personality is a smart one, although not to the point where you would consider him nerdy. He usually is very confident no matter who he faces in a battle. He usually likes to try and pull off new launch angles as well as moves and pushes the limits. His bey is Urgent Ursa, a left spin attack type. Follow Ugen and his beyblade, Urgent Ursa, for their 51 chapter story.

The Story (Chapters 1-51)
Feel free to post any feedback down below, as well as any ideas for characters and beyblades! Just make sure the beyblade ideas are dual layers!
(Dec. 02, 2019  3:47 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story

Context: This story takes place around the same time as the first season of Beyblade Burst. This also means that this takes place during the dual layer era. Ugen is a 11 year old male who, at the time of the first chapter, had been blading for six months. His personality is a smart one, although not to the point where you would consider him nerdy. He usually Is very confident no matter who he faces in a battle. He usually likes to try and pull off new launch angles as well as moves and pushes the limits. His bey is Urgent Ursa, a left spin attack type. Follow Ugen and his beyblade, Urgent Ursa, for their 51 chapter story.

The Story (Chapters 1-51)
Feel free to post any feedback down below, as well as any ideas for characters and beyblades! Just make sure the beyblade ideas are dual layers!

Niceu niceu, very niceu Caesar-chan.

Pretty good! I got some serious episode one vibes from this.

I'm assuming you're not taking characters?
(Dec. 02, 2019  3:53 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]Niceu niceu, very niceu Caesar-chan.

Pretty good! I got some serious episode one vibes from this.

I'm assuming you're not taking characters?
You mean steal other people’s characters? No! Ugen and Saoki are all my original characters as well as their beys.
This is awesome!
(Dec. 02, 2019  11:49 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: [ -> ]This is awesome!

Thanks!
Chapter 2: Holding On! Dual Strike!

I don’t know what dis is about
(Dec. 03, 2019  10:57 PM)Fyde Wrote: [ -> ]I don’t know what dis is about

Then read the story. Stop doing spam posts. It’s annoying to other people.
(Dec. 02, 2019  4:05 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 02, 2019  3:53 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]Niceu niceu, very niceu Caesar-chan.

Pretty good! I got some serious episode one vibes from this.

I'm assuming you're not taking characters?
You mean steal other people’s characters? No! Ugen and Saoki are all my original characters as well as their beys.

I meant like taking character requests, like if someone asked for their character to be in the story. Not stealing.

Lol
(Dec. 04, 2019  3:17 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]
(Dec. 02, 2019  4:05 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: [ -> ]You mean steal other people’s characters? No! Ugen and Saoki are all my original characters as well as their beys.

I meant like taking character requests, like if someone asked for their character to be in the story. Not stealing.

Lol

Oh! I was going to possibly take a couple. Did you have one in mind?
Have you seen Akuma from other stories?

Actually I'll pm U later. I'm in school.
(Dec. 04, 2019  6:14 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: [ -> ]Have you seen Akuma from other stories?

Actually I'll pm U later. I'm in school.

Sounds good!
Do we post our character ideas here, or PM you?
This is a real good idea! I LOVE the second chapter!
(Dec. 05, 2019  9:52 AM)bekfastblader Wrote: [ -> ]Do we post our character ideas here, or PM you?

You can post character ideas here.

(Dec. 05, 2019  12:14 PM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: [ -> ]This is a real good idea! I LOVE the second chapter!

Thank you! I will be getting the third chapter out sometime today!
My character idea:
Character: Whintoki (Win-Tow-Key)
Bey: Wailing Whirlwind
(Dec. 05, 2019  2:56 PM)Dacatman Wrote: [ -> ]My character idea:
Character: Whintoki (Win-Tow-Key)
Bey: Wailing Whirlwind

Ok. Can I have a couple more details on the bey? Like what type it is and any special moves?
Go to tinkercad.com and search up “Slice Whirlwind Beyblade” by: Creator The Blader for its Super-Z Form.
(Dec. 05, 2019  5:21 PM)Dacatman Wrote: [ -> ]Go to tinkercad.com and search up “Slice Whirlwind Beyblade” by: Creator The Blader for its Super-Z Form.

Um ok I’ll do that.
Chapter 3: Incredible Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!

Real good! I see you added Dacatman's character request.
(Dec. 08, 2019  3:49 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: [ -> ]Real good! I see you added Dacatman's character request.

Thanks! His character will be shown next chapter which will be released in a few days or less.
Cool. I'll be sure to read it!
Chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!

Nice chapter!
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