(Jan. 10, 2019 2:08 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ] (Jan. 10, 2019 2:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 13: The Finale
Andy was sitting on his bed watching YouTube but then his dad told him to go to sleep. At 2:00 AM a BEYBLADE stealer crept in to the house. The thieve took Amaterious and left. When Andy woke up he screamed. His dad said they would find it 1 day but they never did and they couldn’t make a new Amaterious either. Amaterious’ new owner is now: Unknown
Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!
Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
(Jan. 10, 2019 2:30 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote: [ -> ] (Jan. 10, 2019 2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
Lol it is
I wanted to hide the answer so that someone who didn’t want to see it could turn away
I summon the story critic!
Originality: It has an original plot, and it is more unique than most stories. 9/10
Plot: The plot is certainly original, but it isn’t the best plot ever. It focuses more on being flashy and quantity over quality. 5/10
Enjoyability: It is somewhat enjoyable, but it is very short and prizes quantity over quality. 6/10
Overall:
Originality: 9/10
Plot: 5/10
Enjoyability: 6/10
Average: 20/30 or 6.3/10
CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?
Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.
(Jul. 01, 2019 3:18 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: [ -> ]Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.
It ended and I’m not really happy about my work.
(Jul. 01, 2019 3:20 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ] (Jul. 01, 2019 3:18 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: [ -> ]Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.
It ended and I’m not really happy about my work.
You shouldn't be sad about your work! I liked this series a lot!