Feb. 27, 2010 8:37 PM
ace left the house asap not even thinking to grab his things and then BOOOOM his house went up in flame....
bum bum be dum bum bum bedumdum
disturbia
the radio blared as ace was taking a shower
and suddenly his mother called up "ace get out of that shower now and get to school" he instantly complied remembering it was the day of his the big boxing match after school. ace ashworth under 13s middle weight champion he loved the way it sounded on his tounge quickly getting dressed and leaving his 3 bedroom semi and out towards the tube station. to get to his school was particularly easy
3 stop and he was there right outside the gates a sign read farnsworth prep
and underneath that there school crest and beaneath that there was the school
motto it was written in italian it said un giorno siamo tutti morire questo è giusta preparazione he never knew what it meant, but it was always pretty creepy. to lighten the mood almost on que his best mate since nursery micheal gardener.
he said "hey ace why are u lookin at that old sign i always thought it meant schools a dump dont waste your time" ace laughed. something to know about micheal was
he was extremly tall for his age and played basket ball he had allready competed in the uk championships and came second and belives he doesnt need school.
on the other hand ace took it a little more seriously he wasnt a geek but wasnt a complete lame brain either. school passed slowerr than a snail on crutches if only it went faster. as soon as school finished ace ran towards the gym but barring his way was stephanie the local braniac. "hello ace "
"hi stephanie " ace grumbled "im not being rude steph but i really need to be somewhere " ... 3 hours later still on a high after his win on his brand new bike he rode towards home as soon as he got there a man wearing all black left the house
"mum where are you " he found his mum on the floor in a pool of blood
SMASH CRASH both the back window came down and a ticking device came through the hole . almost simletaniously he got a text RUN DONT THINK JUST RUN
this is a short story i wrote 4 creative writing class how is it????
bum bum be dum bum bum bedumdum
disturbia
the radio blared as ace was taking a shower
and suddenly his mother called up "ace get out of that shower now and get to school" he instantly complied remembering it was the day of his the big boxing match after school. ace ashworth under 13s middle weight champion he loved the way it sounded on his tounge quickly getting dressed and leaving his 3 bedroom semi and out towards the tube station. to get to his school was particularly easy
3 stop and he was there right outside the gates a sign read farnsworth prep
and underneath that there school crest and beaneath that there was the school
motto it was written in italian it said un giorno siamo tutti morire questo è giusta preparazione he never knew what it meant, but it was always pretty creepy. to lighten the mood almost on que his best mate since nursery micheal gardener.
he said "hey ace why are u lookin at that old sign i always thought it meant schools a dump dont waste your time" ace laughed. something to know about micheal was
he was extremly tall for his age and played basket ball he had allready competed in the uk championships and came second and belives he doesnt need school.
on the other hand ace took it a little more seriously he wasnt a geek but wasnt a complete lame brain either. school passed slowerr than a snail on crutches if only it went faster. as soon as school finished ace ran towards the gym but barring his way was stephanie the local braniac. "hello ace "
"hi stephanie " ace grumbled "im not being rude steph but i really need to be somewhere " ... 3 hours later still on a high after his win on his brand new bike he rode towards home as soon as he got there a man wearing all black left the house
"mum where are you " he found his mum on the floor in a pool of blood
SMASH CRASH both the back window came down and a ticking device came through the hole . almost simletaniously he got a text RUN DONT THINK JUST RUN
this is a short story i wrote 4 creative writing class how is it????
. I don't get it. Man seriously, you really need to edit this.