I definitely appreciated that short film. I found that there were some good decisions taken. The only clear thing I would have changed is when Titu(?) saw flashes and then withdrew his hand from the apple. Perhaps the camera could have shaken or light could have been used to accentuate the gesture, because it seemed somewhat banal.
(Apr. 29, 2017 12:12 AM)Kai-V Wrote: [ -> ]I definitely appreciated that short film. I found that there were some good decisions taken. The only clear thing I would have changed is when Titu(?) saw flashes and then withdrew his hand from the apple. Perhaps the camera could have shaken or light could have been used to accentuate the gesture, because it seemed somewhat banal.
Yeah that's a good point, thanks for the feedback!