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Quote:Zephyr is a performance tip released as a part of the Beyblade Burst system. It was with B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr. 

Description
Zephyr features a flat tip with a hole in its surface. A stylized letter "Z" is embossed on the top of the Driver for easy differentiation with other performance tips.

Zephyr moves aggressively around the stadium while gradually moving towards the center as its velocity decreases. Maintaining a sliding pattern with Zephyr is difficult. Zephyr is outclassed by Xtreme in terms of attack but is easier to control. However it can be used for atta k and balance combos.

Use in Attack Combinations

Zephyr is an essential part in the combo Minoborus Heavy/Gravity/Knuckle Zephyr. This combo has shown some success in tournaments.

Zephyr can be used with Hasbro's Valtryek and Roktavor.
 - Valtryek/Valtryek V2 Knuckle/Heavy Variable/Zephyr
- Roktavor Heavy Zephyr/Variable

Use in Balance Combinations
Zephyr can also be be used in Valkyrie Heavy/Gravity/Knuckle Zephyr. It is an attack/stamina hybrid and can be used effectively.

It is also used with Hasbro Valtryek and Yegdrion.
- Valtryek V2 Spread Zephyr
- Yegdrion Heavy/Knuckle Zephyr

Other Products
B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr

Trivia
Zephyr is a copy of the HF tip from MFB.

Overall
Zephyr has shown some uses in attack and balance combos. Being made of plastic it has more stamina than Xtreme and other rubber tips. Zephyr is a viable part in  every blader's collection.
My English is weak so please forgive me and let me know what to improve.

Coding with final vercollection
'''Zephyr''' is a [[Performance Tip]] released as part of the [[Burst System]]. It debuted with the release of [[B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr]] on January 23rd, 2016. 

==Description==
<includeonly>Zephyr features a flat tip with a hole in its surface. A stylized letter "Z" is embossed on the top of the Performance Tip for easy differentiation.

The Zephyr Performance Tip moves aggressively around the BeyStadium; it gradually moves towards the center as its velocity decreases. Despite raw attacks that aren't generally as hard as the [[Performance Tip - TA03: Xtreme|Xtreme]] Performance Tips', Zephyr compensates for this and provides Stamina, allowing for increased versatility and viability in Attack/Stamina hybrids, as a result. </includeonly>

==Use in Balance Combinations==
Zephyr can be used in effective Attack/Stamina hybrids that include [[Energy Layer - Valtryek|Valtryek]] [[Forge Disk - D03: Gravity|Gravity]] Zephyr and [[Energy Layer - Minoboros|Minoboros]] [[Forge Disk - D02: Knuckle|Knuckle] Zephyr. 
</includeonly>

==Overall==
The versatile Zephyr has shown use in Attack/Stamina hybrids. Being made of plastic allows for more stamina and less aggression than the Xtreme Performance Tip. Zephyr is a viable piece among every Blader's collection
Mods please see to it.
at first you have "b-24" not b-28
Will fix this tomorrow. Anything other than this?
Is it ready to be published?
Hey mods please reply Smile
You're hopeful, expecting mods to answer on Christmas Day.

Ninja Blader - Zephyr Wrote:Zephyr is a performance tip released as part of the Beyblade Burst system. It debuted with B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr.

Description
Zephyr features a flat tip with a hole in its surface. A stylized letter "Z" is embossed on top of the Driver for easy differentiation with other Performance Tips.

Zephyr moves aggressively around the stadium while gradually moving toward the centre as its velocity decreases. Maintaining a sliding pattern with Zephyr is difficult. Zephyr is outclassed by Xtreme in terms of attack. However, it can be used for tornado stalling combos.
Use in Tornado Stalling Combinations
Zephyr is an essential part in the combo Minoborus Heavy/Gravity/Knuckle Zephyr. This combo has shown some success in tournaments.

Other Products
B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr

Trivia
Zephyr is a copy of the HF tip from MFB.

Overall
Zephyr has shown some uses in tornado stalling combos. Being made of plastic, it has more stamina than Xtreme and other rubber tips. Zephyr is a viable part in every blader's collection.

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The majority of the edits are changes to the structure of your sentences and your verb tenses. One thing about the factual content of your draft I'm unsure about is the matter of sliding pattern, where you sort of mixed together both related terms (flower pattern and sliding shoot). I don't play Burst, but it seems strange to me that the basic, plastic flat tip would be hard to control.
Thanks Nocto.
I will make the edits later.
So it is fixed now. Any changes or ready to publish?
You need to decide whether you want to use the term sliding shoot or flower pattern instead of sliding pattern: if you don't want to change the rest of your sentence, go with flower pattern. You also need confirmation that it is actually difficult to produce; I wouldn't say so, but others might.

As for the official OK, perhaps PM Kai-V or ~Mana~.
Quote:Use in Tornado Stalling Combinations

Zephyr is an essential part in the combo Minoborus Heavy/Gravity/Knuckle Zephyr.
Not sure Miniboros + Zephyr is just a Tornado Staller; in most cases, it's been used more so for it's attack. It—like Valkyrie + Zephyr, which should also be listedwould be considered an Attack/Stamina hybrid.

Quote:Zephyr is outclassed by Xtreme in terms of attack.
How so? While Xtreme is definitely more aggressive, Zephyr has a pretty big boost in stamina—like you mentioned in your concluding statement—and versatility as a whole, in addition to being easier to control. This can be worth noting here.

Quote:However it can be used for tornado stalling combos.
Tornado Stallers are pretty gone from the game where it is right now. Zephyr's big claim to fame isn't only as a Tornado Staller either. This can be removed.
Thanks Nocto and Mitsu.
Will make the edits tomorrow Smile
So it is updated Smile
Any changes @[~Mana~]
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'''Zephyr''' is a [[Performance Tip]] released as part of the [[Beyblade Burst]]. It debuted with the release of [[B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr]] on 23 December 2016.

==Description==
<includeonly>Zephyr features a flat tip with a hole in its surface. A stylized letter "Z" is embossed on the top of the Driver for easy differentiation with other performance tips.

Zephyr moves aggressively around the stadium while gradually moving towards the center as its velocity decreases. Maintaining a sliding pattern with Zephyr is difficult. Zephyr is outclassed by Xtreme in terms of attack but is easier to control. However it can be used for attack and balance combos.</includeonly>
<incudeonly>Use in Attack Combinations

Zephyr is an essential part in the combo Minoborus Heavy/Gravity/Knuckle Zephyr. This combo has shown some success in tournaments.

Use in Balance Combinations
Zephyr can also be be used in Valkyrie Heavy/Gravity/Knuckle Zephyr. It is an attack/stamina hybrid and can be used effectively.
</includeonly>
==Overall==
Zephyr has shown some uses in attack and balance combos. Being made of plastic it has more stamina than Xtreme and other rubber tips. Zephyr is a viable part in every blader's collection.

==Products==
<!--B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr-->
===Takara Tomy===
===Hasbro===

==Gallery==
===Takara Tomy===
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===Hasbro===
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==Trivia==
Zephyr is a copy of the HF tip from MFB.

==References==
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{{SYSTEM System Parts}}
Coding done.
@[~Mana~] Is this draft ready?
Please reply Smile
Quote:'''Zephyr''' is a [[Performance Tip]] released as part of the [[Burst System]]. It debuted with the release of [[B-28 Neptune Armed Zephyr]] on January 23rd, 2016. 

==Description==
<includeonly>Zephyr features a flat tip with a hole in its surface. A stylized letter "Z" is embossed on the top of the Performance Tip for easy differentiation.

The Zephyr Performance Tip moves aggressively around the BeyStadium; it gradually moves towards the center as its velocity decreases. Despite raw attacks that aren't generally as hard as the [[Performance Tip - TA03: Xtreme|Xtreme]] Performance Tips', Zephyr compensates for this and provides Stamina, allowing for increased versatility and viability in Attack/Stamina hybrids, as a result. </includeonly>

==Use in Balance Combinations==
Zephyr can be used in effective Attack/Stamina hybrids that include [[Energy Layer - Valtryek|Valtryek]] [[Forge Disk - D03: Gravity|Gravity]] Zephyr and [[Energy Layer - Minoboros|Minoboros]] [[Forge Disk - D02: Knuckle|Knuckle] Zephyr. 
</includeonly>

==Overall==
The versatile Zephyr has shown use in Attack/Stamina hybrids. Being made of plastic allows for more stamina and less aggression than the Xtreme Performance Tip. Zephyr is a viable piece among every Blader's collection.
Original Post: https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Perform...pid1357404
Thank you very much Mitsu Smile
So how's it now ? Smile Mana?
Any suggestions?
I've gone ahead and published this now, as the description is definitely fine to do as it stands. It does turn out that this article already existed on Beyblade Wiki, so I've merged the description in, while the rest of the details already on the Wiki were fine as they were.

Thanks for getting this written up guys! Smile
Thank you very much Mana and all others who helped me Smile
zephyr is also used in mobile stamina customizations like deathscyther spread zephyr
It is mentioned in Balance Combos section.
(Jun. 18, 2017  5:16 PM)Ninja Blader Wrote: [ -> ]It is mentioned in Balance Combos section.

not trying to be rude but isnt that a attack/stamina balance? stallers use stamina type layers that combo is using an attack type layer.
Yes it is but Deathsyther is banned from WBO tournaments and also Deathsyther Spread Zephyr is a decent comboSmile
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