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Back when I was very active on the WBO there was an abundance of beyblade stories and almost a community of writers. Unfortunately, it seems like that sort of faded away, as it is rare to see a beyblade story posted here. Perhaps this is due to lack of interest and if so, I won't drag this out for too long, but I figured I may as well give it a shot, at least for a few chapters. So here it is, my latest attempt at a beyblade story. I haven't decided on a name yet, so bear with me. I'll be throwing in a few placeholder. Maybe one of them will stick. And as always, criticism is appreciated!

The Story:

Introduction:
Chapter 1:
Damn only if beyblade was still active around my area the story brings back a feeling of nostalgia I love it
Thanks, I appreciate the compliment!

Also, chapter 1 is up! One thing to note, I am aware that I am not being completely accurate regarding the function of Beyloggers and pre-release shipping times, among other things, but it's a fictional story, so expect stuff like that Smile
Even I haven't been continuing my stories, although mine is due to being a made up system which would obviously have less interest, and with Burst around, I felt writing mine obsolete.

I actually wanted to do one for Burst, Zero G and Battle Strikers Metal XS. LOL I personally am a Kerbeus or especially Kaiser Kerbeus person.
Yeah, I haven't started my fan series yet for the same reason as Jinbee (Burst being released and all) but another reason why is because I had to focus on college stuff in which I need to pass.

BTW, your story is pretty good Dual.
Good job Dual! I like how you are actually having the beys release in order and stuff. I don't suppose you are taking character requests in the future, huh?
I also tried a story, but while I had a nice idea In mind, new things kept outclassing the combos I had in there whenever I did have time to write.
No, no character requests, sorry. And you shouldn't worry about what's outclassed or not when writing a story Smile it gives you the ability to make improvements to characters' beyblades. Don't let that stop you.
Nice story!

Smile I agree that there should be more writers for the WBO. I used to write so many Beyblade stories. I posted one on the WBO once but it was kinda eh. I plan to make another one soon. Keep it up with yours! Smile
I only reached 33 episodes, the 33rd one was done much later after 32.

The story is pretty good so far, the realism makes it believable. My advice is not to do a ratings poll because it should only be there when the series is done.