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I don't normally like to share stuff like this, but I figure if I ever want to get better at this I'm going to need some feedback. I've recently gotten into writing lyrics (me and my friend were supposed to start a band, and while that fell through, I really liked writing) and would like criticism on them. I've also written some poems, which are much more lighthearted than my songs. I hope you enjoy.

Songs:

Remedy
Pay or Pray
Doubt (A Pantoum)
The Sirens
Magnum Opus
Tel Quel
Cold Fear
Sins of the Father
Modern Day Supervillains

Here's my poetry garbage.

Asian Girl
Realistic Pledge of Allegiance
Too Early
The Wiener Dog
The Ographer
Untitled
Obscure Bands