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INTRODUCTION
CHAPTER 1: September
What exactly is this thread about?

To influence others not to be a bully?

Also this isnt really a creation. I think this should be in the general discussion section.

EDIT: ohhhhh is this a story you made...whoops missed that. If it is a story than you should say it is so people like me dont get confused.
(Apr. 13, 2014  2:57 AM)LikeABoss921 Wrote: [ -> ]What exactly is this thread about?

To influence others not to be a bully?

Yes, it is.
This story is good.

I think you should keep going, but a few things to note about:

1. It's WAY too short, try and make it longer. Some perspectives are only one sentence while others have more, but no paragraphs.

2. It lacks some description. You could say what the library looks like, what the characters look like, etc. etc.


Other than that, it's good!
I'm Kinda lost on this story, will it just be the police interviewing them or...