Dec. 01, 2013 3:38 AM
So yeah, my second bey story.
Part 1
Chapter 1I am accepting character requests!
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
PART 2
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Drpepsidew=doc wilks
Ryukiba=Ryu
Galaxy Blade=da-king-man
XKai_DranzerX=ace
Tsaigi=brandin (I think he might mean Brandon though)
Madness=omega
Crax686=jake
Infinity lazer=infinity
MineCraftAddict=tyoka
aSadisticPirate=Onyx
Oddity=hunter
Part 1
Chapter 1
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Dan ran into the Walmart fullspeed, bumping into a few people and quickly apologizing on the way, them he finally got there, the beyblade section, parts in clear display cases all along the aisle.
Dan had finally saved up enough money to buy one, after months of saving up
"Oh which part to buy" he said
A attendant came around the corner and towards him.
"Can I help u with anything?" said the middleaged man.
"Wah-, oh yes, I want a blade, what is good for starters?" He asked, not knowing much about the game.
"Well, most starters try to grow but and powerful to fast, choosing rubber attack bottoms, but they always in up constantly self KOing before even having a chance to battle. So I would go with stamina or defence." Said the man
"I kinda wanted an attack type to begin with........is there anything else than rubber bottoms good for attack?" Said Dan
"Actually we just got a new shipment in, I think I saw some new F variants other than RFs and R2Fs. Give me a minute to go check while u look for the track, metal wheel and clear wheel you want."
"Ok, thanks for the help" Dan said as the man went into the storage room.
Dan looked through almost all the shelves and had a bunch of parts in the 4 inch display cases in his hands by the time the attendant came back.
"Well, they had a few new ones. But I found what I think with suit you best; metal flat. What have u got there?" Said the man
Ok, I u say so ill take it!. I have dragooon, Bahamdia and s130. Will this be sufficient?" Said Dan
"Yes, what you picked is Bahamdia Dragooon s130mf. This will rack you up $60 and remember to always do a sliding shoot when launching"
After Dan paid and left he was walking down the rode when out of nows here a teenager walks up and tells him to give him his bey or he will destroy it.
"Uh, I don't have a bey" Dan said, afraid of this boy
"I've been watching you, don't try that with me. Give me the bey!!!" Said the teenager
Dan ran across the street in a effort to get away from the boy, who was chasing him only a few feet behind him, luckily his house was only a couple minutes away. The teenager followed and stopped in right before the front yard of dan's house.
"What's wrong Dan, why are you so sweaty?" Asked his mom.
"I got a beyblade" was all Dan said.
Dan had finally saved up enough money to buy one, after months of saving up
"Oh which part to buy" he said
A attendant came around the corner and towards him.
"Can I help u with anything?" said the middleaged man.
"Wah-, oh yes, I want a blade, what is good for starters?" He asked, not knowing much about the game.
"Well, most starters try to grow but and powerful to fast, choosing rubber attack bottoms, but they always in up constantly self KOing before even having a chance to battle. So I would go with stamina or defence." Said the man
"I kinda wanted an attack type to begin with........is there anything else than rubber bottoms good for attack?" Said Dan
"Actually we just got a new shipment in, I think I saw some new F variants other than RFs and R2Fs. Give me a minute to go check while u look for the track, metal wheel and clear wheel you want."
"Ok, thanks for the help" Dan said as the man went into the storage room.
Dan looked through almost all the shelves and had a bunch of parts in the 4 inch display cases in his hands by the time the attendant came back.
"Well, they had a few new ones. But I found what I think with suit you best; metal flat. What have u got there?" Said the man
Ok, I u say so ill take it!. I have dragooon, Bahamdia and s130. Will this be sufficient?" Said Dan
"Yes, what you picked is Bahamdia Dragooon s130mf. This will rack you up $60 and remember to always do a sliding shoot when launching"
After Dan paid and left he was walking down the rode when out of nows here a teenager walks up and tells him to give him his bey or he will destroy it.
"Uh, I don't have a bey" Dan said, afraid of this boy
"I've been watching you, don't try that with me. Give me the bey!!!" Said the teenager
Dan ran across the street in a effort to get away from the boy, who was chasing him only a few feet behind him, luckily his house was only a couple minutes away. The teenager followed and stopped in right before the front yard of dan's house.
"What's wrong Dan, why are you so sweaty?" Asked his mom.
"I got a beyblade" was all Dan said.
Chapter 2
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Dan ran to the bey park (run by the world tournament winner and American rep., Dr. Wilks) . As he entered he saw a poster and walked up to read it; "The wbo is looking for a U.S.A Rep. For the world tournament!!! Held at your very own ligville beypark! Sign up today!" Is what it read with a blue backaround. He immediately ran to the registration table
"When is the tournament?" He asked to lady at the table
"The tournament is in 3 weeks, are u registering?" She replied
"Yes please, I came here to sign up for dr. Wilks beyblade training as well"
"Ok fill out this form and doc wilks class starts in an hour, ill have u sign another form for that and u can go"
"Ok thanks" Dan said as he went to the waiting area to fill out the forms.
He went and handed them back to get when he finished
"The training starts in a couple minutes, by the way doc Wilks runs the hardest training in this town, down be sad if u don't make the cut." She said
Dan walked off feeling a bit offended and thought "will I make it as he entered the training room.
"Ahhh, a newb huh?" Said a man in his kid thirties with brown hair and cargo pants
"Yes sir" replied Dan
"Get behind that kid right there and start with 150 push-ups then get to your launch RPM at that stadium, im expecting atleast 9,000 RPMs am i clear!!!" said doc wilks
"9000!?!?!?..... I-I mean yes sir" replied Dan
"Yeah that what I thought!!! After training stay after class" said the doc
After a few hours of intense training everybody left and Dan could barely stand.
He went to the Doc's office to find him sitting Down and staring at a bey in his hand, Dan could make out 2 genbull wheels
"Is that genbull genbull? How did u get 2 of them ? They are so rare......."
"Yes they are genbulls, now let's see how u do against it" doc said with a smirk
"What?!?!? I can't beat genbull genbull with my bey, I'm a newb even u said it"
"Awww, I guess u just have really bad luck" he said with another smirk
They went to the beystadium and launched
"Goooo Dragooon!!!!" Dan said
But when it hit genbull it was pushed to the edge but it swiftly turned and eh ment back to its defensive position.
Dan went in again and the same thing happened so he commanded dragooon to go to a stall around the stadium, and when it came to the middle and attacked full power genbull genbull dodged and got behind it and dragoon was going so fast that the moment made it unable to stop and genbull went behind it, have it another boost of speed by hitting it and making it get KOed.
"Hppmmm, trying to be clever eh?"
"It sounded like a good idea when I thought of it...."
"From now on stay after training every Tuesday but not Friday training. I like your tactics, I'm going to make something out of you"
"When is the tournament?" He asked to lady at the table
"The tournament is in 3 weeks, are u registering?" She replied
"Yes please, I came here to sign up for dr. Wilks beyblade training as well"
"Ok fill out this form and doc wilks class starts in an hour, ill have u sign another form for that and u can go"
"Ok thanks" Dan said as he went to the waiting area to fill out the forms.
He went and handed them back to get when he finished
"The training starts in a couple minutes, by the way doc Wilks runs the hardest training in this town, down be sad if u don't make the cut." She said
Dan walked off feeling a bit offended and thought "will I make it as he entered the training room.
"Ahhh, a newb huh?" Said a man in his kid thirties with brown hair and cargo pants
"Yes sir" replied Dan
"Get behind that kid right there and start with 150 push-ups then get to your launch RPM at that stadium, im expecting atleast 9,000 RPMs am i clear!!!" said doc wilks
"9000!?!?!?..... I-I mean yes sir" replied Dan
"Yeah that what I thought!!! After training stay after class" said the doc
After a few hours of intense training everybody left and Dan could barely stand.
He went to the Doc's office to find him sitting Down and staring at a bey in his hand, Dan could make out 2 genbull wheels
"Is that genbull genbull? How did u get 2 of them ? They are so rare......."
"Yes they are genbulls, now let's see how u do against it" doc said with a smirk
"What?!?!? I can't beat genbull genbull with my bey, I'm a newb even u said it"
"Awww, I guess u just have really bad luck" he said with another smirk
They went to the beystadium and launched
"Goooo Dragooon!!!!" Dan said
But when it hit genbull it was pushed to the edge but it swiftly turned and eh ment back to its defensive position.
Dan went in again and the same thing happened so he commanded dragooon to go to a stall around the stadium, and when it came to the middle and attacked full power genbull genbull dodged and got behind it and dragoon was going so fast that the moment made it unable to stop and genbull went behind it, have it another boost of speed by hitting it and making it get KOed.
"Hppmmm, trying to be clever eh?"
"It sounded like a good idea when I thought of it...."
"From now on stay after training every Tuesday but not Friday training. I like your tactics, I'm going to make something out of you"
Chapter 3
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Three weeks after Dan's battle with Doc Wilks, it's the day of the tournament. Dan stood outside the beypark waiting for the tournament, after training hardcore for three weeks with Doc Wilks, He was finally ready to battle in the tournament , he and his Bahamdia dragooon s130mf. Then FINALLY!!! The doors swung open and Dan raced in to be the first participant to get there. As he entered he noticed a table near the beyblade stadium where he saw the top U.S. bladers that have turned to judging rather than blading. Not long after the others started to arrive, there was atleast fifty. Now it was time for the first round, it was him vs. a guy using wyvang wyvang 100d, dragoon easily KOed it.
Next was Dan vs. reviser reviser bd145rdf, Dan launched dragoon to stall, then at the last minute he used full power and KOed it. Finally the final round, Blader DJ announced it was Dan vs. somebody named Ryu and it was best 2 put of 3, when he went to the stadium he saw Ryu a girl in a white dress, they launched and in less than to seconds dragooon was found on the ground next to Dan. Round 2, they both launched and dragooon dodged every attack and when Ryu's dragooon dragooon 85gf came fullspeed he used Doc Wilks' tactic and used her momentum against her. Round 3, they launched Dan's dragooon was careful to dodge and Ryu's dragooon was careful to do a showe of small attacks not big ones. Then our of nowhere Ryu uses get special move; tornado attack.
"Go dragooon tornado attack!!!" Said Ryu
Dragooon dragooon started rotating around Dan's dragooon at a Highspeed and then air started swirling and before Dan could react he was flying in the air! Doc Wilkins had bevyeaching him to find counter moves just the other day, so he analyzed his situation and used the air flow to his advantage and flew up in the air, then and down in a swirling vortex , while Ryu's dragooon came up in the air flow with much speed and then they clashed. Both beys ended up out of the stadium at the exact same moment. They went back toward the judges and asked;
"What will we do we tied?" Said Ryu
"Go to the waiting room, the judges will duscuss this" said Doc Wilks
They did as they were told and went back. The judges had to decide who would be the U.S.A rep.
"I've trained both of them, by hey show amazing power" said the doc
"But who is better Wilks?" Said a judge
"Both are equals, didnt u see that battle!?!?!?!"
I think we all know what to do" said another judge
They went into the waiting room and doc Wilks announced;
"There will be 2 U.S.A Representives this year"
Next was Dan vs. reviser reviser bd145rdf, Dan launched dragoon to stall, then at the last minute he used full power and KOed it. Finally the final round, Blader DJ announced it was Dan vs. somebody named Ryu and it was best 2 put of 3, when he went to the stadium he saw Ryu a girl in a white dress, they launched and in less than to seconds dragooon was found on the ground next to Dan. Round 2, they both launched and dragooon dodged every attack and when Ryu's dragooon dragooon 85gf came fullspeed he used Doc Wilks' tactic and used her momentum against her. Round 3, they launched Dan's dragooon was careful to dodge and Ryu's dragooon was careful to do a showe of small attacks not big ones. Then our of nowhere Ryu uses get special move; tornado attack.
"Go dragooon tornado attack!!!" Said Ryu
Dragooon dragooon started rotating around Dan's dragooon at a Highspeed and then air started swirling and before Dan could react he was flying in the air! Doc Wilkins had bevyeaching him to find counter moves just the other day, so he analyzed his situation and used the air flow to his advantage and flew up in the air, then and down in a swirling vortex , while Ryu's dragooon came up in the air flow with much speed and then they clashed. Both beys ended up out of the stadium at the exact same moment. They went back toward the judges and asked;
"What will we do we tied?" Said Ryu
"Go to the waiting room, the judges will duscuss this" said Doc Wilks
They did as they were told and went back. The judges had to decide who would be the U.S.A rep.
"I've trained both of them, by hey show amazing power" said the doc
"But who is better Wilks?" Said a judge
"Both are equals, didnt u see that battle!?!?!?!"
I think we all know what to do" said another judge
They went into the waiting room and doc Wilks announced;
"There will be 2 U.S.A Representives this year"
Chapter 4
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They were on the train, heading for the world championships held in toronto, CA. It had been hours and they were about 1,000 miles away right now. Ryu and Dan never really talked to each other much, they just wondered the train cars in search if something to counter their boredom all day. It was now night as they went through Detroit, as they laid in there beds (in different rooms), Dan heard something, like footsteps on metal, he got up and decided to investigate , he followed the noise heard a door open he then hid under a table (he was in the restaurant car), and slowly made he made he way to the car before the leading car and thats where he saw him, a large teenager with a sack coming right toward him! He couldn't see Dan though, because he hidden. The teen went right past him and toward the passenger cars and then, to Dans surprise, entering the rooms and taking belongings! He didn't know what to do so he just followed him, he was near Ryu's room when a shadowy figure jumped from the ceiling and onto the man! He had the teen in a hard neck lock and then the teen three him off saying "get off of me of me u monkey man! Nobody messed with da-king-man!"
That's when shiz got real and the shadow figure launched a bey with flames bursting from it and it hit da-king-man in the chest, making him go flying go. By this time the car was on fire and people began running out of their rooms and to the other cars, that when Dan came out of hiding and helped the Shadowy figure contain the teen who had the kid on top of him holding him down, that's when Ryu came out to see them
"What the heck is going on!?!?" Is what she said as she walked up and rounded the teen in the shoulder, making him go limp and paralyzed. The other two boys were shocked. She then told them go to the other car and bring him too. They followed her orders and she followed behind them, when they were in the other car and then she launcher her dragoooon and it sliced the connected of that car and the rest of the train, so the rest wouldn't burn. Then she called her blade back.
"Who are you?" Dan asked the shadowy figure
"Ace, your bodyguard, the WBO hired me" he replied
That's when shiz got real and the shadow figure launched a bey with flames bursting from it and it hit da-king-man in the chest, making him go flying go. By this time the car was on fire and people began running out of their rooms and to the other cars, that when Dan came out of hiding and helped the Shadowy figure contain the teen who had the kid on top of him holding him down, that's when Ryu came out to see them
"What the heck is going on!?!?" Is what she said as she walked up and rounded the teen in the shoulder, making him go limp and paralyzed. The other two boys were shocked. She then told them go to the other car and bring him too. They followed her orders and she followed behind them, when they were in the other car and then she launcher her dragoooon and it sliced the connected of that car and the rest of the train, so the rest wouldn't burn. Then she called her blade back.
"Who are you?" Dan asked the shadowy figure
"Ace, your bodyguard, the WBO hired me" he replied
Chapter 5
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They finally arrived in Toronto, it was about 2 a'clock in the afternoon. They went straight to the hotel room, it was a five star hotel with a in-room hottub. "Whoa, this is amazing" said Dan as he went to his room (a room inside of a room lol) and started unpacking.
"Get cozy guys, the tournament is going to be a week long" said Ace as he went to his room.
Ryu never really talked much, she just smiled and went to her room.
"Well, i'm gonna go sight see" said Dan after he unpacked.
"Okay, I'm gonna hang in the hot tub and order 5. Star cuisine if u don't mind." Said Ace
Dan left the room and went to the McDonald's to get some food
"Hi, I'd like a Big Mac with extra cheese and a mcflurry to go, please"
Dan received his food and decided to check out some beyparks around High Park
He sw a bunch of blader, but didnt want to show his skill in public before the tournament.
He saw somebody else that was doing exactly what he was and looked like he wasn't from around Toronto also.
"Hey, You from around here?" Dan asked
"Nah, I'm here for the world tournament, I'm just scoping the beyblades"
"Same here, I'm one of U.S.A representatives, are you just going to it or participating?"
"Participating, I'm the U.K. Rep. By the way."
"Cool, I'm in block 2, what are you in?"said Dan
"Block 2 also, I'm Brandon by the way"
"Oh yeah i forgot to inteoduce myself, I'm Dan"
"Nice to meet you, what do u say 'bout going check out some more beyparks with me?" Said Brandon
"Sure I was going too anyways"
Thetis then left and on the way to another beypark a car came speeding by and stopped on the side of Brandon.
Brandon then grab Dan and pushed him into the cold hands of no other than da-king-Man who had escaped the train the night before.
" Where's my money?!?!?"asked Brandon and da-king-man gave it to him.
da-king-man tied a sack around dans head and drove him to a old warehouse where there was a group of mean looking bladers.
"I bet u didn't know I was a part of the bey killers did you?" Said da-king-man
He pulled Dan to a stadium, with the other bladers in a curcle around them so Dan would run, and told him to launch.
They both launched and the beys clashed.
"You can contain Dragooon!!!! Go!!!!" Said Dan
But but da-king-man's hades kerbecs e230cf has the advantage of swift mobility, it could dodge easily and attack with alot of power too.
Then kerbecs' spirit appeared and fire blew from its both towards dragooon.
Dan couldn't dodge all of them and was loosing power quickly, that's when a Phoenix rammed into the kerbecs and knocked it out of the stadium.
"Ohhhhhhh!!! Guess u just beat u again?!?!?!?!?? Yeah if u didnt notice it was me!!!!" Said ace
And his pheinix flew through the crowd scaring the criminals away and him and Dan ran back to the hotel.
"Wow, thanks ace" said Dan
"I'm trying to figure out if u are really easily tricked or just plain stupid" replied ace as he got back into the hot tub.
"Get cozy guys, the tournament is going to be a week long" said Ace as he went to his room.
Ryu never really talked much, she just smiled and went to her room.
"Well, i'm gonna go sight see" said Dan after he unpacked.
"Okay, I'm gonna hang in the hot tub and order 5. Star cuisine if u don't mind." Said Ace
Dan left the room and went to the McDonald's to get some food
"Hi, I'd like a Big Mac with extra cheese and a mcflurry to go, please"
Dan received his food and decided to check out some beyparks around High Park
He sw a bunch of blader, but didnt want to show his skill in public before the tournament.
He saw somebody else that was doing exactly what he was and looked like he wasn't from around Toronto also.
"Hey, You from around here?" Dan asked
"Nah, I'm here for the world tournament, I'm just scoping the beyblades"
"Same here, I'm one of U.S.A representatives, are you just going to it or participating?"
"Participating, I'm the U.K. Rep. By the way."
"Cool, I'm in block 2, what are you in?"said Dan
"Block 2 also, I'm Brandon by the way"
"Oh yeah i forgot to inteoduce myself, I'm Dan"
"Nice to meet you, what do u say 'bout going check out some more beyparks with me?" Said Brandon
"Sure I was going too anyways"
Thetis then left and on the way to another beypark a car came speeding by and stopped on the side of Brandon.
Brandon then grab Dan and pushed him into the cold hands of no other than da-king-Man who had escaped the train the night before.
" Where's my money?!?!?"asked Brandon and da-king-man gave it to him.
da-king-man tied a sack around dans head and drove him to a old warehouse where there was a group of mean looking bladers.
"I bet u didn't know I was a part of the bey killers did you?" Said da-king-man
He pulled Dan to a stadium, with the other bladers in a curcle around them so Dan would run, and told him to launch.
They both launched and the beys clashed.
"You can contain Dragooon!!!! Go!!!!" Said Dan
But but da-king-man's hades kerbecs e230cf has the advantage of swift mobility, it could dodge easily and attack with alot of power too.
Then kerbecs' spirit appeared and fire blew from its both towards dragooon.
Dan couldn't dodge all of them and was loosing power quickly, that's when a Phoenix rammed into the kerbecs and knocked it out of the stadium.
"Ohhhhhhh!!! Guess u just beat u again?!?!?!?!?? Yeah if u didnt notice it was me!!!!" Said ace
And his pheinix flew through the crowd scaring the criminals away and him and Dan ran back to the hotel.
"Wow, thanks ace" said Dan
"I'm trying to figure out if u are really easily tricked or just plain stupid" replied ace as he got back into the hot tub.
Chapter 6
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It was the day. The first round of the tournament. The 3 were already at the coliseum ready to battle, then blader Dj announced the battles;
"The first round battles of block 1 are; Ryu vs. (French rep.) caman donson and (Japanese Rep.) rayman saito vs. (mongolian rep.) jayder archer and block 2 are; Dan yukimon VS. ( new zealand Rep.) James dramman and da-king-man (greenland rep.) VS. Brandon yusik.
First round; caman used a killerken reviser e230CS, Ryu had a hard time but she destabilized and OSed it oddly.
Second round; probaly the least interesting match, jayder used wyvang wyvang s130r2f and Rayman used genbull killerken B : D and won it by OS, because jayder didn't slide shoot.
Back at the hotel-
"So do You know anything about this Rayman guy Ace?" Asked Ryu softly
"Actually, I backaround checked every participant in that tournament 1 week ago" replied ace "he came up as a clean slate; not even a birth certificate."
"He seems powerful, but he wont prove a problem after Ryu beats him" said Dan
The next day-
It was the block 1 finals Ryu VS. Rayman; they both launched, Ryu decided to go for the KO and it worked! Ryu ws moving onto the final battle. " but against who???" She thought, "will Dan be able to beat Da-king-man who he had been losing to before??!?!?!?"
Ok guys, sorry it was so short but (Spoiler Alert!!!) there will be a huge plot twist in the following chapter(s)!
"The first round battles of block 1 are; Ryu vs. (French rep.) caman donson and (Japanese Rep.) rayman saito vs. (mongolian rep.) jayder archer and block 2 are; Dan yukimon VS. ( new zealand Rep.) James dramman and da-king-man (greenland rep.) VS. Brandon yusik.
First round; caman used a killerken reviser e230CS, Ryu had a hard time but she destabilized and OSed it oddly.
Second round; probaly the least interesting match, jayder used wyvang wyvang s130r2f and Rayman used genbull killerken B : D and won it by OS, because jayder didn't slide shoot.
Back at the hotel-
"So do You know anything about this Rayman guy Ace?" Asked Ryu softly
"Actually, I backaround checked every participant in that tournament 1 week ago" replied ace "he came up as a clean slate; not even a birth certificate."
"He seems powerful, but he wont prove a problem after Ryu beats him" said Dan
The next day-
It was the block 1 finals Ryu VS. Rayman; they both launched, Ryu decided to go for the KO and it worked! Ryu ws moving onto the final battle. " but against who???" She thought, "will Dan be able to beat Da-king-man who he had been losing to before??!?!?!?"
Ok guys, sorry it was so short but (Spoiler Alert!!!) there will be a huge plot twist in the following chapter(s)!
Chapter 7
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It was the block 2 rounds; James vs Dan and da-king-man vs. Brandon.
Round 1; James used basalt leone e230r2f and got OSed by Dan
Round 2; Brandon launches and self KOes on purpose and after the match, Brandon comes to see da-king-man and was seen leaving the room with a sack of money.
It's the final match of block b when out of nowheres the light goes out.
"What's going on?" Dan asked loudly, various people used phones and lighters to see around and then it came back on and there was a loud voice speaking through blader DJ's microphone (it's not blader DJ)
" it's finally time, to destroy you Ryu!!!" Said the figure on the moving area that blader DJ stands.
"Where are the guards?!?!?!?!?!?! Never mind I don't care just get somebody down here!!!" Ace screamed into his walkie-talkie as he ran up the stair to the moving podium and launch Phoenix at man that he identified as Rayman.
"Go!!! Phoenix !!" He said
Then Rayman turned around launched duo Orion f230cf and the power literally crushed Phoenix and sent ace flying 60 feet down.
"What the heck?!?!? Somebody call an ambulance fast!!" Said Dan as he launched at Rayman as doc Wilks helped ace.
"What is wrong with you?!?!? You just lost one match!!!! " said Dan
"You don't know anything about Ryu's past!!!" Said Rayman as he deflected Dans attack and sent it slamming into a wall, stopping it. Then the cops arrived
"Orion disappear!!!" Said Rayman and in a second they were gone .....
Round 1; James used basalt leone e230r2f and got OSed by Dan
Round 2; Brandon launches and self KOes on purpose and after the match, Brandon comes to see da-king-man and was seen leaving the room with a sack of money.
It's the final match of block b when out of nowheres the light goes out.
"What's going on?" Dan asked loudly, various people used phones and lighters to see around and then it came back on and there was a loud voice speaking through blader DJ's microphone (it's not blader DJ)
" it's finally time, to destroy you Ryu!!!" Said the figure on the moving area that blader DJ stands.
"Where are the guards?!?!?!?!?!?! Never mind I don't care just get somebody down here!!!" Ace screamed into his walkie-talkie as he ran up the stair to the moving podium and launch Phoenix at man that he identified as Rayman.
"Go!!! Phoenix !!" He said
Then Rayman turned around launched duo Orion f230cf and the power literally crushed Phoenix and sent ace flying 60 feet down.
"What the heck?!?!? Somebody call an ambulance fast!!" Said Dan as he launched at Rayman as doc Wilks helped ace.
"What is wrong with you?!?!? You just lost one match!!!! " said Dan
"You don't know anything about Ryu's past!!!" Said Rayman as he deflected Dans attack and sent it slamming into a wall, stopping it. Then the cops arrived
"Orion disappear!!!" Said Rayman and in a second they were gone .....
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After the attack Ryu had been put under special surcurity, doc Wilks and his students. Ace was in the hospital with several broken & fractured bones and the doctors weren't sure if he would make it. The world tournament officials found out the Rayman had a very legit looking fake ID and that's how he got into the tournament, they had tried tracking him down but he left no trace behind. Dan stayed with Ryu and Doc Wilks, that's where they all thought would be the safest for all of them.
"What was Rayman talking about? Us not knowing about your past?" Dan asked Ryu
"We need to know, you if ace doesnt make, it will all come down on you." Said the doc
"I came from the same town as Rayman, I didn't tell anybody cause I thought he didn't recognize me. This beyblade isn't mine, it was the towns job to protect it no matter what and nobody could leave, I didn't want to spend my life in a small town so I escaped and took the bey with me. Rayman was sent to get it back and destroy me. He won't stop until he succeeds, he won't stop hunting us down" She replied
"How can we stop him?" Asked doc Wilks
"We can't. He's too powerful, his beyblade was ment as a complete counter to mine, Dan, no offence, isn't powerful enough and ace is dieing" she said
"Me and my students will track him, you two will be transferred to another safe place tommorrow and me and my student will leave after you are successfully moved." Replied doc wilks
"I'll come with you" said Dan.
"No, this will be a stealth mission that only me and my team can handle" said doc Wilks
"So you guys think I'm weak!!! All this happened cause Ryu stole that beyblade!!!" Said Dan as ran out the hotel room.
"Get back here, Rayman will track you down!!!" Replied the doc after he went chasing after Dan, after half an hour he came back without Dan
"He's gone, the HQ won't like this......" Said doc Wilks
Dan walked through the alleys hoping not to seen by Rayman.
"How could they say that!?!?!?!" Dan said out loud.
"So that's "Dan"" whispered a mysterious figure on top of a building watching Dan.
"What was Rayman talking about? Us not knowing about your past?" Dan asked Ryu
"We need to know, you if ace doesnt make, it will all come down on you." Said the doc
"I came from the same town as Rayman, I didn't tell anybody cause I thought he didn't recognize me. This beyblade isn't mine, it was the towns job to protect it no matter what and nobody could leave, I didn't want to spend my life in a small town so I escaped and took the bey with me. Rayman was sent to get it back and destroy me. He won't stop until he succeeds, he won't stop hunting us down" She replied
"How can we stop him?" Asked doc Wilks
"We can't. He's too powerful, his beyblade was ment as a complete counter to mine, Dan, no offence, isn't powerful enough and ace is dieing" she said
"Me and my students will track him, you two will be transferred to another safe place tommorrow and me and my student will leave after you are successfully moved." Replied doc wilks
"I'll come with you" said Dan.
"No, this will be a stealth mission that only me and my team can handle" said doc Wilks
"So you guys think I'm weak!!! All this happened cause Ryu stole that beyblade!!!" Said Dan as ran out the hotel room.
"Get back here, Rayman will track you down!!!" Replied the doc after he went chasing after Dan, after half an hour he came back without Dan
"He's gone, the HQ won't like this......" Said doc Wilks
Dan walked through the alleys hoping not to seen by Rayman.
"How could they say that!?!?!?!" Dan said out loud.
"So that's "Dan"" whispered a mysterious figure on top of a building watching Dan.
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Dan walked down the road as, to his unknowing, a figure dressed in black trailed behind him. Then he grabbed Dan on the shoulder, Dan then turned around and pushed him making him fall down.
"What the heck man?!?!!?!?? I was just trying to ask you something..... Good thing you don't have much muscle." Said the guy
"What do you want?!?!?! Who are you?!?!?!?!???" Dan said as he hovered over the guy.
"I just wanted to ask if you know where a guy named Rayman is? And my name is omega" said omega
"No, now get out of my sight!!!" Said Dan
"Umm, OK." Said omega As he walked off "he has some issues....." Omega also whispered.
He walked off then to around a corner to stay back and watch Dan.
"All I have to do is keep an eye on Dan and Ryu and I will find Rayman" he said out loud
"And get his f230 beyblade" he said as Dan walked off and kept walking.
Back at hotel with doc Wilks and Ryu-
"Ok, we can't wait for him any longer, we have to move, the car is outback lets go" said doc Wilks, they then went to the cars, there was 5 for his students.
They moved south toward Detroit where they would go to an undisclosed location (a warehouse).
Back with omega-
He had moved to tracking Ryu and has followed them to Detroit, where he was right outside the warehouse waiting for Rayman to arrive And like he expected there he was, on the roof. He launched and blew a big hole in the roof where he jumped into the warehouse.
"There you are" said omega as he ran into the warehouse.
"Ryu, go to the car and get out of here!!!" Said doc Wilks as him and his students battled Rayman.
She ran out to the car and hesitated to get in, "I created this and now I have to finish it" she said as she went into the warehouse and launched at Rayman.
"You have finally came to face me, huh?" Said Rayman as his duo Orion gave a barrage of attacks to dragooon dragooon 90gf.
Then omega entered and launched diablo kerbecs w145ewd
"Go kerbecs!!"
dragoon, kerbecs, genbull genbull and doc Wilks students all attacks the mighty duo Orion.
But it was no match for duo Orion, it pushed them all back.
"Dragooon, death spiral" said Ryu and her dragooon flew towards Orion full power
"Omega nova!!!" Said omega and his kerbecs' chains started rapidly hitting Orion
"Turtle crash!!" Said doc Wilks and his genbull's spirit came out, went into its shell and started spinning and hitting Orion.
But even this wasn't enough to take down Orion.
"What the heck man?!?!!?!?? I was just trying to ask you something..... Good thing you don't have much muscle." Said the guy
"What do you want?!?!?! Who are you?!?!?!?!???" Dan said as he hovered over the guy.
"I just wanted to ask if you know where a guy named Rayman is? And my name is omega" said omega
"No, now get out of my sight!!!" Said Dan
"Umm, OK." Said omega As he walked off "he has some issues....." Omega also whispered.
He walked off then to around a corner to stay back and watch Dan.
"All I have to do is keep an eye on Dan and Ryu and I will find Rayman" he said out loud
"And get his f230 beyblade" he said as Dan walked off and kept walking.
Back at hotel with doc Wilks and Ryu-
"Ok, we can't wait for him any longer, we have to move, the car is outback lets go" said doc Wilks, they then went to the cars, there was 5 for his students.
They moved south toward Detroit where they would go to an undisclosed location (a warehouse).
Back with omega-
He had moved to tracking Ryu and has followed them to Detroit, where he was right outside the warehouse waiting for Rayman to arrive And like he expected there he was, on the roof. He launched and blew a big hole in the roof where he jumped into the warehouse.
"There you are" said omega as he ran into the warehouse.
"Ryu, go to the car and get out of here!!!" Said doc Wilks as him and his students battled Rayman.
She ran out to the car and hesitated to get in, "I created this and now I have to finish it" she said as she went into the warehouse and launched at Rayman.
"You have finally came to face me, huh?" Said Rayman as his duo Orion gave a barrage of attacks to dragooon dragooon 90gf.
Then omega entered and launched diablo kerbecs w145ewd
"Go kerbecs!!"
dragoon, kerbecs, genbull genbull and doc Wilks students all attacks the mighty duo Orion.
But it was no match for duo Orion, it pushed them all back.
"Dragooon, death spiral" said Ryu and her dragooon flew towards Orion full power
"Omega nova!!!" Said omega and his kerbecs' chains started rapidly hitting Orion
"Turtle crash!!" Said doc Wilks and his genbull's spirit came out, went into its shell and started spinning and hitting Orion.
But even this wasn't enough to take down Orion.
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It was total chaos. Beyparks were flying everywheres, omega, doc Wilks and Ryu wee the only ones holding up, but they can't hold much longer.
"Again kerbecs!! Omega nova" said omega, but it's power wasn't enough against the f230 madness and it flew out of the stadium against duo Orion's power.
It was just doc Wilks and Ryu left against rayman.
They attempted a special move duet against him but just like with omega, they were no challenge against him and got KOed.
"Stop!" Said Dan and he launched Bahamdia dragoon at duo Orion
"Did u miss me?" Said Dan
"I missed destroying you!!!" Said Rayman as his Orion barrage attacked dragoon.
"Oh no you don't!" Said Dan as he hit Orion in the f230 track and sent it three get in the air.
"That's not enough to stop my rein of terror upon Ryu!!!" Said rayman as his Orion rebounded its balance.
"Dragon death strike!!" Said Dan and dragooon's spirit appeared and it slashed orion.
"That's nothing!!! Orion black star!!" Said Rayman and Orion spitting out a large black orb that hit dragooon and sent it flying.
"Dan!!!" Said Ryu as Dan was sent flying a few feet back.
"I'm fine, we need to leave like right now before this whole warehouse collapses!" Said Dan
Then out of nowhere a blade hit duo Orion and sent it a couple inches back.
"Ohhhhh!!! Guess who just did that????!!!?!? Yeah, moi!!!! Take that you sucka!!!!" Said a voice
Who else could pwn a bad guy like that? Thought Dan, it had to be ace!!!
"Wha?!?!?" Said Rayman
"Oh yeah!! It's ace!!! Physical injuries can't hold me and my new pheonix pheonix final survive down!!!" Said ace as his bey gave endless attacks to Orion.
"Orion nooo!!!!" Said Rayman as pieces of duo and f230 flew off his bey.
"Soaring Phoenix burning star attack!!!" Said ace and in no time, duo Orion's was dust.
"Nooo!!!! I was planning on stealing that bey!!! Ahh whatever." Said omega
"Hehehehe, you guys are such newbs" said ace
"Again kerbecs!! Omega nova" said omega, but it's power wasn't enough against the f230 madness and it flew out of the stadium against duo Orion's power.
It was just doc Wilks and Ryu left against rayman.
They attempted a special move duet against him but just like with omega, they were no challenge against him and got KOed.
"Stop!" Said Dan and he launched Bahamdia dragoon at duo Orion
"Did u miss me?" Said Dan
"I missed destroying you!!!" Said Rayman as his Orion barrage attacked dragoon.
"Oh no you don't!" Said Dan as he hit Orion in the f230 track and sent it three get in the air.
"That's not enough to stop my rein of terror upon Ryu!!!" Said rayman as his Orion rebounded its balance.
"Dragon death strike!!" Said Dan and dragooon's spirit appeared and it slashed orion.
"That's nothing!!! Orion black star!!" Said Rayman and Orion spitting out a large black orb that hit dragooon and sent it flying.
"Dan!!!" Said Ryu as Dan was sent flying a few feet back.
"I'm fine, we need to leave like right now before this whole warehouse collapses!" Said Dan
Then out of nowhere a blade hit duo Orion and sent it a couple inches back.
"Ohhhhh!!! Guess who just did that????!!!?!? Yeah, moi!!!! Take that you sucka!!!!" Said a voice
Who else could pwn a bad guy like that? Thought Dan, it had to be ace!!!
"Wha?!?!?" Said Rayman
"Oh yeah!! It's ace!!! Physical injuries can't hold me and my new pheonix pheonix final survive down!!!" Said ace as his bey gave endless attacks to Orion.
"Orion nooo!!!!" Said Rayman as pieces of duo and f230 flew off his bey.
"Soaring Phoenix burning star attack!!!" Said ace and in no time, duo Orion's was dust.
"Nooo!!!! I was planning on stealing that bey!!! Ahh whatever." Said omega
"Hehehehe, you guys are such newbs" said ace
Chapter 1
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2 months after the Rayman incident~
Ace recovered and the team was now working as bladers for hire, right now they were on a call to an old meuseum where there was an ancient beyblade being reported missing from their displays.
"Do we really have to stay in this meuseum? It's getting cold in here." said Dan as he shivered.
"That's why we packed blankets Dan, we got to catch the thirds in action to catch them."
"We'll set up by the beystadium exhibit, you can have first watch Ace." Said Ryu
"Ok, I'll go down by the bathrooms and please make sure Dan doesn't screw up something again." Said Dan.
"Hey!!! I heard that!!!." Said Dan as ace walked threw the meuseum.
He saw a bunch of rare or old stadium and even a few beys when he heard something, he then crouched down behind an exhibit than peeked up too see 2 guys breaking open a display with a crowbar and taking its contents.
"Stop!!'" Screamed Ace.
"Oh man, run!!!" Said one of the guys that was stealing the beyblade, him and his partner ran with the beyblade toward the basement. They entered the basement and locked the door behind them.
"Did you find them ace?" Said Ryu as she and Dan came to him
"Yeah, but they locked themselves in here" said ace as he banged against the door.
"Get out of the way ace!" Said Dan as he launched his beyblade at the door.
"NO!!! Stop Dan!!" Said ace after Dan launched.
"There are ancient artifacts in there" said ace
"Oh, sorry hehehe" said Dan as they entered the basement to find that the bent on the ceiling was opened.
"They might still be in there !" Said ace "give me a boost Dan"
"OK" said Dan as he helped ace get into the vent.
"I can't hear them moving anymore, they must have gotten out already" said ace as he came down.
The next day~
"They got past you!?!?!?" Asked the meuseum manager.
"Yes sadly. We noticed that first they stole bandit ifrit, ginga's last beyblade before he passed away and now they stole dark knight horuseus, hyoma's last beyblade, do you think this has something to do with it?" Said ace.
"It very possibly could....." Said the meuseum director.
Well that's all for tonight! Sorry for the lack of chapters
NOTE: I will not turn this story into total fan fiction, I just did this cuz it is what the peppe that requested the characters asked for
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Ace recovered and the team was now working as bladers for hire, right now they were on a call to an old meuseum where there was an ancient beyblade being reported missing from their displays.
"Do we really have to stay in this meuseum? It's getting cold in here." said Dan as he shivered.
"That's why we packed blankets Dan, we got to catch the thirds in action to catch them."
"We'll set up by the beystadium exhibit, you can have first watch Ace." Said Ryu
"Ok, I'll go down by the bathrooms and please make sure Dan doesn't screw up something again." Said Dan.
"Hey!!! I heard that!!!." Said Dan as ace walked threw the meuseum.
He saw a bunch of rare or old stadium and even a few beys when he heard something, he then crouched down behind an exhibit than peeked up too see 2 guys breaking open a display with a crowbar and taking its contents.
"Stop!!'" Screamed Ace.
"Oh man, run!!!" Said one of the guys that was stealing the beyblade, him and his partner ran with the beyblade toward the basement. They entered the basement and locked the door behind them.
"Did you find them ace?" Said Ryu as she and Dan came to him
"Yeah, but they locked themselves in here" said ace as he banged against the door.
"Get out of the way ace!" Said Dan as he launched his beyblade at the door.
"NO!!! Stop Dan!!" Said ace after Dan launched.
"There are ancient artifacts in there" said ace
"Oh, sorry hehehe" said Dan as they entered the basement to find that the bent on the ceiling was opened.
"They might still be in there !" Said ace "give me a boost Dan"
"OK" said Dan as he helped ace get into the vent.
"I can't hear them moving anymore, they must have gotten out already" said ace as he came down.
The next day~
"They got past you!?!?!?" Asked the meuseum manager.
"Yes sadly. We noticed that first they stole bandit ifrit, ginga's last beyblade before he passed away and now they stole dark knight horuseus, hyoma's last beyblade, do you think this has something to do with it?" Said ace.
"It very possibly could....." Said the meuseum director.
Well that's all for tonight! Sorry for the lack of chapters
NOTE: I will not turn this story into total fan fiction, I just did this cuz it is what the peppe that requested the characters asked for
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It was the day after the thieves got away and the museum manager, Ace, Ryu and Dan were investigating the crime scene.
"They didn't leave much evidence behind, except a very lot of mud.....
"Where is the muddiest place in the city when it rains? His isn't just "walking in a puddle mud"...." Said ace.
"Well, probably the city dump, people nicknamed it mud city." Said the meuseum manager.
"That's where we're going next then" said ace as he walked toward the exit.
"Do you need directions?" Said the manager.
"No, I'll put it in the GPS." Replied Dan
The got a taxi to the dump and stopped outside the entrance.
"Are you kids sure this is the right place" said the driver.
"Yup, this is it" said Ace.
They got out and before they entered the gate Ryu stopped
"I am not going in there, somebody could sink and smother in that mud."
"Oh C'mon, Ryu. It's really not that bad as Dan stepped thre the gate and into the mud and his foot sank up to his knees.
"It's not that bad huh? " Ace said.
"Ok, I was wrong, but we still have to search this trash heap." Said Dan.
"Fine then" said ace as he launched his Phoenix Phoenix F : S and the firebird blew its heat over the mud, hardening it.
"You could have killed me!" Said Dan.
"Nope, I'm not that lucky Dan, I'm just not that lucky. You, uh, stand there while me and Ryu handle this" said ace then Ryu burst into laughter.
"You can't just leave me here in hard mud!!" Said Dan.
"Don't worry, we'll get you after we're done." Said ace after him and Ryu left into the dump.
They walked through the wasteland, Phoenix leading the way and hardening the mud as they walked, then they heard noise, like beybattling.
"Sounds like its coming from that way" said Ryu.
They then saw the two bladers from he museum battling.
Ryu walked in one side while ace was on the other, to corner them.
"So you thought u could just run off without us finding you thieves?" Said ace.
Were not thieves, we are the rightful owners of these beys, I am jake Hagane the son of ginga and he is tyoka the son of hyoma!" Said the one with black hair.
"Ginga and Hyoma? I don't care, a thief is a thief and we are going to bring you to the HQ now." Said ace.
"Not today! Joint special move spirit blaze!" Said tyoka and his and jake's beyblade created a swirling cannon, but ace and Ryu dodged it and the cannon hit a pile of trash, stopping the beys, then Ryu and ace caught them and went back to the entrance.
"Call the HQ Dan, we got them." Said ace before he saw that Dan had fell asleep in the mud.
"They didn't leave much evidence behind, except a very lot of mud.....
"Where is the muddiest place in the city when it rains? His isn't just "walking in a puddle mud"...." Said ace.
"Well, probably the city dump, people nicknamed it mud city." Said the meuseum manager.
"That's where we're going next then" said ace as he walked toward the exit.
"Do you need directions?" Said the manager.
"No, I'll put it in the GPS." Replied Dan
The got a taxi to the dump and stopped outside the entrance.
"Are you kids sure this is the right place" said the driver.
"Yup, this is it" said Ace.
They got out and before they entered the gate Ryu stopped
"I am not going in there, somebody could sink and smother in that mud."
"Oh C'mon, Ryu. It's really not that bad as Dan stepped thre the gate and into the mud and his foot sank up to his knees.
"It's not that bad huh? " Ace said.
"Ok, I was wrong, but we still have to search this trash heap." Said Dan.
"Fine then" said ace as he launched his Phoenix Phoenix F : S and the firebird blew its heat over the mud, hardening it.
"You could have killed me!" Said Dan.
"Nope, I'm not that lucky Dan, I'm just not that lucky. You, uh, stand there while me and Ryu handle this" said ace then Ryu burst into laughter.
"You can't just leave me here in hard mud!!" Said Dan.
"Don't worry, we'll get you after we're done." Said ace after him and Ryu left into the dump.
They walked through the wasteland, Phoenix leading the way and hardening the mud as they walked, then they heard noise, like beybattling.
"Sounds like its coming from that way" said Ryu.
They then saw the two bladers from he museum battling.
Ryu walked in one side while ace was on the other, to corner them.
"So you thought u could just run off without us finding you thieves?" Said ace.
Were not thieves, we are the rightful owners of these beys, I am jake Hagane the son of ginga and he is tyoka the son of hyoma!" Said the one with black hair.
"Ginga and Hyoma? I don't care, a thief is a thief and we are going to bring you to the HQ now." Said ace.
"Not today! Joint special move spirit blaze!" Said tyoka and his and jake's beyblade created a swirling cannon, but ace and Ryu dodged it and the cannon hit a pile of trash, stopping the beys, then Ryu and ace caught them and went back to the entrance.
"Call the HQ Dan, we got them." Said ace before he saw that Dan had fell asleep in the mud.
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The team was at the police station and waited for the city's beyblade association to take tyoka and jake to the HQ. then out of nowhere a kid in a suit walked in and started shouting at the policemen
"I bailed my friend here out, why hasn't he been released yet?!?!" Said the kid
"Because he had committed a serious crime, we need time for the technacallities!" Said the policeman.
"Fine. I will come later today and he had better be released" said the kid before he left the station.
"Who was that?" Ryu asked one policeman.
"That's some rich kid named Onyx, he keeps coming to bail his friend slash personal special agent out, he should know he can't bail him out that fast for the crime he did." He replied.
"What did he do?" Asked Dan
"He tried breaking into the mayors private property to steal the mayor's collection of rare launchers and grips etc., we all know that onyx hired him to do it, but we can't prove it" said the cop.
Then right after he said that, there was a loud sound of breaking rumble, the team ran to tyoka's and Jake's cell, to see that they we're gone.
"Again?!?!? Are u kidding me?!?!?! They escaped from a police station!?!?" Said Dan.
"They're gone now, we're back at square one, but how did they have their beyblades to escape? I thought you searched them?" Said the police chief.
"No, we didn't." Said Ace as he facepalmed
"Your the fancy special agents!!! We thought you did!!, we rarely get bladers in here and now two in the past week......" Said the police chief.
The team then walked out and saw Onyx coming in, something was weird about that guy thought Ace.............
"I bailed my friend here out, why hasn't he been released yet?!?!" Said the kid
"Because he had committed a serious crime, we need time for the technacallities!" Said the policeman.
"Fine. I will come later today and he had better be released" said the kid before he left the station.
"Who was that?" Ryu asked one policeman.
"That's some rich kid named Onyx, he keeps coming to bail his friend slash personal special agent out, he should know he can't bail him out that fast for the crime he did." He replied.
"What did he do?" Asked Dan
"He tried breaking into the mayors private property to steal the mayor's collection of rare launchers and grips etc., we all know that onyx hired him to do it, but we can't prove it" said the cop.
Then right after he said that, there was a loud sound of breaking rumble, the team ran to tyoka's and Jake's cell, to see that they we're gone.
"Again?!?!? Are u kidding me?!?!?! They escaped from a police station!?!?" Said Dan.
"They're gone now, we're back at square one, but how did they have their beyblades to escape? I thought you searched them?" Said the police chief.
"No, we didn't." Said Ace as he facepalmed
"Your the fancy special agents!!! We thought you did!!, we rarely get bladers in here and now two in the past week......" Said the police chief.
The team then walked out and saw Onyx coming in, something was weird about that guy thought Ace.............
Chapter 4
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The next day~
"Well, we're back to tracking them down again." Said Ryu as they sat in a hotel room.
Ryu and Dan both looked at Ace expecting him to respond, but he looked very concentrated and he examined his computer screen.
"Huh? Sorry, I was just backaround checking this "Onyx" guy, his father was a world class fake bey distributor, before he passed." Replied Ace.
"That explains his wealth, but why are you so interesting in him?" Said Dan.
"I don't know............something about him is wierd........" Said Ace.
At the Lionel (Onyx's last name) mansion~
Onyx fed his pet tarantula, fluffy, as Infinity walked in.
"Thanks for getting me out of that dump, any progress on gathering up anybody?" Said infinity.
"Yes I did, they will be arriving tommorrow." Said Onyx.
"Nice, very nice." Said infinity.
"I've been planning this for years, none of those low-lives can resist money and money is something that I don't have a shortage of." Onyx said with a smuirk.
"Well, we're back to tracking them down again." Said Ryu as they sat in a hotel room.
Ryu and Dan both looked at Ace expecting him to respond, but he looked very concentrated and he examined his computer screen.
"Huh? Sorry, I was just backaround checking this "Onyx" guy, his father was a world class fake bey distributor, before he passed." Replied Ace.
"That explains his wealth, but why are you so interesting in him?" Said Dan.
"I don't know............something about him is wierd........" Said Ace.
At the Lionel (Onyx's last name) mansion~
Onyx fed his pet tarantula, fluffy, as Infinity walked in.
"Thanks for getting me out of that dump, any progress on gathering up anybody?" Said infinity.
"Yes I did, they will be arriving tommorrow." Said Onyx.
"Nice, very nice." Said infinity.
"I've been planning this for years, none of those low-lives can resist money and money is something that I don't have a shortage of." Onyx said with a smuirk.
Ryukiba=Ryu
Galaxy Blade=da-king-man
XKai_DranzerX=ace
Tsaigi=brandin (I think he might mean Brandon though)
Madness=omega
Crax686=jake
Infinity lazer=infinity
MineCraftAddict=tyoka
aSadisticPirate=Onyx
Oddity=hunter
). There were also grammar mistakes that you may want to fix. The overall realistic approach seems interesting, the grammar just needs work.