Oct. 27, 2013 4:14 AM
This is my first story I might upload more if u guys and I want
That was chapter one I hope u enjoyed, can u guys review it for me? I kinda just wrote it off the top of my head ( meaning no planning). I will probaly introduce the beyblades in chapter 2
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zilon slowly walked down the dark road hoping to find a place to rest after the attack.... It happened earlier that day, he was walking to his blade practice dojo and suddenly an object burst through the sky and before he even comprehended it, there was a giant explosion at the military base. He immediately ran to the dojo where he found the others looking out in the front yard , looking at the burning military base miles away, zilon joined them and everyone was in so much shock they never even noticed that he came, then master Talio told them to go inside and hide as helocopter flew through the sky.
" Call your parents, I think it's terrorists, we need to evacuate to somewheres safer" commander master Talio,
"do u think its the dragons?" Asked Zilon. "I don't know" said master Talio, as they all took out there phones. All of them tried calling there families but the phone didnt even ring, "the phone aren't working master , wat should we do?" A student asked,
" we just need to wait" replied the master. Then a sound of a speeding car rushed through the road and drove in front of the dojo. The master immediately told the students (only 5 of them) to hide in the utility close, seeing as the dojo had no backdoor. They did as he said , and hid, but it was to small no matter how much they squeezed. Zilon volunteered to hide else where and ran to the masters office/room and hid under his bed which had a over hanging blanket. He suddenly heard footsteps and angry screaming shouting commands to the master, master Talio refused saying
" u can't invade my dojo without me taking atleast one of you down" then he heard a Battle and in under a minute the powerful master was defeated, then the attacker searched the dojo and found the students. As they screamed, Zilon had to hold back from screaming. And after they left he ran out the door and ran but as he reached his house his father , the mayor, and familie's mansion ( his father was a wealthy mayor ) had been invaded and was filled with attackers. So he ran and ran and found
himself wandering down a random road at night
" Call your parents, I think it's terrorists, we need to evacuate to somewheres safer" commander master Talio,
"do u think its the dragons?" Asked Zilon. "I don't know" said master Talio, as they all took out there phones. All of them tried calling there families but the phone didnt even ring, "the phone aren't working master , wat should we do?" A student asked,
" we just need to wait" replied the master. Then a sound of a speeding car rushed through the road and drove in front of the dojo. The master immediately told the students (only 5 of them) to hide in the utility close, seeing as the dojo had no backdoor. They did as he said , and hid, but it was to small no matter how much they squeezed. Zilon volunteered to hide else where and ran to the masters office/room and hid under his bed which had a over hanging blanket. He suddenly heard footsteps and angry screaming shouting commands to the master, master Talio refused saying
" u can't invade my dojo without me taking atleast one of you down" then he heard a Battle and in under a minute the powerful master was defeated, then the attacker searched the dojo and found the students. As they screamed, Zilon had to hold back from screaming. And after they left he ran out the door and ran but as he reached his house his father , the mayor, and familie's mansion ( his father was a wealthy mayor ) had been invaded and was filled with attackers. So he ran and ran and found
himself wandering down a random road at night
That was chapter one I hope u enjoyed, can u guys review it for me? I kinda just wrote it off the top of my head ( meaning no planning). I will probaly introduce the beyblades in chapter 2