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Another story I want to evolve into a novel for some reason. So this is another story of mine! Hope you like.

Frontinus: Bloody Christmas
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3



Chapter 2 and 3 are up! Changed Chapter 1 a bit to introduce him a little more. Changed the title a little too!
Great story! Long chapters... See if you cqn keep that length. Other then that, nothing to point out really.
Awesome story love the length of the chapters and no spelling mistakes well done
*Blinks* Is this possible? People actually read my story? Finally! The length daunts most people, so I think they can't read it all and comment. Thanks so much guys! Content would be out every week.
Really awsome story dude, I loved it<3
Alright, as promised. Chapter 2 is up.
Great work on chapter 2. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes, at least I think so, and the spelling was pretty good. Keep up the chapter length, put in some character development, and BAM! Best story here! Smile
Alright. Changed almost everything but it has basically the same plot. Read it and I hope you like it!
I am actually enjoying this so much, I jjust want you to update a new chapter every minute... I doubt that will happen. Anyways... as I said before, becuase it's only the first 2 chapters, it's a little hard, but try and develop or introduce characters.
I update as much as I can. Thanks for the comment though!
Sorry for the short hiatus (which happens on everything I write) but I've added. I'm writing continuously, and just splitting them into chapters so it wouldn't be a congested wall of text.