World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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This is my first story, so i hope you all like. I try my best, I hope to get more chapters up


"Chapter one Night"
There are quite a lot of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. Try and keep this accurate and the story will be much better!
The story is really good except your spelling and grammer errors example "in-side" this should be just "inside". I'm making a story now and will be posting it soon would you like me to help you with your spelling and grammer?
No thanks, lightning blade. Thanks for the feedback, i will correct them.