Sep. 16, 2013 11:53 PM
Here is my masterpiece:
Epilogue Prts.1&2 (Click to View)
Epilogue 1: Joel David Rascoe (Click to View)
Hello. My name is Joel. I have short brown hair and brown eyes. I have many scars in my life, like the time my grandmother died. I have never been the same. But when I first start my new school things change. A girl named Nakari Martin changed my life forever. She is a pretty girl, but when I try to talk to her, my throat gets clogged up, my heart races.
What do I say? What do I do? I think.
I race over to the bookcase where my dorky friend Jarius is. I race over to my backpack to pretend I was getting something. That didn't stop him. He was literally running over to my desk. God, please help me! A miracle happened when she, Nakari Martin the prettiest girl in school, comes over and helps me up. I grabbed her hand while she was looking at me straight in the eyes. I think my heart skipped a beat. I usually cannot look people in the eyes, but this was something else. I opened my mouth to speak and what came out was...
What do I say? What do I do? I think.
I race over to the bookcase where my dorky friend Jarius is. I race over to my backpack to pretend I was getting something. That didn't stop him. He was literally running over to my desk. God, please help me! A miracle happened when she, Nakari Martin the prettiest girl in school, comes over and helps me up. I grabbed her hand while she was looking at me straight in the eyes. I think my heart skipped a beat. I usually cannot look people in the eyes, but this was something else. I opened my mouth to speak and what came out was...
Epilogue 2: The Words (Click to View)
"H-Hi Kari. How are you doing today?" I said with anticipation.
"I am doing fine. It is a lovely day isn't it?" she replied flipping her hair into the air.
My heart skipped a thousand beats. She walked away as I took out my iPod 5 to text my friend Matthew about a new video game I had saw. My teacher, Mr. Mckinney caught me. I gave him the phone, when I took out my Samsung Nexus in the bathroom. Thank the heavens for my rich parents. I came out to see Jarius. Phew! He just walked by. My other friend Caleb Mckinney, the teachers son, walked up to me with a pencil in his hand. His nickname was "Sir Farts Alot" because everytime there is silence, which is all the time, he farts.
"Thanks for my pencil," I said.
"Your welcome, Oh by the way Mr. Mckinney gave us a quiz on Biography 101," he replied.
I sighed. Just then my Kindle beeped.
"Your storage has been renewed, Mr. Joel," I read.
What could that? No. I've been hacked by my twin sister, Trina Rascoe. She deleted my stuff! I was so mad I stomped away, while not looking I bumped into...
"I am doing fine. It is a lovely day isn't it?" she replied flipping her hair into the air.
My heart skipped a thousand beats. She walked away as I took out my iPod 5 to text my friend Matthew about a new video game I had saw. My teacher, Mr. Mckinney caught me. I gave him the phone, when I took out my Samsung Nexus in the bathroom. Thank the heavens for my rich parents. I came out to see Jarius. Phew! He just walked by. My other friend Caleb Mckinney, the teachers son, walked up to me with a pencil in his hand. His nickname was "Sir Farts Alot" because everytime there is silence, which is all the time, he farts.
"Thanks for my pencil," I said.
"Your welcome, Oh by the way Mr. Mckinney gave us a quiz on Biography 101," he replied.
I sighed. Just then my Kindle beeped.
"Your storage has been renewed, Mr. Joel," I read.
What could that? No. I've been hacked by my twin sister, Trina Rascoe. She deleted my stuff! I was so mad I stomped away, while not looking I bumped into...
Chapter 1: A Feeling Inside (Click to View)
I bump into Josiah, a third grader, who had dropped all of his books. He catches my Kindle and hands it to me.
"Here you go. By the way, Mrs. Martin wants to talk to you. I think it has to be about Nakari and You, or something like that. Oh, and you left your Nintendo 3DS and Nintendo 2DS at my house," he said.
"Okay, I'll come over to get it," I say.
I walked down to her classroom, and saw her waiting to ask me a question. As I step closer, all of the kids in her third grade class start staring at me.
"Joel, did you know you knew Nakari before now?" Mrs.Martin asked.
I don't know the answer to that question. What do I say?, I thought.
The room grew very quiet to hear my answer.
"Uhh... can we talk about that in private?" I asked.
We headed towards the bus stop because it was 3:00. We talked and talked, and then...BOOM. It hit me.
"Sorry, bro. I didn't know where I was throwing the ball," Trina said sarcastically.
"Aww! She is so cute!" said Nakari.
Technically, we are twins, right? So that means she called me cute, too! I passed out from the tremendous happiness. When I woke up, I was back in my parents' mansion.
What happened?, I thought.
"I'll tell you what happened, you goofball," Trina said,"You passed out on the grass, then your girlfriend had to give you CPR for ten minutes."
"She is not my girlfriend!" I blushed.
"Not from what I saw," she said.
She walks out of my room.
"How do I come to school tomorrow without seeing her? How did she feel when she did...that? I need to ask her out. But not too quick," I say.
"You know, I could just ask her right?" Trina yelled through the door.
I open the door and pull her in.
"Quiet down you little creep. Now...Please! Please ask her for me, please?" I beg.
"Okay I will, you big baby," she said.
"Here you go. By the way, Mrs. Martin wants to talk to you. I think it has to be about Nakari and You, or something like that. Oh, and you left your Nintendo 3DS and Nintendo 2DS at my house," he said.
"Okay, I'll come over to get it," I say.
I walked down to her classroom, and saw her waiting to ask me a question. As I step closer, all of the kids in her third grade class start staring at me.
"Joel, did you know you knew Nakari before now?" Mrs.Martin asked.
I don't know the answer to that question. What do I say?, I thought.
The room grew very quiet to hear my answer.
"Uhh... can we talk about that in private?" I asked.
We headed towards the bus stop because it was 3:00. We talked and talked, and then...BOOM. It hit me.
"Sorry, bro. I didn't know where I was throwing the ball," Trina said sarcastically.
"Aww! She is so cute!" said Nakari.
Technically, we are twins, right? So that means she called me cute, too! I passed out from the tremendous happiness. When I woke up, I was back in my parents' mansion.
What happened?, I thought.
"I'll tell you what happened, you goofball," Trina said,"You passed out on the grass, then your girlfriend had to give you CPR for ten minutes."
"She is not my girlfriend!" I blushed.
"Not from what I saw," she said.
She walks out of my room.
"How do I come to school tomorrow without seeing her? How did she feel when she did...that? I need to ask her out. But not too quick," I say.
"You know, I could just ask her right?" Trina yelled through the door.
I open the door and pull her in.
"Quiet down you little creep. Now...Please! Please ask her for me, please?" I beg.
"Okay I will, you big baby," she said.
Trina to the Rescue/Trina the Devil (Click to View)
The next afternoon, Trina and Nakari were talking about my date.
I hope she says yes. I hope she says yes, I repeat in my head.
"Okay so I've settled things out with her. Today is Thursday, right. You have 2 days to get ready for your date...that I planned," she says.
I hear a choir singing in my head. O the joy I feel right now. Nothing can end this happiness.
It was time for English Literature class. We were writing poems. Our teacher Mrs.Rascoe, my mother, gave us five minutes to write one. Nakari is first in line.
Here's her poem:
Love
To dream a dream is to sleep at night
With no fears or no frights
Looking down in the grass below
I have now found my true soul
With one boy next to me
Wrapped in my arms, our destiny
This is the feeling of love
Even the voice of her just fills me with joy. It lifts me up and makes me imagine that poem as me as that boy.
The poem she read took up all of our time. It was time for lunch.
I had found out that no one liked Taco Thursday, so I went to the Taco Cafeteria. To turn around and see Nakari was a surprising shock.
"You like tacos to?" she asks me.
"Yeah they are my favorite!"I reply.
We sat down together because everyone hated, disliked and destroyed tacos. Also no one else was there.
"So you ready for our date Saturday night?" she asks.
"Sure am!" I say.
We both inch closer to each other until we were side-by-side.
She must have wanted to do more than any thing else in the world. She tapped me on the shoulder. I turned around, then sparks flew. We had actually kissed! And I was awake to see it happen. We tried to stay on planet Earth, and not the planet Uranus, so we stopped.
"I don't know what to say," I say.
"I know," she says, "Wanna hang out tonight?"
"Sure! I mean...Yeah," I say.
We both laughed together. After school, we went to the forest to talk.
"You know what? We need some place just to ourselves," she says.
How 'bout over there! Where that empty log cabin is. We could fix it up in no time. Because I got my building set, we can start now," I say.
"Then let's get started," she says.
I hope she says yes. I hope she says yes, I repeat in my head.
"Okay so I've settled things out with her. Today is Thursday, right. You have 2 days to get ready for your date...that I planned," she says.
I hear a choir singing in my head. O the joy I feel right now. Nothing can end this happiness.
It was time for English Literature class. We were writing poems. Our teacher Mrs.Rascoe, my mother, gave us five minutes to write one. Nakari is first in line.
Here's her poem:
Love
To dream a dream is to sleep at night
With no fears or no frights
Looking down in the grass below
I have now found my true soul
With one boy next to me
Wrapped in my arms, our destiny
This is the feeling of love
Even the voice of her just fills me with joy. It lifts me up and makes me imagine that poem as me as that boy.
The poem she read took up all of our time. It was time for lunch.
I had found out that no one liked Taco Thursday, so I went to the Taco Cafeteria. To turn around and see Nakari was a surprising shock.
"You like tacos to?" she asks me.
"Yeah they are my favorite!"I reply.
We sat down together because everyone hated, disliked and destroyed tacos. Also no one else was there.
"So you ready for our date Saturday night?" she asks.
"Sure am!" I say.
We both inch closer to each other until we were side-by-side.
She must have wanted to do more than any thing else in the world. She tapped me on the shoulder. I turned around, then sparks flew. We had actually kissed! And I was awake to see it happen. We tried to stay on planet Earth, and not the planet Uranus, so we stopped.
"I don't know what to say," I say.
"I know," she says, "Wanna hang out tonight?"
"Sure! I mean...Yeah," I say.
We both laughed together. After school, we went to the forest to talk.
"You know what? We need some place just to ourselves," she says.
How 'bout over there! Where that empty log cabin is. We could fix it up in no time. Because I got my building set, we can start now," I say.
"Then let's get started," she says.
The Finished Hangout (Click to View)
The hangout was almost done. I am sweating like a pig, while Ms. Dry pants is setting things up inside!!!
"Done!" I say while taking my shirt off and wiping my head.
"So beautiful! I love that display off musc...I mean craftsmanship!" she says chuckling nervously scratching her head.
I glaze at the beauty off our work. It is so awesome with the blue and red striped walls and yellow rug. It looks like a rainbow from inside.
"It is your move. Step into...Mt.Creation," I say.
"Done!" I say while taking my shirt off and wiping my head.
"So beautiful! I love that display off musc...I mean craftsmanship!" she says chuckling nervously scratching her head.
I glaze at the beauty off our work. It is so awesome with the blue and red striped walls and yellow rug. It looks like a rainbow from inside.
"It is your move. Step into...Mt.Creation," I say.
can't wait until the next part is up if you can get to 120-290 pages you could turn this into a book and sell it!