Sep. 29, 2009 12:06 PM
Sep. 29, 2009 8:25 PM
Pretty good. I would work on the pacing a little though, it seemed to move too quick. I know it was 1:30 but there's still alot you can do in 1:30
Sep. 29, 2009 9:28 PM
(Sep. 29, 2009 8:25 PM)fragbait Wrote: [ -> ]Pretty good. I would work on the pacing a little though, it seemed to move too quick. I know it was 1:30 but there's still alot you can do in 1:30i guess your right but it was a fast paced fight and its hard to not make black stars fights quick his fights tend to happen quickly