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Hey folks, that weird kid's making a new story again. This doesn't mean Kazuki's Quest and the Avatar FanFic won't be concluded, I just want to refresh my writing slate with a new story.

Without Further Ado:
Chapter 1: "Client (Click to View)
A good, interesting story. You just need to be careful about your grammar. Other than that, you're good.
(Sep. 11, 2013  8:18 AM)jacolal Wrote: [ -> ]A good, interesting story. You just need to be careful about your grammar. Other than that, you're good.

Thank you!
Can you explain the grammar issues in PM?