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This is my awesome Beyblade story! Please read it and rate it! Post your suggestions and I'll try to add them. Now have fun and join Kago Amano in his awesome adventure which is a new Fan Fiction edition to the Beyblade Metal Fight Saga...
BEYBLADE METAL FIGHT SABER BATTLES!
I like it. But what kind of beys r they using
Seems okay, there was 1 spelling mistake and 1 grammatical mistake, I wont vote until the story really gets rolling, but seems okay right now.
(Sep. 10, 2013  12:46 AM)fury sagittero Wrote: [ -> ]I like it. But what kind of beys r they using
They are using MFB 5 Parts. Like Storm Pegasus. They might change though. Tongue_out
Sorry for double post, but this story's on hiatus until WBO weekly goes up (hopefully) this/next week.
This is fairly good. It's nicely formatted and appropriately spaced. I think you need to add more content so that it can develop a bit more. Maybe more details can help...

Overall, I like how this is starting.
Battle 2 is up!

Battle 3 is up! This chapter features a chat between Chiba and Kago!

Guys please post! This is my triple post... Anyways this is Battle 4! Two in a day!

This Battle features Kago's arrival at the Academy!

Dude... You can do that kind of thng if it's a update for the story. And looking good. Try and keep the grammar errors to the minimum... I saw quite a lot of punctuation and spelling errors in this. Other than the, good work.
Thanks! I'll try to fix them!
Who's gonna win? This is an epic battle between Kago and Hikaru. Who will win? Read now!

A mysterious note appears. Who is the sender? Find out today by reading!

Any thoughts on the story? I know it's a bit slow, but the chapters are a bit shorts. Volume 1 should be completed soon! 1 volume is 10 chapters. I will hopefully have many volumes, but people have to read! The way I know if you're reading is if you post or vote in the poll. I want this story to keep going.since it's pretty good so please comment! Wink
What a story! Keep going!
Battle 7 is up! VERY VERY SHORT!

Here is the 8th Chapter. 2 in a day!

Well written!
I am afraid that I will wrap up this story on the 9th Battle. I mean this should have at least 1,00 views by now. I'm afraid this is it. I may not to more stories for a while as now I will be moving my strengths to Testing. Thanks to all who read, but this is the end!

Beyblade MF Saber Battles 9/9/13 - 10/20/13.
Thanks for reading. Kago and Co. Thank you!