Sep. 03, 2013 12:08 AM
Hello! I know I'm new, but I got this great idea called Galaxy Warriors! 
Here's a little synopsis of what the idea of Galaxy Warriors is:
Ok, now that the synopsis is out of the way, I'll write the prologue
**Note: I will try to write at least one chapter a week**
**Note: I'm picking up right where Metal Fury left off. If this succeeds, I'll continue to Shogun Steel!**
True Forms Awaken?!
Gingka and Kyoya were about to settle their rivalry.
"I have defeated the nine other legendary bladers. The last one is you, Gingka! Battle me now!" Kyoya said, pointing at Gingka with a determined look on his face.
"Ok, Kyoya, I would love to battle you!" Gingka said cheerfully, getting his bey out.
"3...2...1.. Let it..RIP!!" They said simultaneously.
Pegasus and Leone both hit the stadium at a good angle and started circling each other.
"Do your best out there, guys!" Madoka called from the stand.
Pegasus goes in for an attack, and hits Leone with a fury of attacks. Leone just keeps spinning calmly, taking the hits. "Pegasus, mirage mode!" Gingka called out. Pegasus switches gear, and goes in for another attack. "Leone, dodge it!" Kyoya calls out, swinging his arm. Leone successfully dodges the attack, and Pegasus starts circling the stadium again.
Then, all of a sudden, Pegasus and Leone start to glow blue and green. They both stop at the center of the stadium. Their lights become brighter and brighter, until Gingka and his friends had to cover their eyes. When the light died down, there were white feathers floating everywhere, and a lot of fog in the middle of the dull, gray stadium.
"Wha..what just happened?!" Madoka shouts out. She grabs out her computer.
The fog clears away and instead of two beys in the middle, there are two people around Gingka's age!
The first one, which is a girl, has white wings like Pegasus. She has deep, galaxy blue eyes and light blue hair. She is wearing a darker blue headband, with a Pegasus head on it (Like Gingka's) and has blue gloves. She is wearing a short blue coat, that is about as long as her elbows, a red shirt, and a pure white belt. Below her belt, was a frilly blue skirt with Pegasus's facebolt on the side of it. She is also wearing long, white boots with dark blue tips on the end of her boots.
The second one is a boy with lion ears and a tail. His hair looks a bit ruffled, like a lion's mane, and his eyes are a striking yellow. He has fangs, a lion nose,and a few whiskers on the side of his face. He is wearing a green coat with short sleeves, which has Leone's facebolt on the right shoulder. He is wearing a yellow shirt and a brown belt, with dark blue pants. On his wrists are criss-crossed green bands.
The girl turns around to Gingka and says "At your service master. Pegasus, the light in the darkness, is here to serve you!" She gave a smile to Gingka's puzzled face.
**Any names, places, or character from the show belong to their rightful owners! I'm just a fan that wanted to make a small story on it !!
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*Reads rules* I know fanfics aren't that popular here, but I still wanted to share it with other people. I would appreciate comments, though c:
Here's a little synopsis of what the idea of Galaxy Warriors is:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Gingka and his friends finally defeat Nemesis. The world was saved, but that's not all that was saved. Long before Gingka's time, the constellations ruled the sky. Two of them, Pegasus and L-Drago left their constellations and went into star fragments. Their true forms were very human. But, they couldn't leave the star fragment unless they were created into beys. The ancients created their beys and they became Meteor L-Drago and Galaxy Pegasus (At the time). Human forms, you might ask yourself. Pegasus was really a girl, with white wings, light blue hair, and had horse ears and a tail. She brought goodness upon the earth. Meanwhile, L-Drago was a boy with bright orange, spikey hair and was wearing a dark purple coat. He also had dragon ears and horns on him. Pegasus, his sister, was able to seal away him long ago. Years later, more constellations came down into beys. Beys and Bladers used to get very close, so close that each knew the back of each other's hand. Then, Nemesis casted a dark spell across the land that the bey's true form (humanish form) was to be sealed away. Instead, they had to use their alternative forms, the beast forms (or bit beast if your going old school). Now, that the seal is broken, the beys can reveal their true forms to their bladers....
**Note, only one blader with one type of bey [Example:Gingka and Pegasus] will have the true form, mostly main characters
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**Note, only one blader with one type of bey [Example:Gingka and Pegasus] will have the true form, mostly main characters
**Ok, now that the synopsis is out of the way, I'll write the prologue
**Note: I will try to write at least one chapter a week**
**Note: I'm picking up right where Metal Fury left off. If this succeeds, I'll continue to Shogun Steel!**
Prologue (Click to View)
True Forms Awaken?!
Gingka and Kyoya were about to settle their rivalry.
"I have defeated the nine other legendary bladers. The last one is you, Gingka! Battle me now!" Kyoya said, pointing at Gingka with a determined look on his face.
"Ok, Kyoya, I would love to battle you!" Gingka said cheerfully, getting his bey out.
"3...2...1.. Let it..RIP!!" They said simultaneously.
Pegasus and Leone both hit the stadium at a good angle and started circling each other.
"Do your best out there, guys!" Madoka called from the stand.
Pegasus goes in for an attack, and hits Leone with a fury of attacks. Leone just keeps spinning calmly, taking the hits. "Pegasus, mirage mode!" Gingka called out. Pegasus switches gear, and goes in for another attack. "Leone, dodge it!" Kyoya calls out, swinging his arm. Leone successfully dodges the attack, and Pegasus starts circling the stadium again.
Then, all of a sudden, Pegasus and Leone start to glow blue and green. They both stop at the center of the stadium. Their lights become brighter and brighter, until Gingka and his friends had to cover their eyes. When the light died down, there were white feathers floating everywhere, and a lot of fog in the middle of the dull, gray stadium.
"Wha..what just happened?!" Madoka shouts out. She grabs out her computer.
The fog clears away and instead of two beys in the middle, there are two people around Gingka's age!
The first one, which is a girl, has white wings like Pegasus. She has deep, galaxy blue eyes and light blue hair. She is wearing a darker blue headband, with a Pegasus head on it (Like Gingka's) and has blue gloves. She is wearing a short blue coat, that is about as long as her elbows, a red shirt, and a pure white belt. Below her belt, was a frilly blue skirt with Pegasus's facebolt on the side of it. She is also wearing long, white boots with dark blue tips on the end of her boots.
The second one is a boy with lion ears and a tail. His hair looks a bit ruffled, like a lion's mane, and his eyes are a striking yellow. He has fangs, a lion nose,and a few whiskers on the side of his face. He is wearing a green coat with short sleeves, which has Leone's facebolt on the right shoulder. He is wearing a yellow shirt and a brown belt, with dark blue pants. On his wrists are criss-crossed green bands.
The girl turns around to Gingka and says "At your service master. Pegasus, the light in the darkness, is here to serve you!" She gave a smile to Gingka's puzzled face.
Chapter 1 (Click to View)
Who Are You?!
My Master seemed to stare at me in confusion.
"I'm ready to serve you!" I said, hoping Gingka would say something. I ruffled my frilly skirt.
"This is impossible?!" Madoka, I think that's her name, cried out.
"Allow us to explain ourselves," Leone started to say, "When you guys defeated Nemesis, you release our true forms. We were trapped into our beast forms by Nemesis and Hades. We should be thanking you guys. These are our true forms, but, be careful! We can only be in these forms for twenty-four hours, precisely one day. Got it?" Leone talked so calmly, like a real lion, to the confused bladers.
"What I don't get is that why no one told us about this before." Kyoya said, turning and crossing his arms.
"It's not like we didn't want you to know! It just that we couldn't tell you!" I yelled at him. I flew up and landed in front of him. "Listen,you have another problem now. We actually came from the galaxies and we need to return there before...." I trailed off.
"Pegasus is right," Leone walked up calmly to us, "If we don't return, things could get out of hand."
"Wait, if you need to return to the galaxy, what is going to happen to beys you emerged from?" Gingka butted in with a confused expression on his face.
"Well, a piece of us will reside in your beys, so they'll work properly." I said, feeling smart inside. "Until then, I will travel with you, Master."
"Uhh, you can stop calling me 'Master'. Just call me Gingka!" He said with a grin on his face.
"Okay, Gingka!" I said with a smile.
"One mess ends and another one starts..." Kyoya mumbled under his breath.
"We need to find the others!" I turned to Gingka. "They should be with your other friends!" I flexed my wings in anticipation. If we didn't get everyone in time, things would be bad. Leone hops out of the stadium and walks up to Madoka and Yuki.
"Hey, can I see your bey for a moment." Leone asked Yuki. Yuki takes out his Anubis and Leone's eyes narrow.
"Great..it's Anibus....that loud mouth..." He mumbled.
"Err, Mr. Leone sir, should I launch my Anubis?" Yuki asked Leone politely.
"Yes, let's get this over with.." Yuki ran out of the stands and came up to the stadium that Kyoya and Gingka were using. He launched Anubis with an amazing launch. Anubis landed in the stadium, made a few sparks from it's low gravity center, and went to the centered. It started to glow, just like Leone and Pegasus did in the before battle, and a dark blue flash filled the park. Taking the bey's place was a boy with deep black hair. He was wearing a hoodie and instead of a normal hood, he had a jackle-shaped hood. His hood was up and he had narrowed green eyes. His left hand was in his pocket. In his right hand, there was a giant staff.
"So, finally free again! Hey, it's Leone and Pegasus!" He said with a yawn. He waved a Pegasus, just her.
"It's so good to see you again Anubis!" I said with a smile.
"Yea..hello.." Leone said, looking in the difference.
"Man, that Leone is as cold as Kyoya.." Madoka mumbled.
"So..you...your my bey...Mr.Anubis, sir? Yuki said shakily.
"Yup! Yuki right? It's so good to finally talk to ya! You can call me Anubis, okay?" Anubis said with a smile.
"Well, I guess we now have new friends!" Gingka said. " Pegasus, come with me! Let's see who else discovered their new bey friends!"
I happily ran up to Gingka. He started to walk toward the WBBA.
"Wait, won't someone think I'm a bit...strange." I said feeling a bit embarrassed. No matter how many times I saved the world by Gingka's side, I still felt embarrassed.
"Don't worry about it. Your Pegasus! You saved the world countless times. And....I consider you a great friend." Gingka turned to me and said happily. We both walked out together.
My Master seemed to stare at me in confusion.
"I'm ready to serve you!" I said, hoping Gingka would say something. I ruffled my frilly skirt.
"This is impossible?!" Madoka, I think that's her name, cried out.
"Allow us to explain ourselves," Leone started to say, "When you guys defeated Nemesis, you release our true forms. We were trapped into our beast forms by Nemesis and Hades. We should be thanking you guys. These are our true forms, but, be careful! We can only be in these forms for twenty-four hours, precisely one day. Got it?" Leone talked so calmly, like a real lion, to the confused bladers.
"What I don't get is that why no one told us about this before." Kyoya said, turning and crossing his arms.
"It's not like we didn't want you to know! It just that we couldn't tell you!" I yelled at him. I flew up and landed in front of him. "Listen,you have another problem now. We actually came from the galaxies and we need to return there before...." I trailed off.
"Pegasus is right," Leone walked up calmly to us, "If we don't return, things could get out of hand."
"Wait, if you need to return to the galaxy, what is going to happen to beys you emerged from?" Gingka butted in with a confused expression on his face.
"Well, a piece of us will reside in your beys, so they'll work properly." I said, feeling smart inside. "Until then, I will travel with you, Master."
"Uhh, you can stop calling me 'Master'. Just call me Gingka!" He said with a grin on his face.
"Okay, Gingka!" I said with a smile.
"One mess ends and another one starts..." Kyoya mumbled under his breath.
"We need to find the others!" I turned to Gingka. "They should be with your other friends!" I flexed my wings in anticipation. If we didn't get everyone in time, things would be bad. Leone hops out of the stadium and walks up to Madoka and Yuki.
"Hey, can I see your bey for a moment." Leone asked Yuki. Yuki takes out his Anubis and Leone's eyes narrow.
"Great..it's Anibus....that loud mouth..." He mumbled.
"Err, Mr. Leone sir, should I launch my Anubis?" Yuki asked Leone politely.
"Yes, let's get this over with.." Yuki ran out of the stands and came up to the stadium that Kyoya and Gingka were using. He launched Anubis with an amazing launch. Anubis landed in the stadium, made a few sparks from it's low gravity center, and went to the centered. It started to glow, just like Leone and Pegasus did in the before battle, and a dark blue flash filled the park. Taking the bey's place was a boy with deep black hair. He was wearing a hoodie and instead of a normal hood, he had a jackle-shaped hood. His hood was up and he had narrowed green eyes. His left hand was in his pocket. In his right hand, there was a giant staff.
"So, finally free again! Hey, it's Leone and Pegasus!" He said with a yawn. He waved a Pegasus, just her.
"It's so good to see you again Anubis!" I said with a smile.
"Yea..hello.." Leone said, looking in the difference.
"Man, that Leone is as cold as Kyoya.." Madoka mumbled.
"So..you...your my bey...Mr.Anubis, sir? Yuki said shakily.
"Yup! Yuki right? It's so good to finally talk to ya! You can call me Anubis, okay?" Anubis said with a smile.
"Well, I guess we now have new friends!" Gingka said. " Pegasus, come with me! Let's see who else discovered their new bey friends!"
I happily ran up to Gingka. He started to walk toward the WBBA.
"Wait, won't someone think I'm a bit...strange." I said feeling a bit embarrassed. No matter how many times I saved the world by Gingka's side, I still felt embarrassed.
"Don't worry about it. Your Pegasus! You saved the world countless times. And....I consider you a great friend." Gingka turned to me and said happily. We both walked out together.
**Any names, places, or character from the show belong to their rightful owners! I'm just a fan that wanted to make a small story on it !!
***Reads rules* I know fanfics aren't that popular here, but I still wanted to share it with other people. I would appreciate comments, though c: