Aug. 21, 2013 2:28 AM
Hey! This is my second beyblade story. I'd love it if you could comment, and any character requests would be great. I need someone to be the biggest baddest evil villian in the story character ASAP, this is a important role so I would please like the forms for it to be as good as you can make it! No matter what role it is you are asking for, ( Which you should put on your request) just do your best on the requests and I'll probably let you in.
Chapter 1 is up..
Chapter 1 :
The first thing I was to feel wasn't the pain, it was like a hard punch like strike from the kinetic energy of the a strange weaponry that was slung into my back. The next thing I felt is a very hot like sulfur burn. Lastly, my back went through a severe numbness and extreme pain. Everything suddenly blacked out, and the only thing I could hear then was "Draco... Draco Latch! "
I then opened my eyes to see that I was dreaming. I was in a hallway full of bricks, but somehow the old brown bricks looked like sand.Someone I somehow recognized as my best friend looked me in the eye. " Draco!!! Wake up! " I pushed off of the ground with all my might to get on my knees. The push slightly hurt my arms a bit, bringing me to my knees. " Today's your first Colosseum Match! You can't be late for your first one, they'll take you out! " I was able to get up to my feet, brushing myself off- I paused looking in his eyes for a second. " Colosseum Match? Wha-... what's that? " I puzzled, he just looked irritated however. " I know your new but really it's not a good time to play 'who's that Pokemon?' okay?! A Colosseum match is a extremely dangerous beyblade match. What makes it so dangerous is, what ever damage your beyblade take, you also take in a similar if not same spot. ! Now come on we got a tag team match to win! " He ran through the hallway through some door. I sat here and paused at what he said. " What's a beyblade? "
Although I couldn't admit it, I had forgotten everything except for how to move and English. The more I did, the more I started to remember things from my past- though so far, everything I had remembered was useless. It took a lot of thought, but I was able to remember how to run. On my first attempt I failed, though I got up and started running again, trying to remind myself left goes after right.It was then that I repeatedly tried over and over again, in order to make my way through the doors that lie in front of me.
Stepping on top of small platforms, one after another, I made my way to the battlefield my memory has remembered as the stadium. My friend stood behind me, waiting for me to get my launcher and bey blade ready for the battle. The man in blue Oxford shirt is worn, as well as black slacks, black leather shoes and a black bow tie. Latex were worn by this man for sanitary reasons. The man wore a patch on the left breast bearing the insignia of the organization sanctioning the fight. This man, who served as an announcer, also wore a patch on his left sleeve bearing the flag of his home country. My memory told me that his is especially common in matches between fighters from two different countries. He grabbed his microphone, hitting on it a couple times and singing jazz music to test that it was working. As loud as he could shout, he exclaimed " This match is a 4 man tag team match for a shot at being a bey warrior for the entire West Side of the World! " I wanted to ask what the prize meant, but I did not understand. Noticing the other bladers whip out materials that struck my memory. They were taking out their beyblades and launchers, I still didn't know how I knew this, though it didn't seem to matter. At that point, everything I knew about my beyblade, how to beyblade, and the rules of beyblade hit me. I slid my hand into my pocket and grabbed my bey and launcher, and prepared myself to launch.
Before the man could carry on, I took a second to study my bey, and the foes beyblades. First was mine, saying the statistics of them all quietly. " Diablo Horogium BD145RSF. My customized beyblade and partner beyblade. A beyblade that is better at Anti-Attack than anything else, and does a damn good job at it. It's fusion wheel is Diablo. Diablo is one of the heaviest Metal Wheels in the game. Following the same scheme as all of Diablo Nemesis X
's parts, the Diablo 4D Metal Wheel integrates several Beyblades' design points. Because Kreis Cygnus was not out at the time of Diablo Nemesis's release, the latter was the one to first introduce a semi-free-spinning gimmick, and the placement of the Metal Frame in Ultimate Balance Mode was also new to the hobby.he Horogium Clear Wheel was released in a grayish-blue color. It is gear shaped, with white Roman Numerals reminiscent of a clock decorating the circumference. However, there is a rectangular gap where "III" is supposed to be and 2 clock hands causing irregular weight distribution. Therefore, this Clear Wheel shouldn't be used in any Defense or Stamina combos. However, Horogium exposes the slopes on the Screw Metal Wheel, and can be used in Attack customs utilizing it.BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. And lastley RSF, or Rubber Semi-Flat, is an SF Bottom completely made out of rubber. It is essentially a flat tip with a smaller radius, affording it a firm, defensive grip on the Stadium, but still allowing for a somewhat aggressive movement pattern with the proper launch. Its drawbacks, however, are that it has shown major weaknesses against Left-Spin Beyblades such as Lightning L Drago, much like RS. RSF, like most Rubber Performance Tips, suffers from poor Stamina, although it has been shown to have slightly more Stamina than RS, due to a wider surface area, resulting in better balance at the end of a battle.
RSF has two Mold variations. The first mold, released with Ray Gil 100RSF and Blitz Unicorno 100RSF, has a harder rubber than the second mold, which was released in Random Booster Vol.7 Beat Lynx, specifically with the Bey Tornado Horuseus 130RSF. The second mold appears to be made of a softer rubber, and as a result behaves more aggressively than the first mold. This should be taken into consideration when choosing a method of obtaining an RSF. Due to my calculations, the beyblade I have chosen for battle- like I assumed at first, should be more anti-attack than anything, and should defiantly be great at it's job at that. " I talked to myself quietly under my breath so it could not be easily heard by the opponents.
Chapter 2(unfinished)
Roles of people, and roles I would like to be filled
Chapter 1 is up..
Chapter 1 :
Spoiler (Click to View)
The first thing I was to feel wasn't the pain, it was like a hard punch like strike from the kinetic energy of the a strange weaponry that was slung into my back. The next thing I felt is a very hot like sulfur burn. Lastly, my back went through a severe numbness and extreme pain. Everything suddenly blacked out, and the only thing I could hear then was "Draco... Draco Latch! "
I then opened my eyes to see that I was dreaming. I was in a hallway full of bricks, but somehow the old brown bricks looked like sand.Someone I somehow recognized as my best friend looked me in the eye. " Draco!!! Wake up! " I pushed off of the ground with all my might to get on my knees. The push slightly hurt my arms a bit, bringing me to my knees. " Today's your first Colosseum Match! You can't be late for your first one, they'll take you out! " I was able to get up to my feet, brushing myself off- I paused looking in his eyes for a second. " Colosseum Match? Wha-... what's that? " I puzzled, he just looked irritated however. " I know your new but really it's not a good time to play 'who's that Pokemon?' okay?! A Colosseum match is a extremely dangerous beyblade match. What makes it so dangerous is, what ever damage your beyblade take, you also take in a similar if not same spot. ! Now come on we got a tag team match to win! " He ran through the hallway through some door. I sat here and paused at what he said. " What's a beyblade? "
Although I couldn't admit it, I had forgotten everything except for how to move and English. The more I did, the more I started to remember things from my past- though so far, everything I had remembered was useless. It took a lot of thought, but I was able to remember how to run. On my first attempt I failed, though I got up and started running again, trying to remind myself left goes after right.It was then that I repeatedly tried over and over again, in order to make my way through the doors that lie in front of me.
Stepping on top of small platforms, one after another, I made my way to the battlefield my memory has remembered as the stadium. My friend stood behind me, waiting for me to get my launcher and bey blade ready for the battle. The man in blue Oxford shirt is worn, as well as black slacks, black leather shoes and a black bow tie. Latex were worn by this man for sanitary reasons. The man wore a patch on the left breast bearing the insignia of the organization sanctioning the fight. This man, who served as an announcer, also wore a patch on his left sleeve bearing the flag of his home country. My memory told me that his is especially common in matches between fighters from two different countries. He grabbed his microphone, hitting on it a couple times and singing jazz music to test that it was working. As loud as he could shout, he exclaimed " This match is a 4 man tag team match for a shot at being a bey warrior for the entire West Side of the World! " I wanted to ask what the prize meant, but I did not understand. Noticing the other bladers whip out materials that struck my memory. They were taking out their beyblades and launchers, I still didn't know how I knew this, though it didn't seem to matter. At that point, everything I knew about my beyblade, how to beyblade, and the rules of beyblade hit me. I slid my hand into my pocket and grabbed my bey and launcher, and prepared myself to launch.
Before the man could carry on, I took a second to study my bey, and the foes beyblades. First was mine, saying the statistics of them all quietly. " Diablo Horogium BD145RSF. My customized beyblade and partner beyblade. A beyblade that is better at Anti-Attack than anything else, and does a damn good job at it. It's fusion wheel is Diablo. Diablo is one of the heaviest Metal Wheels in the game. Following the same scheme as all of Diablo Nemesis X
's parts, the Diablo 4D Metal Wheel integrates several Beyblades' design points. Because Kreis Cygnus was not out at the time of Diablo Nemesis's release, the latter was the one to first introduce a semi-free-spinning gimmick, and the placement of the Metal Frame in Ultimate Balance Mode was also new to the hobby.he Horogium Clear Wheel was released in a grayish-blue color. It is gear shaped, with white Roman Numerals reminiscent of a clock decorating the circumference. However, there is a rectangular gap where "III" is supposed to be and 2 clock hands causing irregular weight distribution. Therefore, this Clear Wheel shouldn't be used in any Defense or Stamina combos. However, Horogium exposes the slopes on the Screw Metal Wheel, and can be used in Attack customs utilizing it.BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. And lastley RSF, or Rubber Semi-Flat, is an SF Bottom completely made out of rubber. It is essentially a flat tip with a smaller radius, affording it a firm, defensive grip on the Stadium, but still allowing for a somewhat aggressive movement pattern with the proper launch. Its drawbacks, however, are that it has shown major weaknesses against Left-Spin Beyblades such as Lightning L Drago, much like RS. RSF, like most Rubber Performance Tips, suffers from poor Stamina, although it has been shown to have slightly more Stamina than RS, due to a wider surface area, resulting in better balance at the end of a battle.RSF has two Mold variations. The first mold, released with Ray Gil 100RSF and Blitz Unicorno 100RSF, has a harder rubber than the second mold, which was released in Random Booster Vol.7 Beat Lynx, specifically with the Bey Tornado Horuseus 130RSF. The second mold appears to be made of a softer rubber, and as a result behaves more aggressively than the first mold. This should be taken into consideration when choosing a method of obtaining an RSF. Due to my calculations, the beyblade I have chosen for battle- like I assumed at first, should be more anti-attack than anything, and should defiantly be great at it's job at that. " I talked to myself quietly under my breath so it could not be easily heard by the opponents.
Spoiler (Click to View)
I looked down the back of my shoulder to see my friend next to me. The announcer was explaining what the rules for a tag team match and what the rewards were, however regardless of the fact that I needed to, I payed no attention to what he had said. It was then that I realized the appearance of my friend very closely... Studying every nanometer of the clothing, skin, and hair they wore, making sure that every single specimen added up to the hypothesis I had estimated.
"Your..., a girl?" I asked my best friend, thinking it would be okay. Though she did not understand why I was asking such a stupid question, her facial expression was a lot more enraged than enigmatic, you could tell she wanted to pop me in the jaw the persise second that question slipped from my mouth. She canceled the harsh words she was going to say, knowing it isn't the time or the place for any of the violent actions and insults she was going to do. Even so, everyone could tell she was getting ready to lash out of me. It was then that my vision had collided with a ball of green flames; as if my vision and the light had battled and the light won by stadium out.
As the light went away, the image of a school that I had naturally known as Lange middle school. This image WAS a memory, there was no doubt about it.
How to make a character request [spoiler]
Character name:
Age:
Appearance:
Bio:
Lifestyle:
Beyblade name: (Including track and tip.)
Element(Please not fire, fire element is waaaayyyy overused.)
Beyblades special move(s):
Any particular abillities the beyblade has:
"Your..., a girl?" I asked my best friend, thinking it would be okay. Though she did not understand why I was asking such a stupid question, her facial expression was a lot more enraged than enigmatic, you could tell she wanted to pop me in the jaw the persise second that question slipped from my mouth. She canceled the harsh words she was going to say, knowing it isn't the time or the place for any of the violent actions and insults she was going to do. Even so, everyone could tell she was getting ready to lash out of me. It was then that my vision had collided with a ball of green flames; as if my vision and the light had battled and the light won by stadium out.
As the light went away, the image of a school that I had naturally known as Lange middle school. This image WAS a memory, there was no doubt about it.
How to make a character request [spoiler]
Character name:
Age:
Appearance:
Bio:
Lifestyle:
Beyblade name: (Including track and tip.)
Element(Please not fire, fire element is waaaayyyy overused.)
Beyblades special move(s):
Any particular abillities the beyblade has:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Draco Latch Main Character, uses a Diablo Tempo- Fulfilled by themeeny7
Yizui Akato, dracos friend/co main character, uses a phantom sagittario- furfilled by Jacolal
Aaron Green,Role in story has not been decided yet, uses a Storm Piper.-Leone19
X Kysosomo, Role in story has not been decided yet, uses a Death Dragoon E230 CF
Yizui Akato, dracos friend/co main character, uses a phantom sagittario- furfilled by Jacolal
Aaron Green,Role in story has not been decided yet, uses a Storm Piper.-Leone19
X Kysosomo, Role in story has not been decided yet, uses a Death Dragoon E230 CF
