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Just wrote this today. Hmm, does anyone disagree with me on the Overall part, on whether this is a good set to buy or not? Also, any comments, critiques, or fixes? Or, any formatting errors?
Quote:{{Setbox
| image = Meteor_shower.jpg
| full item name = Meteor Shower Attack Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-88B and B-127
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

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'''Note:''' This set's release is exclusive to [[Hasbro]].

==Contents==
*BB-88B [[Meteo L Drago LW105LF]] (Opaque yellow Face, black Clear Wheel, opaque red Track and Tip)
*B-127 Basalt Beafowl BD145RSF (Twisted Befall BD145RSF) (Translucent green Clear Wheel, opaque green Track, black Tip)
*Two Ripcord Launchers (Black and orange)

==Overall==
This Set has many useful parts, the highlights of it being the [[Basalt_Horogium_145WD#Metal_Wheel:_Basalt|Basalt Metal Wheel]], and the BD145 Track. Although Basalt is outclassed by other 4D Metal Wheels such as Death and Duo and a few Synchrom combos from Zero-G, it has impressive defensive properties due to its heavy weight, even with the "Spira Staircase of Death" it possesses. BD145 also plays a huge role in successful Defense customs due to its ability to block low attackers, and to significantly increase the weight of a Beyblade. Beafowl, LW105, and LF usually have no use in today's Metagame, however. Beafowl can be replaced by other Clear Wheels which are balanced, LW105 is outclassed by lower tracks, such as 90 and 85, and LF is outclassed for Attack customizations by rubber tips, an example being LRF. Meteo, L Drago II, and RSF can be utilized in Spin Stealing and [[Defense]] combos respectively. For example, Meteo L Drago can be used in the custom Meteo L Drago CH120EWD effectively, mainly because of the rubber placed on its Clear Wheel which helps absorption. Although outclassed by RDF, RSF can be used effectively in defensive combos, due to its grip on the stadium floor and its higher surface area to spin on than RS, which improves its overall balance. Although Befall, LW105, and LF are severely outclassed in today's metagame, Basalt, BD145, and the other parts in this set more than make up for it. For this reason, '''this Set should only be purchased by beginners who have no access to TAKARA-TOMY Beyblades and who want to gain a few competitive parts.'''

==Gallery==

[[CategoryConfusedet]]
Quote:{{Setbox
| image = Meteor_shower.jpg
| full item name = Meteor Shower Attack Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-88B and B-127
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

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'''Note:''' This Set's release is exclusive to [[Hasbro]].

==Contents==
*BB-88B [[Meteo L Drago LW105LF]] (Opague yellow Face, black Clear Wheel, opague red Track and tip Bottom)
*B-127 Basalt Befall Beafowl BD145RSF (Twisted Befall BD145RSF) (Translucent green Clear Wheel, opague green Track, black tip Bottom)
*Two Ripcord Launchers (Black and orange)

==Overall==
This Set has many useful parts, the highlights of it being the Basalt Metal Wheel, and the BD145 Track. Basalt has impressive defensive properties due to its heavy weight, even with the "staircase of death" it possesses. BD145 also plays a huge property (Word choice?) for Defense purposes because of its ability to block low attackers, and to increase the weight of the Beyblade significantly. Befall, LW105, and LF usually have no use in today's Metagame, but Meteo, L Drago II, and RSF can be utilized in Spin Stealing and [[Defense]] combos respectively. For example, Meteo L Drago II can be used in the custom Meteo L Drago II CH120EWD/WD effectively, mainly because of the rubber placed on its Clear Wheel. Although outclassed by RDF, RSF can somewhat be used effectively in Defensive combos, due to its grip on the stadium floor, and having more surface area to spin on than RS, which improves its balance. Although Befall, LW105, and LF are severely outclassed in today's Metagame, Basalt, BD145, and the other parts in this set more than make up for it. For this reason, '''this Set is a worthwhile purchase, and a welcome addition to any collection.'''

==Gallery==

[[CategoryConfusedet]]

Decent article! You should explain why LW105 and LF have no use, and that Basalt is now outclassed by Duo, Death and Synchrom combinations. Also, I think this should be only reccomended to players without access to Takara-Tomy parts or begiinners looking for a Set to recieve some competitive parts, instead of being a welcome addition to any collection.

I believe "opague" is actually spelled "opaque", but it might just be me. Anyway though, nice article!
I have updated the OP and went along with both Imperial's, and Crab Commando's fixes/suggestions. Thanks guys! Anything else? Or is this ready to be published?
Looks really nice BladerPegais. Looks good from what I can see
Thank you! Kai-V, may I post this article on the Wiki? Any more errors?
Quote:{{Setbox
| image = Meteor_shower.jpg
| full item name = Meteor Shower Attack Faceoff Set
| item number = BB-88B and B-127
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
}}

__TOC__

'''Note:''' This set's release is exclusive to [[Hasbro]].

==Contents==
*BB-88B [[Meteo L Drago LW105LF]] (Opaque yellow Face, black Clear Wheel, opaque red Track and Tip)
*B-127 Basalt Beafowl BD145RSF (Twisted Befall BD145RSF) (Translucent green Clear Wheel, opaque green Track, black Tip)
*Two Ripcord Launchers (Black and orange)

==Overall==
This Set has many useful parts, the highlights of it being the [[Basalt_Horogium_145WD#Metal_Wheel:_Basalt|Basalt Metal Wheel]], and the BD145 Track. Although Basalt is outclassed by other 4D Metal Wheels such as Death and Duo and a few Synchrom combos from Zero-G, it has impressive defensive properties due to its heavy weight, even with the "Spira Staircase of Death" it possesses. BD145 also plays a huge role in successful Defense customs due to its ability to block low attackers, and to significantly increase the weight of a Beyblade. Beafowl, LW105, and LF usually have no use in today's Metagame, however. Beafowl can be replaced by other Clear Wheels which are balanced, LW105 is outclassed by lower tracks, such as 90 and 85, and LF is outclassed for Attack customizations by rubber tips, an example being LRF. Meteo, L Drago II, and RSF can be utilized in Spin Stealing and [[Defense]] combos respectively. For example, Meteo L Drago can be used in the custom Meteo L Drago CH120EWD effectively, mainly because of the rubber placed on its Clear Wheel which helps absorption. Although outclassed by RDF, RSF can be used effectively in defensive combos, due to its grip on the stadium floor and its higher surface area to spin on than RS, which improves its overall balance. Although Befall, LW105, and LF are severely outclassed in today's metagame, Basalt, BD145, and the other parts in this set more than make up for it. For this reason, '''this Set should only be purchased by beginners who have no access to TAKARA-TOMY Beyblades and who want to gain a few competitive parts.'''

==Gallery==

[[CategoryConfusedet]]


This seems fine now.
Ok, I've fixed the OP. Ready to publish?
Also, on a side note, I noticed an error in the Overall section of the Aqua Sword Strike Set on the Wiki. The last sentence has a formatting error. Do you want me to fix it?
It's Looking good so far, Nice work Grin...
Ha, I just noticed that i've been browsing set drafts for what to buy XD
((Wow... My subconsience really loves bey...))
(Nov. 09, 2012  7:47 PM)BladerPegasis Wrote: [ -> ]Ok, I've fixed the OP. Ready to publish?
Also, on a side note, I noticed an error in the Overall section of the Aqua Sword Strike Set on the Wiki. The last sentence has a formatting error. Do you want me to fix it?

In my opinion, my revised version is ready to be published, yes.

I fixed it.