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Haha, this is going to be my Halloween story. Anyways, there will be little detail. Anyways, this story will not be scary, at all, and I am basing this song off of Vocaloid songs. You'll notice I use a lot of song lyrics in the Prologue XD

Servant of Evil

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NwnyPIbt1BA

Daughter of Evil

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q46Osg9C4...ure=fvwrel

"You are the princess, I am the Servant, destiny divided, two pitiful twins

Prologue, yes, I know it is very short, but I don't have much to work with XD (Len Kagamine's point of view)
Classic Story of evil where its not happy land...
So are you making every chapter based on each song of the story as it seem you skip the daughter of evil or is this mainly about len story
(Oct. 19, 2012  11:06 PM)Zero X Wrote: [ -> ]Classic Story of evil where its not happy land...
So are you making every chapter based on each song of the story as it seem you skip the daughter of evil or is this mainly about len story

Daughter of Evil didn't make much sense to me, haha. and yes, it will be mainly Len's point of view. I couldn't change that fact, because Gakupo locked miku in a cage, and Len killed Miku. I will have two different acts with daughter of Evil and Servant of Evil, because they have the same plot, but essentially different details and endings.

I might add moonlit bear, and the witch of salmhofer, haha.

So this is essentially a fan-fic, no?
(Oct. 20, 2012  7:12 AM)Kujikato Wrote: [ -> ]So this is essentially a fan-fic, no?

More or less, haha. I don't know which category to place it in.
Lol, seems cheesy though... Pinching_eyes_2

Description and detail are the biggest factors, but you did mention that you won't have that much of both...
(Oct. 20, 2012  3:38 PM)Kujikato Wrote: [ -> ]Lol, seems cheesy though... Pinching_eyes_2

Description and detail are the biggest factors, but you did mention that you won't have that much of both...
Lol, what were you expecting from a story based off of two, four minute songs?

anyways, the conversation ends here.