World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Full Version: [story] Come Alive (The end is now!) Rated mostly PG 13
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Yeah, this is a really weird story.
Prologue: Newspaper club

Act 1: Establishment of the club
Act 2: The club begins, and the first crime
Act 3: The election



Epilogue
Very interesting intro. I kinda expected something with a little bit more detail, but it's really good. The only thing I would do is change the first sentence by adding a description of the main protagonist.
New chapter! Haha, this is a quite important flashback also

Chapter 2: The Newspaper Killer (Taken from Iwa's POV, and flashback)
What the Hades Kerbecs?! Shirayuki, you're insane. Wink

...I like it. Eee
New chapter, and I know it is kind of short, but whatever XD

Chapter 3: False Accusations
Nice story. Cant wait for more.
Yo, chapter 4 is out, a tad bit short, but chapter five will star Act 2, so it will be pretty long.

Chapter 4: Recruitment (Back to Normal)
sorry for a double post, but chapter 5 is out!

Chapter 5: Plans
Sorry for triple post, but chapter six has risen

Chapter 6: The shadowy truth (Rated PG 13)
EDIT!: While I have the time, I guess I should write Chapter 7

Chapter 7: Anniversary

Edit 3: I decided to write the closing of act 2! It is a very important chapter!


Chapter 8: Hikui (Hikui's and Iwa's POV)
REAL EDIT 3!: Let us get a new chapter out before the rain comes XD

Chapter 9: Car Collision (Back to Hana's POV)
Sorry for quad post, but Chapter 10 is out!

Chapter 10: Voting Period
Shirayuki, this thing with the........ I don't know what to say about this story. I can't say whether it's bad or good. It's...... I don't know. I can't vote on the poll with such a jumbled mind!
(Oct. 30, 2012  6:34 PM)ukdl123 Wrote: [ -> ]Shirayuki, this thing with the........ I don't know what to say about this story. I can't say whether it's bad or good. It's...... I don't know. I can't vote on the poll with such a jumbled mind!
Lolwut? Was it the construction/grammar/Etc.

Or was it the Plot/Idea/Etc.
Sorry for double post.

Chapter 11: The First Issue
It wasn't anything wrong with the plot line, grammar, etc. It was with........ I dunno. This is inexplicable. Sorry.
You have a twisted mind Shirayuki
We are getting to the conclusion!

Chapter 12: End of the World
Crying So sad it ended Crying
(Nov. 24, 2012  6:27 AM)Voltage Wrote: [ -> ]Crying So sad it ended Crying
Two more sequels to come!

literally.