World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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This story takes place 5 months after the Epilogue of White Rose, Black Rose


If you haven't read White Rose, Black Rose, read it here!

Chapter 1: Prologue

Seems... Interesting.
Oh, and like meh vote? Heh.
(Sep. 16, 2012  3:48 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]Seems... Interesting.
Oh, and like meh vote? Heh.

Yeah, I do, actually.

Why does the the title have a comma? And dancing "in" the velvet moon? lol, shouldn't it be 'Dancing in the Velvet Moonlight"?
(Sep. 16, 2012  4:03 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote: [ -> ]Why does the the title have a comma? And dancing "in" the velvet moon? lol, shouldn't it be 'Dancing in the Velvet Moonlight"?
lol, i dun care, I use commas to much. I'll fix it.
Cool story. Only question is in the beginning, was the moon coming at them or what? Anyway, cant wait for the next chapter!