World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

That dog officially scares me

cool my characters bey is a new and improve pegasus(Star Light Pegasus!!!)

Epic story!I saw the movie In Time too!

you should make the chapters longer!you always leave me more curious than before!

im glad to read chapter 13

SPOILER ALERT i did not see that comin, soko is dead

Poor Soko

This is story is great but to the people reading it do you ithink its the best story out right now

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i do

Thanks BeatFox, and if my story is not the best i'm okay with that. I just like righting stories people like.

nice story
Anyways i have a character request
Name:Marcus
Bey:Burn Bull 90EWD
Age :11
How I look: Yellow-Spiky Hair,White hoodie,Yellow t-shirt,white shorts,white cap,gray shoes and kinda short
Special move:Red horn uppercut,Burning Stampede,Flaming Horn Strike
How i act :Annoying,cheerful,determined

I really like this character request for some reason?

i promised i wouldnt cry

I know. It is sad

Why you killed Soko for...

Because it got far into the story and a main character didn't die yet. Plus when i created Soko I already had it in my mind to kill him. Oh and every night i'll right a chapter.

(Aug. 24, 2012  1:15 AM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: [ -> ]Because it got far into the story and a main character didn't die yet. Plus when i created Soko I already had it in my mind to kill him. Oh and every night i'll right a chapter.

Oh!ok cool make a new chap this story is epic so far!!!

I will later

(Aug. 23, 2012  11:21 AM)Phantom #2 Wrote: [ -> ]nice story
Anyways i have a character request
Name:Marcus
Bey:Burn Bull 90EWD
Age :11
How I look: Yellow-Spiky Hair,White hoodie,Yellow t-shirt,white shorts,white cap,gray shoes and kinda short
Special move:Red horn uppercut,Burning Stampede,Flaming Horn Strike
How i act :Annoying,cheerful,determined

Oops just for got a detail:
Red horn uppercut:hits the bey at the spintrack
Burning Stampede:bull charges at the opponent and will make an explosion
Flaming horn strike:Bull's beast will come out with fiery horns and charging at the bey and it is faster than burning stampede but the damage is lower
Edit:Brown Yellow-Spiky Hair

This chapter is one of my favorites!Karuo is grand Leone!just epic!

Just wait till Will unleash Karuo's true power. Now that's a chapter i can't wait to write.

(Aug. 24, 2012  6:24 AM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: [ -> ]Just wait till Will unleash Karuo's true power. Now that's a chapter i can't wait to write.

Awesome!!!!tomorrow I will do mines too!

Should I name the chapters? I was thinking of it, but i'll let the readers decided.

u have made so many chapters i dont think its that important now that u name chapters

I kinda think it should. You no to help the new readers get a hint on what they're about to read.

yeah i agree with that