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Good People Die
A story about second chances ...


I wrote this quite some time ago and haven't touched it yet. I didn't get around to finishing it though. So I thought I'd post it here ...

It was originally one big wall of text but apperently short chapters make people want to read it more It is a mystery

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7 {POV SWITCHES}
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10

DERP: I was debating what to name my character so I put down "Guy X" in the begging. Though later on I decided to name him "Austin".
.... I some times worry about you.
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:38 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ].... I some times worry about you.

So does Tech. I wonder why though Chocked_2

(Aug. 06, 2012  11:40 AM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:38 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ].... I some times worry about you.

So does Tech. I wonder why though Chocked_2

... It's quite obvious...
You're insan- awesome. Yup. Awesome. Grin
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:42 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]You're insan- awesome. Yup. Awesome. Grin

(¬‿¬) I see what you did there ...

But I already know I'm awesome┌( ಠ.ಠ)┘
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:46 AM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:42 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]You're insan- awesome. Yup. Awesome. Grin

(¬‿¬) I see what you did there ...

But I already know I'm awesome┌( ಠ.ಠ)┘

This whole thing just got put into my funny posts part of my sig. XD
Anyways, I'm scraed to click DERP on the votes because...
You're too insane awesome and might kill reward me
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:51 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]This whole thing just got put into my funny posts part of my sig. XD
Anyways, I'm scraed to click DERP on the votes because...
You're too insane awesome and might kill reward me

I don't kill people. I am a cute and cuddly teddy bear who writes stories and never sleeps (okay I admit, that is kinda scary).

And I noticed the whole "fan-girling" thing going on in your sig XD

But did you read the story? Eee
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:54 AM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 06, 2012  11:51 AM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]This whole thing just got put into my funny posts part of my sig. XD
Anyways, I'm scraed to click DERP on the votes because...
You're too insane awesome and might kill reward me

I don't kill people. I am a cute and cuddly teddy bear who writes stories and never sleeps (okay I admit, that is kinda scary).

And I noticed the whole "fan-girling" thing going on in your sig XD

But did you read the story? Eee

I'm on chapter 3 XD But the title made me worry about you XD
Fan girling? What ever do you mean?
That GIF is cute Joyful_2

But yeah, the title could be perceived as odd ... if there are any suggestions though, I'll consider them and change it Smile
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:01 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]That GIF is cute Joyful_2

But yeah, the title could be perceived as odd ... if there are any suggestions though, I'll consider them and change it Smile

It's a cool name Joyful_2 I like it.
And so does Patmark
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:06 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]And so does Patmark

...aaand now you gave me a reason to worry about you Gasp

The POV switches in my story though, if they aren't disruptive or noticeable, I'm not changing it.
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:08 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:06 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]And so does Patmark

...aaand now you gave me a reason to worry about you Gasp

The POV switches in my story though, if they aren't disruptive or noticeable, I'm not changing it.

I just finished it and it's awesome XD
When he said "Game", I couldn't help but think of the Hunger Games.
Derp moment.
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:24 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]I just finished it and it's awesome XD
When he said "Game", I couldn't help but think of the Hunger Games.

Thank you Smile

But the game takes place in another dimension where he is dead ...

I don't see any hungry people there. Except they might be hungry for life XD
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:25 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:24 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]I just finished it and it's awesome XD
When he said "Game", I couldn't help but think of the Hunger Games.

Thank you Smile

But the game takes place in another dimension where he is dead ...

I don't see any hungry people there. Except they might be hungry for life XD

Lolz.
I now understand this. XD
... I'm still trying to figure out how you came up with this. Chocked_2
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:29 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ]... I'm still trying to figure out how you came up with this. Chocked_2

Don't sleep for a couple of days straight and develop some OCD for the computer, it'll come naturally.
(Aug. 06, 2012  12:32 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]Don't sleep for a couple of days straight and develop some OCD for the computer, it'll come naturally.

.... That is exactly how I came up with my current story.
Something Derp is going on....
I LIEK IT!
(Aug. 06, 2012  1:37 PM)Death Bro Wrote: [ -> ]Something Derp is going on....
I LIEK IT!

Thanks. But seriously, derp is not the only thing XD
Okay, I love this story.
Be Warned (Click to View)


EDIT: Wow, I am surprised that code worked! XD
(Aug. 06, 2012  1:53 PM)Ginga Blader Wrote: [ -> ]EDIT: Wow, I am surprised that code worked! XD

And if it was broken, I would indeed die.
I should worry about you. This just gave me the greatest idea for a new story.

Sarah, prepare for flood of PMs.
(Aug. 06, 2012  8:19 PM)War Wrote: [ -> ]I should worry about you. This just gave me the greatest idea for a new story.

Sarah, prepare for flood of PMs.

Looking forward to your new story Eee

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EDIT: LOL, messed the meme up.

By the way, it looks like derp is a pretty popular option!
Its only going to be 2-3 chapters.

Humorous? Very.

Senseless? Well, I'll leave that up to you.
I didn't really read it because I know it's going to be Awesome!!
How are you supposed to enjoy it if you don't read it...?
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