Jul. 31, 2012 12:50 AM
Jul. 31, 2012 12:53 AM
Wow! After reading a boring book for my summer homework, and then reading this, this is better! Keep up the great work!
Jul. 31, 2012 11:54 AM
(Jul. 31, 2012 12:29 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: [ -> ]My opinion os this story is; meh.
Why is there no "meh," option in the voting! >:l
Um ... okay? I can't change the options now. You didn't have to say anything in the first place ...
Chapters added in the OP
Jul. 31, 2012 1:07 PM
I like dose chapters!! I'm understanding it more and it looks very cool so far. I wonder if anybody else will make an appearance...
Jul. 31, 2012 1:09 PM
(Jul. 31, 2012 1:07 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: [ -> ]I like dose chapters!! I'm understanding it more and it looks very cool so far. I wonder if anybody else will make an appearance...
Yup. We're going to get attacked by a SPAM bot and Takasu will help us fight it
Aug. 01, 2012 12:23 AM
This story really sucked me in.
Can't wait to read more!
(Hopefully you won't kill me off...!)
Can't wait to read more!
(Hopefully you won't kill me off...!)
Aug. 01, 2012 12:32 AM
Well, I know I didn't. I just simply said my opinion on this story is; meh (mediocre).
Anyways, I do like the story, it's just ugh, something. My favorite chapter was Chapter 6. hehehe
Anyways, I do like the story, it's just ugh, something. My favorite chapter was Chapter 6. hehehe
Aug. 01, 2012 2:17 AM
Yep , Im making an appearence. I help code weapons for fight against the hacker, who injects a virus into the WBO, where the mosters begin attacking Insonminac. But she can change the plot, I mean , idea however she likes. Good luck to you!
-Takasu the Mouse
-Takasu the Mouse
Aug. 01, 2012 2:24 AM
(Aug. 01, 2012 2:17 AM)Takasu Wrote: [ -> ]Yep , Im making an appearence. I help code weapons for fight against the hacker, who injects a virus into the WBO, where the mosters begin attacking Insonminac. But she can change the plot, I mean , idea however she likes. Good luck to you!
-Takasu the Mouse
That sounds awesome. O:
Aug. 01, 2012 6:41 AM
I just read the last 3 chapters! I'm happy I appeared haha
Great job again!
Great job again!
Aug. 01, 2012 9:41 AM
Nice story indeed.
I just hope you dont leave it abridged. Because some stories had started very nicely(like this one) but were left mid-way without an end.
I just hope you dont leave it abridged. Because some stories had started very nicely(like this one) but were left mid-way without an end.
Aug. 01, 2012 11:23 AM
Thanks peeps!
I'm gonna torture you all and leave it abridged XD
Kidding, stay tuned!
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I see what you did there ...
I'm gonna torture you all and leave it abridged XD
Kidding, stay tuned!
(Aug. 01, 2012 12:23 AM)ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) Wrote: [ -> ]This story really sucked me in.
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I see what you did there ...
Aug. 01, 2012 11:43 AM
can i be in the story too?
Aug. 01, 2012 11:49 AM
(Aug. 01, 2012 11:43 AM)DarkBull2296 Wrote: [ -> ]can i be in the story too?
Sure.
Though I'm going in chronological order, so it might take a few chapters.
Aug. 01, 2012 11:55 AM
Can i Be in the story too?
PS. The Story is really good, i feel like reading more
PS. The Story is really good, i feel like reading more
Aug. 01, 2012 12:01 PM
Yes, you can. The response is the same as above though.
I know the story is good. I'm a good writer, it seems XD
I know the story is good. I'm a good writer, it seems XD
Aug. 01, 2012 12:02 PM
Why dont you start writing books about short stories or something?
Real books , The ones which you buy, the ones which have the writing written on paper, the ones which...
Real books , The ones which you buy, the ones which have the writing written on paper, the ones which...
Aug. 01, 2012 12:04 PM
(Aug. 01, 2012 12:02 PM)GravityPerseus. Wrote: [ -> ]Why dont you start writing books about short stories or something?
Writing is a waste of time. Besides, it doesn't pay well :\
Aug. 01, 2012 3:07 PM
Aug. 01, 2012 3:18 PM
when will there be new chapters
im so eager to read them
im so eager to read them
Aug. 01, 2012 3:30 PM
Awesome story. Can I be in it?
EDIT: lol did u get the insane maniac in the poll from me? I would've voted for bolth but it's not that kind of poll.
EDIT: lol did u get the insane maniac in the poll from me? I would've voted for bolth but it's not that kind of poll.
Aug. 01, 2012 5:32 PM
Can I be in this if you don't mind?
Aug. 01, 2012 6:49 PM
(Aug. 01, 2012 3:30 PM)FlamingFury Wrote: [ -> ]EDIT: lol did u get the insane maniac in the poll from me?
Haha, yesh XD
Also, for anyone requesting to make an appearance, you should know that you will have one teeny-tiny mention. Not a whole role. Because I can't just spontaneously alter the story line like that. Because (as you will see) it gets very complicated with all these puzzles, haha.
So here are the next six chapters:
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Kidding! But still, those are how the chapters look before I type them up, haha XD
You will notice something new in the last one though
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Also, if you might have noticed, I have a tendency to change tenses. So please, I hope you don't get bothered by it too much!
Sneak Peak:
(Jul. 29, 2012 4:34 PM)Insomniac Wrote: [ -> ]24 hours.
1440 minutes.
86400 seconds till erasure.
That was all the time we had. And I sure as hell didn’t want to find out what “being erased†meant.
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Aug. 01, 2012 8:19 PM
wow that story was really great and thanks for adding me in it!!!
Aug. 01, 2012 8:31 PM
Love how you put me in. And you were correct, I answer PMs really fast!