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Haha...Oh I suck at writing.
Ok before I start or anything, here is my inspiration: I have been madly obsessed with Rosario+Vampire. So the monster thing stuck to me.
If you see any changes that needs to be made please do not hesitate.
If you have any questions I will gladly answer them, but if they will be answered in a future chapter, I will tell "Will be answered in a future chapter."

Well...ready all hate missiles men.

(Some words in here are Japaneese, so if you need a translation please ask me and I will answer

Chapter 1 (Click to View)
Chapter 2 (Click to View)

Also, for a limited time I am accepting character requests. But I am going to be very picky.

Format-
Name: (must be Japanese)
Monster: (what type of monster)
Description: (a good, vivid description)

I like the plot! Great Job!
Here's a character Request!
Name: Yoshi Orotima (Sorry, I know nothing about Japan)
Monster: Werewolf
Description: He is the quiet yet humorous and energetic when you meet him. He makes friends with Sasaki. He loves to learn and socialize. When he gets bullied he sometimes looses control and goes werewolf. He has glasses and brown hair and eyes. He wears skinny jeans, converse shoes, headphones, a green t-shirt, and a white dress shirt over that.
(Jun. 29, 2012  9:31 PM)Death Bro Wrote: [ -> ]I like the plot! Great Job!
Here's a character Request!
Name: Yoshi Orotima (Sorry, I know nothing about Japan)
Monster: Werewolf
Description: He is the quiet yet humorous and energetic when you meet him. He makes friends with Sasaki. He loves to learn and socialize. When he gets bullied he sometimes looses control and goes werewolf. He has glasses and brown hair and eyes. He wears skinny jeans, converse shoes, headphones, a green t-shirt, and a white dress shirt over that.

I already have a werewolf...if you can think of another monster that should be good enough.
(It is ok, I don't have a spec of Japaneese in me)
Okay, he can be a.... Banshee!
I thought banshee were women...Eh, whatever. You will see your character, but let me remind you no promises that he will be a main character.
No, I think Banshees should be able to be men too but if you think not he can be a Ghoul.
Yes, I remember in American folktales a banshee is a Ghoul.
Expect him in Chapter 3, 4, or 5.
(Jun. 29, 2012  9:50 PM)Tetsu Wrote: [ -> ]Yes, I remember in American folktales a banshee is a Ghoul.
Expect him in Chapter 3, 4, or 5.

Okay, Thanks!
Now off to studying monsters!
I think this story is going to have quite the interesting turnout! Here's my character. Hope it's good enough...

Name: Daisuke Kazumi (Male)
Monster: Dragon (relative size, of course...)
Description: Quite the gentleman. Very polite and mannerly, with a formal accent, and he's friends with Sasaki. His teeth grow sharp when he's angry, and he transforms into Dragon when extremely angry. However, if he gets out of control, Sasaki is able to calm him down when necessary...

Do you liek it?
(Jun. 29, 2012  9:53 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: [ -> ]I think this story is going to have quite the interesting turnout! Here's my character. Hope it's good enough...

Name: Daisuke Kazumi (Male)
Monster: Dragon (relative size, of course...)
Description: Quite the gentleman. Very polite and mannerly, with a formal accent, and he's friends with Sasaki. His teeth grow sharp when he's angry, and he transforms into Dragon when extremely angry. However, if he gets out of control, Sasaki is able to calm him down when necessary...

Do you liek it?
Ok, do you want him to have a certain appearance? Or do you want to leave it up to me?
Interesting...I don't have a dragon yet.

(Jun. 29, 2012  9:56 PM)Tetsu Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jun. 29, 2012  9:53 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: [ -> ]I think this story is going to have quite the interesting turnout! Here's my character. Hope it's good enough...

Name: Daisuke Kazumi (Male)
Monster: Dragon (relative size, of course...)
Description: Quite the gentleman. Very polite and mannerly, with a formal accent, and he's friends with Sasaki. His teeth grow sharp when he's angry, and he transforms into Dragon when extremely angry. However, if he gets out of control, Sasaki is able to calm him down when necessary...

Do you liek it?
Ok, do you want him to have a certain appearance? Or do you want to leave it up to me?
Interesting...I don't have a dragon yet.

All you, man. Don't really have a preference, as long as he's not dark red, I don't like dark red...
Thanks for the positive feedback,
I am currently working on Chapter 2. I do not think I will have it tommarow, but that's hard to say for now.

I am able to incorporate DefStamina's Character in chapter 2, and I expect to have Death Bro's character.

Yeah that was just an update.

I need to clean it up, add a little less/more details.
I like that preview! Hope Chapter 2 is doing well! Can't wait to see it!
It will be done tonight, so I might post it late or early in the morning.
Chapter 2 is finally up! Thank goodness writers block is gone!

(Thanks Tech)
Good job on Chapter 2! Good thing you removed your writer's block, huh? XD

Anyways, will I be seeing Daisuke in the story later?
Yeah, he is in the beginning of chapter 3.

I'm already in the middle of chapter 3.
Glad writers block is gone.