Jun. 24, 2012 7:49 AM
Jun. 24, 2012 12:53 PM
(Jun. 24, 2012 7:49 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: [ -> ]Ahh, more romance! I feel complete! XD Great writing, as always! I know he was trying to help, but still, Devin is pushy pushy pushy!
I know! That's kind of his personality. He kinda has OCD...
Ironically, Devin's my name and I act exactly like Devin inthe story...
Anyways, Chapter 15 coming soon!
Jun. 26, 2012 8:03 PM
Chapter 15 has been completed!!! Although this Miles VS R-Dev, the story's not even close to over!
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After all players returned to the stadium, DJ began his announcement...
"Ladies and Gentlemen! It is time for Miles VS R-Dev!"
The crowd erupted in cheers and shouts as they called the match. R-Dev began walking to the stadium...
"Looks like it's time, huh, Miles?" Devin said.
"Looks like it!" Miles replied. "Better be ready for a fight! I have a feeling that after this match we will be meeting up in the Finals..."
"You can do it, Miles!" Bri said, confidently, "You WILL do it..."
Miles nodded and approached the stadium and presented his bey. Metal Face-Heavy Wing Pegasis BD145CS. No changes...
R-Dev then presented his bey. Metal Face-Feather Basalt Impaler 230CS. Also, no changes. However, it appeared that R-Dev obtained a new grip. Instead of grey and black like it was, It was completely black, with a picture of a White Skull on the top... Both players then placed their beys on their launchers...
"Ready?" DJ asked. Both Players nodded. "3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!"
Pegasis and Impaler both hit the stadium, and immediately charged at each other. The crowd cheered as the battle ensued. "R-Dev and Miles are battling hard!" DJ announced, "Neither of them are giving up!"
R-Dev was applying some of his most powerful moves to attack, smashing as hard as possible. Hit or Miss, Pegasis was not going down at all.
"Grrrr..." R-Dev growled, "Why do you stand up to such a superior opponent?! Do you never learn?!"
"Oh, I learn, R-Dev..." Miles replied, "I learn quite a bit when I'm in a battle, and I'm learning a lot against you..."
R-Dev clenched his sharp teeth at Miles words. After seeing several attacks fail to bring Pegasis down, he had enough. "Impaler, Special Move!! Apocalyptic Nightmare!!!!"
Impaler flew up into the air and started its way down. Devin, Cloud, and Bri closed their eyes, frightened of the result... Impaler landed, and the biggest dust cloud so far formed, giving nobody the opporitunity to see if R-Dev's attack hit its mark.
It was a few minutes before the air finally cleared. Devin, Cloud, and Bri looked carefully fearing the worst. They spotted Miles, on the ground. They hung their head in despair.
Suddenly, a child screams out. "Look!" He says, "Pegasis is still spinning!"
The crowd looks. Sure enough, still spinning hard, Pegasis stood in the stadium, with Impaler wobbling uncontrollably.
"WHAT?" R-Dev exclaimed in absolute shock. "Impaler, come on! Finish him!!"
As R-Dev screamed, Miles slowly rose his arm up. His friends looked on, surprised. He slowly used what was left of his force to get up, and after a little while, he stood.
"NO!!" R-Dev screamed. "Why aren't you dead??"
Although the crowd did not hear those words, Miles' friends gasped.
"I knew it..." Miles thought. "I knew he was trying that. He wanted to kill me with his attack. Well, R-Dev, it didn't work..."
Then, with all the strength he had in his lungs, he let out his spirit-filled attack. "Pegasis!! Special Move, Wing Starbreaker!!!"
Pegasis flew up and struck dead-on R-Dev's immobilized bey, and launched it out of the stadium...
The crowd screamed so loud you could've heard it from the next town. "What a feat, folks!!" DJ shouted with excitement, "Miles moves on, and R-Dev goes to the loser bracket!!!"
R-Dev walked over to his bey and slowly picked up. He then left, calm on the surface, and inside, an anger so overbearingly strong was brewing...
Devin, Cloud and Bri ran to Miles, who had fallen to his knees after the attack.
"You did it!!!" Cloud said, happily, "You defeated R-Dev for the first time!!"
"Good job, buddy!!!" Devin encouraged. "Who would've thought you would've won against such a hard opponent!!"
"Amazing job, Miles!" Bri said, hugging him... "I'm proud..."
"Thanks guys..." Miles said, weakly...
"Alright, now, looks like that battle causec quite a bit of damage, so while we repair it, we'll take a break, and when we return, Devin VS CD, the rematch!! The winner will face R-Dev, which rhe winner there will then face Miles!!"
"Mind helping me up, guys?" Miles asked, "I'm tired and I need something to eat..."
They all laughed and headed back to the locker room...
"Ladies and Gentlemen! It is time for Miles VS R-Dev!"
The crowd erupted in cheers and shouts as they called the match. R-Dev began walking to the stadium...
"Looks like it's time, huh, Miles?" Devin said.
"Looks like it!" Miles replied. "Better be ready for a fight! I have a feeling that after this match we will be meeting up in the Finals..."
"You can do it, Miles!" Bri said, confidently, "You WILL do it..."
Miles nodded and approached the stadium and presented his bey. Metal Face-Heavy Wing Pegasis BD145CS. No changes...
R-Dev then presented his bey. Metal Face-Feather Basalt Impaler 230CS. Also, no changes. However, it appeared that R-Dev obtained a new grip. Instead of grey and black like it was, It was completely black, with a picture of a White Skull on the top... Both players then placed their beys on their launchers...
"Ready?" DJ asked. Both Players nodded. "3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!"
Pegasis and Impaler both hit the stadium, and immediately charged at each other. The crowd cheered as the battle ensued. "R-Dev and Miles are battling hard!" DJ announced, "Neither of them are giving up!"
R-Dev was applying some of his most powerful moves to attack, smashing as hard as possible. Hit or Miss, Pegasis was not going down at all.
"Grrrr..." R-Dev growled, "Why do you stand up to such a superior opponent?! Do you never learn?!"
"Oh, I learn, R-Dev..." Miles replied, "I learn quite a bit when I'm in a battle, and I'm learning a lot against you..."
R-Dev clenched his sharp teeth at Miles words. After seeing several attacks fail to bring Pegasis down, he had enough. "Impaler, Special Move!! Apocalyptic Nightmare!!!!"
Impaler flew up into the air and started its way down. Devin, Cloud, and Bri closed their eyes, frightened of the result... Impaler landed, and the biggest dust cloud so far formed, giving nobody the opporitunity to see if R-Dev's attack hit its mark.
It was a few minutes before the air finally cleared. Devin, Cloud, and Bri looked carefully fearing the worst. They spotted Miles, on the ground. They hung their head in despair.
Suddenly, a child screams out. "Look!" He says, "Pegasis is still spinning!"
The crowd looks. Sure enough, still spinning hard, Pegasis stood in the stadium, with Impaler wobbling uncontrollably.
"WHAT?" R-Dev exclaimed in absolute shock. "Impaler, come on! Finish him!!"
As R-Dev screamed, Miles slowly rose his arm up. His friends looked on, surprised. He slowly used what was left of his force to get up, and after a little while, he stood.
"NO!!" R-Dev screamed. "Why aren't you dead??"
Although the crowd did not hear those words, Miles' friends gasped.
"I knew it..." Miles thought. "I knew he was trying that. He wanted to kill me with his attack. Well, R-Dev, it didn't work..."
Then, with all the strength he had in his lungs, he let out his spirit-filled attack. "Pegasis!! Special Move, Wing Starbreaker!!!"
Pegasis flew up and struck dead-on R-Dev's immobilized bey, and launched it out of the stadium...
The crowd screamed so loud you could've heard it from the next town. "What a feat, folks!!" DJ shouted with excitement, "Miles moves on, and R-Dev goes to the loser bracket!!!"
R-Dev walked over to his bey and slowly picked up. He then left, calm on the surface, and inside, an anger so overbearingly strong was brewing...
Devin, Cloud and Bri ran to Miles, who had fallen to his knees after the attack.
"You did it!!!" Cloud said, happily, "You defeated R-Dev for the first time!!"
"Good job, buddy!!!" Devin encouraged. "Who would've thought you would've won against such a hard opponent!!"
"Amazing job, Miles!" Bri said, hugging him... "I'm proud..."
"Thanks guys..." Miles said, weakly...
"Alright, now, looks like that battle causec quite a bit of damage, so while we repair it, we'll take a break, and when we return, Devin VS CD, the rematch!! The winner will face R-Dev, which rhe winner there will then face Miles!!"
"Mind helping me up, guys?" Miles asked, "I'm tired and I need something to eat..."
They all laughed and headed back to the locker room...
Jun. 27, 2012 9:58 AM
R-Dev tried to kill Miles?! Poor Miles and Bri! This chapter was horrifically wonderful! The end was bittersweet.
Haha, I just realized the connection between Miles and Miles 'Tails' Prower!
Haha, I just realized the connection between Miles and Miles 'Tails' Prower!
Jun. 27, 2012 12:32 PM
(Jun. 27, 2012 9:58 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: [ -> ]R-Dev tried to kill Miles?! Poor Miles and Bri! This chapter was horrifically wonderful! The end was bittersweet.
Haha, I just realized the connection between Miles and Miles 'Tails' Prower!
Haha, the first to catch it... Nice!
Got Chapter 16, too! Probably my most dramatic chapter so far! Warning: Some Blood and Language...
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Miles, Devin, Cloud, and Bri arrived back at the locker room after getting something to eat.
"Phew! That battle tired me out!" Miles said, "Luckily, I built my energy back up..."
"I still think ya did good, Miles..." Bri said, encouragingly. "The battle was absolutely wonderful...."
"Yeah, you did a great job!!" Devin included. "Anyways, you should get your bey so you can be prepared for your battle later on..."
"You're closer to my locker, can you get it?" Miles replied, laughing...
"Ha, ha, ha! Sure thing, man!" Devin said, and he went to get his bey in the locker in the corner of the room...
Suddenly, disaster...
When Devin opened the locker, a sharp knife flew out. It caught the side of Devin's right arm and lodged into the wall. Devin fell to the ground in pain, holding his bleeding right arm.
"DEVIN!!!" Miles shouted. He and Bri ran to his side. "Devin, are you okay?!?!"
"Of course not!!!" Devin screamed, "I'm bleeding dammit!!"
Cloud had left the room and came back with a first-aid kit. He started wrapping up Devin's wound...
Bri walked over to the wall and pulled the knife out of the wall...
"Who the hell did this??" She said, confused...
"Look, there's a letter there!" Cloud exclaimed, and he went to read it...
"What does it say?" Miles asked...
"I...I don't know..." Cloud answered..." It looks all scribbled and messy. I can't make out the letters..."
"Lemme see..." Miles asked. Cloud handed him the letter. "It's smeared a little. I can clear it up. Hang on.."
After a few seconds of rubbing the paper it was clear. Still a scribbled mess, but easier to read. It said this:
Miles,
You defeated me in battle, and I cannot take that as the result.
I WILL return to the finals to face you again, and I am NOT losing again. You will fall to my hands, and I will make sure you never walk the face of this Earth again!
I suggest you heed this warning and give up. I know you value your life, and I can take it away in no time...
However, don't heed my warning, and I take your friends, one...by one...and you'll be all alone.
Cloud, your motivation, gone...
Bri, the love of your life, gone...
And Devin, your best friend, friends ever since childhood, inseparable...gone...
So listen and listen good, I will NOT lose this round, and I WILL win this tournament, and make sure you are never heard from again...
Now think carefully of your choices, Miles; Surrender, and allow me to reign champion, or fight me, and lose everything...
You battle at your own risk, but if you do, I have a question...
Are YOU ready...to die? We'll see...
R-Dev
"R-DEV?" Devin exclaimed. "He really...wants to kill you?!?!?!"
"Why the little son of a..." Miles said, angered, and he ripped up R-Dev's letter and started growling a little...
"Miles? You okay?" Devin asked..."
Miles turned and pointed at the door. "R-DEV!" He said...
Sure enough, when his friends turned, R-Dev was there, standing at the door...
"You think you're so tough..." Miles said, approaching him... "You think you're so powerful. You believe you're immortal. Here's reality for you, R-Dev..." Miles stepped up to R-Dev and stared him straight in the eyes... "Nobody, is immortal....and you, are far from it..."
Miles then threw a punch and landed it right on R-Dev's jaw.
R-Dev, slowly rolled his head straight, and replied back... "If that is the case..." He started, "How come your friends have fallen to me? And why aren't they dead?" He paused, then resumed... "They are not dead, because they do not have the strength, or the power, or even the courage, to approach me. Seeing you stand up to me, is pathetic. You want to challenge me? Fine, but be writing you final will...and be ready to receive your death wish..."
R-De then threw a clean punch right into Miles' left eye. he fell to the ground with a smack. R-Dev laughed and walked away...
"MILES!!" Devin shouted as he ran to Miles. "Miles, you awake?"
Miles didn't say anything, but slowly got up, his left eye now black, bleeding a little...
"Oh dear god..." Devin said, "I'm gonna go get a medic.."
But before he could run off, Miles caught him. "I don't need a damn medic..." He said strenly, "I need you to get ready to win. You beat CD, face R-Dev, and show that loser that I'm not the only damn person that's gonna stand up to him... Got it???"
Devin stared strongly. He could tell Miles was being extremely serious by his stare. Devin stared back, and replied...
"Yes, Miles..." He said... "I will do it for you...my best friend..."
He turned and walked back to the stadium, his friends right behind him...
"Just you wait, R-Dev..." Devin thought, "I'll prove that Miles is not the only one standing up to you. I AM going to face you, and even if I lose, I will hold my ground to the very end... And if you face Miles, he will send you to the ground, like he did last time..."
"Phew! That battle tired me out!" Miles said, "Luckily, I built my energy back up..."
"I still think ya did good, Miles..." Bri said, encouragingly. "The battle was absolutely wonderful...."
"Yeah, you did a great job!!" Devin included. "Anyways, you should get your bey so you can be prepared for your battle later on..."
"You're closer to my locker, can you get it?" Miles replied, laughing...
"Ha, ha, ha! Sure thing, man!" Devin said, and he went to get his bey in the locker in the corner of the room...
Suddenly, disaster...
When Devin opened the locker, a sharp knife flew out. It caught the side of Devin's right arm and lodged into the wall. Devin fell to the ground in pain, holding his bleeding right arm.
"DEVIN!!!" Miles shouted. He and Bri ran to his side. "Devin, are you okay?!?!"
"Of course not!!!" Devin screamed, "I'm bleeding dammit!!"
Cloud had left the room and came back with a first-aid kit. He started wrapping up Devin's wound...
Bri walked over to the wall and pulled the knife out of the wall...
"Who the hell did this??" She said, confused...
"Look, there's a letter there!" Cloud exclaimed, and he went to read it...
"What does it say?" Miles asked...
"I...I don't know..." Cloud answered..." It looks all scribbled and messy. I can't make out the letters..."
"Lemme see..." Miles asked. Cloud handed him the letter. "It's smeared a little. I can clear it up. Hang on.."
After a few seconds of rubbing the paper it was clear. Still a scribbled mess, but easier to read. It said this:
Miles,
You defeated me in battle, and I cannot take that as the result.
I WILL return to the finals to face you again, and I am NOT losing again. You will fall to my hands, and I will make sure you never walk the face of this Earth again!
I suggest you heed this warning and give up. I know you value your life, and I can take it away in no time...
However, don't heed my warning, and I take your friends, one...by one...and you'll be all alone.
Cloud, your motivation, gone...
Bri, the love of your life, gone...
And Devin, your best friend, friends ever since childhood, inseparable...gone...
So listen and listen good, I will NOT lose this round, and I WILL win this tournament, and make sure you are never heard from again...
Now think carefully of your choices, Miles; Surrender, and allow me to reign champion, or fight me, and lose everything...
You battle at your own risk, but if you do, I have a question...
Are YOU ready...to die? We'll see...
R-Dev
"R-DEV?" Devin exclaimed. "He really...wants to kill you?!?!?!"
"Why the little son of a..." Miles said, angered, and he ripped up R-Dev's letter and started growling a little...
"Miles? You okay?" Devin asked..."
Miles turned and pointed at the door. "R-DEV!" He said...
Sure enough, when his friends turned, R-Dev was there, standing at the door...
"You think you're so tough..." Miles said, approaching him... "You think you're so powerful. You believe you're immortal. Here's reality for you, R-Dev..." Miles stepped up to R-Dev and stared him straight in the eyes... "Nobody, is immortal....and you, are far from it..."
Miles then threw a punch and landed it right on R-Dev's jaw.
R-Dev, slowly rolled his head straight, and replied back... "If that is the case..." He started, "How come your friends have fallen to me? And why aren't they dead?" He paused, then resumed... "They are not dead, because they do not have the strength, or the power, or even the courage, to approach me. Seeing you stand up to me, is pathetic. You want to challenge me? Fine, but be writing you final will...and be ready to receive your death wish..."
R-De then threw a clean punch right into Miles' left eye. he fell to the ground with a smack. R-Dev laughed and walked away...
"MILES!!" Devin shouted as he ran to Miles. "Miles, you awake?"
Miles didn't say anything, but slowly got up, his left eye now black, bleeding a little...
"Oh dear god..." Devin said, "I'm gonna go get a medic.."
But before he could run off, Miles caught him. "I don't need a damn medic..." He said strenly, "I need you to get ready to win. You beat CD, face R-Dev, and show that loser that I'm not the only damn person that's gonna stand up to him... Got it???"
Devin stared strongly. He could tell Miles was being extremely serious by his stare. Devin stared back, and replied...
"Yes, Miles..." He said... "I will do it for you...my best friend..."
He turned and walked back to the stadium, his friends right behind him...
"Just you wait, R-Dev..." Devin thought, "I'll prove that Miles is not the only one standing up to you. I AM going to face you, and even if I lose, I will hold my ground to the very end... And if you face Miles, he will send you to the ground, like he did last time..."
Jun. 28, 2012 8:54 AM
I stopped breathing for a few moments there! Now, that is true writing! Stupid R-Dev! Poor Devin and Miles... I can't wait to see what happens next!
Jun. 28, 2012 11:31 AM
Sorry for the news guys, but the story is postponed because I have two busy weeks ahead of me, and won't be able to write my next Chapter. However, Feel free to reply on your favorite chapters if you like...
Jul. 01, 2012 1:29 PM
Okay guys, I'm now not busy, and I have Resumed the story!!
I have Chapter 17 Here! (Don't forget to read the other chapters to keep up!)
Don't forget to leave feedback, please!
I have Chapter 17 Here! (Don't forget to read the other chapters to keep up!)
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Miles, Bri, Devin, and Cloud walked back out to the arena and sat down, waiting to resume...
"Looks like they repaired the stadium..." Miles said...
"Sure does. They did a good job..." Devin replied...
After a few moments, the DJ came back out to get the action back underway...
"Ladies and Gentlemen!" DJ announced, "It is time to continue our tournament. We start off, with Devin and CD, the rematch!!"
The crowd cheered as the match was called.
Devin clenched his bey as he approached the stadium. "CD's th only thing standing between you and me, R-Dev," Devin thought, "and he's not gonna stop me from getting to battle you..."
Devin showed his MF-F Burn Corona 230D, and CD showed his MF Flash Draco S130RF.
Both readied their beys and were prepared to battle.
3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!
Corona and Draco hit the stadium. Immediately, Draco charged for Corona. Devin, doing what he does best, commanded Corona to keep dodging, so it did. Every attack that CD threw was being dodged, just like last time...
Once again, after failing to hit Corona again, he snapped. "NOT AGAIN, I'M TIRED OF THIS!!! SPECIAL MOVE!! FLASH BITESTRIKE!!!"
Flash started landing attacks very quickly. Corona was being slammed by every attack, and getting closer to the edge...
Devin thought quickly for an idea. "What do I do? I can't dodge him just standing on the ground! Wait...that's it!"
"Corona, to the air!!" Devin commanded...
Corona flew up high into the air.
"Follow him, Draco!!" CD yelled...
However, CD made one mistake about switching to Flash; Flash was MUCH heavier, and Draco couldn't even leave the ground.
"AGH, NO!" CD yelled...
"You're done for!" Devin shouted, "Corona, Special Move, Dazzling Crown!!"
Corona struck with much force, but didn't KO Draco. However, Draco was immobilized.
"Hmmm..." Devin said, quietly. "How about we add the final pressure?"
Corona then started circling the stadium pretty fast.
Cloud and Bri didn't know what was happening. "What's he doing?" They asked simultaneously...
"Heh, he's slowly closing in on him..." Miles replied...
Sure enough, with every loop around the stadium, Corona was getting closer to Draco.
"NO, DRACO!" CD shouted...
Just like last time, no use. Corona slammed into Draco hard, instantly KO'ing it.
The crowd cheered loud and applauded. "What a battle!" DJ remarked, "Devin goes to face R-Dev, and CD's leaves in 4th place..."
Devin walked over to his friends to celebrate.
"Smart move, buddy!" Miles remarked, "Now you got a gameplan for R-Dev..."
"Yep, and I'm ready to face him!" Devin answered. "Doesn't matter if I lose, I'm gonna stand up to him, just like you told me to. You will not be alone, Miles!"
"Now that's what I like to hear!" Miles said, enthusiastically. "Now, get out there and show him what you got!"
"Next up, Devin VS R-Dev, the rematch!" DJ announced.
The crowd cheered as both of them approached the stadium. Both readied their beys and prepared for launch.
Devin was staring at R-Dev. R-Dev had a white glow in his left eye...
"He's beyond pissed..." Devin thought. "He wants to murder, now... Well, he's not killing me!"
"Bladers ready?" DJ asked.
Both nodded....
3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!
"Looks like they repaired the stadium..." Miles said...
"Sure does. They did a good job..." Devin replied...
After a few moments, the DJ came back out to get the action back underway...
"Ladies and Gentlemen!" DJ announced, "It is time to continue our tournament. We start off, with Devin and CD, the rematch!!"
The crowd cheered as the match was called.
Devin clenched his bey as he approached the stadium. "CD's th only thing standing between you and me, R-Dev," Devin thought, "and he's not gonna stop me from getting to battle you..."
Devin showed his MF-F Burn Corona 230D, and CD showed his MF Flash Draco S130RF.
Both readied their beys and were prepared to battle.
3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!
Corona and Draco hit the stadium. Immediately, Draco charged for Corona. Devin, doing what he does best, commanded Corona to keep dodging, so it did. Every attack that CD threw was being dodged, just like last time...
Once again, after failing to hit Corona again, he snapped. "NOT AGAIN, I'M TIRED OF THIS!!! SPECIAL MOVE!! FLASH BITESTRIKE!!!"
Flash started landing attacks very quickly. Corona was being slammed by every attack, and getting closer to the edge...
Devin thought quickly for an idea. "What do I do? I can't dodge him just standing on the ground! Wait...that's it!"
"Corona, to the air!!" Devin commanded...
Corona flew up high into the air.
"Follow him, Draco!!" CD yelled...
However, CD made one mistake about switching to Flash; Flash was MUCH heavier, and Draco couldn't even leave the ground.
"AGH, NO!" CD yelled...
"You're done for!" Devin shouted, "Corona, Special Move, Dazzling Crown!!"
Corona struck with much force, but didn't KO Draco. However, Draco was immobilized.
"Hmmm..." Devin said, quietly. "How about we add the final pressure?"
Corona then started circling the stadium pretty fast.
Cloud and Bri didn't know what was happening. "What's he doing?" They asked simultaneously...
"Heh, he's slowly closing in on him..." Miles replied...
Sure enough, with every loop around the stadium, Corona was getting closer to Draco.
"NO, DRACO!" CD shouted...
Just like last time, no use. Corona slammed into Draco hard, instantly KO'ing it.
The crowd cheered loud and applauded. "What a battle!" DJ remarked, "Devin goes to face R-Dev, and CD's leaves in 4th place..."
Devin walked over to his friends to celebrate.
"Smart move, buddy!" Miles remarked, "Now you got a gameplan for R-Dev..."
"Yep, and I'm ready to face him!" Devin answered. "Doesn't matter if I lose, I'm gonna stand up to him, just like you told me to. You will not be alone, Miles!"
"Now that's what I like to hear!" Miles said, enthusiastically. "Now, get out there and show him what you got!"
"Next up, Devin VS R-Dev, the rematch!" DJ announced.
The crowd cheered as both of them approached the stadium. Both readied their beys and prepared for launch.
Devin was staring at R-Dev. R-Dev had a white glow in his left eye...
"He's beyond pissed..." Devin thought. "He wants to murder, now... Well, he's not killing me!"
"Bladers ready?" DJ asked.
Both nodded....
3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!
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Jul. 01, 2012 3:39 PM
Epic! I love how well the story comes together! I think it's WAY better than mine!
Jul. 03, 2012 5:24 PM
Alright, Chapter 18!!!
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As R-Dev stared at the battle, he was thinking quietly to himself...
"Hm..." He thought. "Miles thinks he's so tough, and it looks like I'm forced to battle his guinea pig Devin to face him. I'm pissed at what he did. He's not getting off of it so easily..."
Devin's Corona and R-Dev's Impaler were clashing much more than they were in their last battle...
"No more running this time..." Devin thought to himself, "Time to stand up and fight like a man!"
Corona crashed into Impaler several times, kicking Impaler back to the edge a few times...
"Hmph, Impaler, Special Move! Apocalyptic Nightmare!!" R-Dev commanded...
Impaler flew high and struck hard. Corona withstood the attack!
"Hah!" Devin replied, "That's not gonna work this time! Corona, Special Move, Dazzling Crown!!"
Corona flew up and landed directly on Impaler. Impaler was on the edge of falling...
"So what now, R-Dev?" Devin asked...
"No..." R-Dev mumbled. "No! NOOOO!"
Impaler then started gaining spin, and actually started drilling a hole into the stadium!
"Oh god, w-what's happening?" Devin said nervous...
"YOUR DEATH!!" R-Dev yelled, his left eye now completely white and bloodshot, "SPECIAL MOVE!!! INFINITE OBLITERATION!!!"
Impaler flew up so high, and started aiming directly for Corona.
"Uh oh..." Devin said, ducking...
"Oh god..." Miles said, "GUYS, TAKE COVER!!" He, Cloud, and Bri hid behind the bench...
"Uh oh! This is gonna be a big attack! Everybody duck!!" DJ screamed, and everyone did.
"DIIIIIIIIIE!!!" R-Dev yelled as the bey collided with Corona.
The coliseum almost fell to the ground. And after several minutes, the smoke cleared. The crowd, the DJ, and Devin's friends all slowly peeked up...
There was a strongly spinning Impaler in the stadium, a Corona split into it's five parts beside the stadium, and a knocked-out Devin by the wall on the other side of the arena.
Nobody said a thing. All that could be heard was R-Dev's slow footsteps, leaving the stadium, and Miles quick footsteps, running to Devin.
"DEVIN!" Miles yelled, kneeling down to him, "Devin, you okay?"
No answer...
"Devin, answer me!!"
Still, no answer...
"No, Devin..."
Cloud and Bri ran up beside him as Miles broke into heavy tears... Bri checked for a pulse...
"It's weak..." She said, "...but it's there..."
"We gotta get him to the hospital..." Cloud said. "MEDIC!"
The paramedics arrived and strapped Devin into the stretcher. Miles cried into Bri's arms as Devin was placed into the ambulance and driven off...
The stadium was completely destroyed, so they had to call a break...
Miles, still teary-eyed, broke away from Bri's arms, and started running for the exit.
"Wait, Miles!" Cloud yelled, "Where are you going?"
"I'm not, gonna just stand by, and let Devin fight for his life alone! I have to go after him, and I don't give a damn what anyone thinks! He's..my friend...and nobody, not even R-Dev, is gonna ruin that..."
Then, Miles turned and continued running. Cloud and Bri looked at each other, and followed behind him.
R-Dev stared as they ran off...
"I told you, Miles... I was gonna take em down one by one..." He said quietly... "He was first to get it. I released not even half of my energy on him. I swear to god, if he's not dead, you will have no damn idea what you'll be getting yourself into in the next round... Better hope you have a tombstone ready. It's more likely you're gonna need it now... Hehehehehe....."
"Hm..." He thought. "Miles thinks he's so tough, and it looks like I'm forced to battle his guinea pig Devin to face him. I'm pissed at what he did. He's not getting off of it so easily..."
Devin's Corona and R-Dev's Impaler were clashing much more than they were in their last battle...
"No more running this time..." Devin thought to himself, "Time to stand up and fight like a man!"
Corona crashed into Impaler several times, kicking Impaler back to the edge a few times...
"Hmph, Impaler, Special Move! Apocalyptic Nightmare!!" R-Dev commanded...
Impaler flew high and struck hard. Corona withstood the attack!
"Hah!" Devin replied, "That's not gonna work this time! Corona, Special Move, Dazzling Crown!!"
Corona flew up and landed directly on Impaler. Impaler was on the edge of falling...
"So what now, R-Dev?" Devin asked...
"No..." R-Dev mumbled. "No! NOOOO!"
Impaler then started gaining spin, and actually started drilling a hole into the stadium!
"Oh god, w-what's happening?" Devin said nervous...
"YOUR DEATH!!" R-Dev yelled, his left eye now completely white and bloodshot, "SPECIAL MOVE!!! INFINITE OBLITERATION!!!"
Impaler flew up so high, and started aiming directly for Corona.
"Uh oh..." Devin said, ducking...
"Oh god..." Miles said, "GUYS, TAKE COVER!!" He, Cloud, and Bri hid behind the bench...
"Uh oh! This is gonna be a big attack! Everybody duck!!" DJ screamed, and everyone did.
"DIIIIIIIIIE!!!" R-Dev yelled as the bey collided with Corona.
The coliseum almost fell to the ground. And after several minutes, the smoke cleared. The crowd, the DJ, and Devin's friends all slowly peeked up...
There was a strongly spinning Impaler in the stadium, a Corona split into it's five parts beside the stadium, and a knocked-out Devin by the wall on the other side of the arena.
Nobody said a thing. All that could be heard was R-Dev's slow footsteps, leaving the stadium, and Miles quick footsteps, running to Devin.
"DEVIN!" Miles yelled, kneeling down to him, "Devin, you okay?"
No answer...
"Devin, answer me!!"
Still, no answer...
"No, Devin..."
Cloud and Bri ran up beside him as Miles broke into heavy tears... Bri checked for a pulse...
"It's weak..." She said, "...but it's there..."
"We gotta get him to the hospital..." Cloud said. "MEDIC!"
The paramedics arrived and strapped Devin into the stretcher. Miles cried into Bri's arms as Devin was placed into the ambulance and driven off...
The stadium was completely destroyed, so they had to call a break...
Miles, still teary-eyed, broke away from Bri's arms, and started running for the exit.
"Wait, Miles!" Cloud yelled, "Where are you going?"
"I'm not, gonna just stand by, and let Devin fight for his life alone! I have to go after him, and I don't give a damn what anyone thinks! He's..my friend...and nobody, not even R-Dev, is gonna ruin that..."
Then, Miles turned and continued running. Cloud and Bri looked at each other, and followed behind him.
R-Dev stared as they ran off...
"I told you, Miles... I was gonna take em down one by one..." He said quietly... "He was first to get it. I released not even half of my energy on him. I swear to god, if he's not dead, you will have no damn idea what you'll be getting yourself into in the next round... Better hope you have a tombstone ready. It's more likely you're gonna need it now... Hehehehehe....."
Jul. 03, 2012 5:31 PM
Holy carp. That was intense. Seriously. That was awesome man.
Jul. 04, 2012 10:32 AM
When I see the real R-Dev, Im gonna put an arrow in his eye
Awesome story man
Awesome story man
Jul. 04, 2012 12:46 PM
(Jul. 04, 2012 10:32 AM)MBN Wrote: [ -> ]When I see the real R-Dev, Im gonna put an arrow in his eye
Awesome story man
That is, if you DO see him XD and thanks.
Also, everybody, Chapter 19 is in the works, then Chapter 20 will be the last chapter, and the Epilogue will finish it! Stay tuned for all of that...
...on the next DragonBallZ! XD XD XD XD XD
Jul. 04, 2012 12:49 PM
(Jul. 04, 2012 12:46 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: [ -> ](Jul. 04, 2012 10:32 AM)MBN Wrote: [ -> ]When I see the real R-Dev, Im gonna put an arrow in his eye
Awesome story man
That is, if you DO see him XD and thanks.
Also, everybody, Chapter 19 is in the works, then Chapter 20 will be the last chapter, and the Epilogue will finish it! Stay tuned for all of that...
...on the next DragonBallZ! XD XD XD XD XD
Nice. Lol, I think this story is WAY better than mine. I feel like I am making mine WAY to long... But that's just my opinion.
Jul. 04, 2012 3:11 PM
(Jul. 04, 2012 12:49 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: [ -> ](Jul. 04, 2012 12:46 PM)DefStamina88 Wrote: [ -> ](Jul. 04, 2012 10:32 AM)MBN Wrote: [ -> ]When I see the real R-Dev, Im gonna put an arrow in his eye
Awesome story man
That is, if you DO see him XD and thanks.
Also, everybody, Chapter 19 is in the works, then Chapter 20 will be the last chapter, and the Epilogue will finish it! Stay tuned for all of that...
...on the next DragonBallZ! XD XD XD XD XD
Nice. Lol, I think this story is WAY better than mine. I feel like I am making mine WAY to long... But that's just my opinion.
I think that it's just because you want to incorporate a lot into your story. There's nothing wrong with that...
Jul. 05, 2012 6:38 PM
Okay guys, I lied. Chapter 20's in the works, 21 will be the last chapter, then the Epilogue...
Anyways, Here's Chapter 19!!
Anyways, Here's Chapter 19!!
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Miles was just sitting in a chair next to Devin, who was unconscious in the hospital bed next to him...
"Please, Devin... Wake up..." Miles whispered, tears in his eyes...
Bri and Cloud were standing outside, watching the two...
"I feel so bad for them both..." Bri said to Cloud, "Devin, getting clobbered by that enormous attack. I hope he's alright..."
"Yeah..." Cloud replied... "And Miles just has to sit by and wait to see if his best friend will be safe...."
After a few moments, the Doctor came into Devin's room.
"Well?" Miles asked the doctor, "Is he gonna be okay?"
With a breath and nod of assurance, he replied, "Yes he will..."
Miles let out a sigh of relief...
"The hit only knocked him out for a bit. Remarkably, nothing was broken. His only problem is that his muscles are much weaker now than they were, and he'll need time for them to recover, but other than that, he'll be fine..."
"Thank you so much! You have no idea how relieved I am..." Miles said...
"No worries..." Doc replied, "I'll be nearby, and just holler out when he starts waking up..." He nodded, then left...
About 45 minutes later, Devin started groaning a little.
Miles hopped up and looked carefully. "Devin?" he said quietly...
"Urrrrrrrrgggghhh...M...M-Miles?" Devin said, still waking up...
"Oh thank god! Guys, he's up!!"
Bri, Cloud, and the Doctor came in as Devin started opening his eyes...
"So, how ya feel, Mr. Collins?" the doctor asked...
"Ugh, not too bad, honestly..." Devin replied...
"Well, that's good... I'll go get some forms signed. He should be out tomorrow..." The doctor nodded again, and left...
"Well, I'm alive!" Devin said jokingly.
"Yep, sure are..." Miles answered, "However, I still gotta battle R-Dev for the finals... Too bad you can't support me..."
"Yeah, that sucks..." Devin answered, "But hey, I need to rest my muscles. Don't want to start injuring stuff, y'know..."
"Yeah..." Cloud said, "Too many problems. Anyways, were heading back to the stadium, Miles. See ya there..."
After Cloud and Bri left, Miles began following after them.
"See ya soon, Devin!" He said enthusiastically...
"Wait, Miles!" Devin said quickly...
"Yes?"
"I need to tell you something..."
"What is it?"
"Come here..."
Miles walked back over to Devin. "What did you need to say?"
Devin just put his arms around Miles and gave him a hug. "Thank you so much for caring about me, Miles..."
Miles hugged as well and replied, "You too, Devin... I'll remember that during battle...."
Then Miles left, and walked out of the hospital, back towards the stadium...
"I'm coming for you, R-Dev..." Miles thought. "It's time to decide who's the champ, who's number one, who will reign champion... It WILL be me, and I will NOT be falling to you... Time for the worst battle of your lifetime, R-Dev... Be prepared..."
"Please, Devin... Wake up..." Miles whispered, tears in his eyes...
Bri and Cloud were standing outside, watching the two...
"I feel so bad for them both..." Bri said to Cloud, "Devin, getting clobbered by that enormous attack. I hope he's alright..."
"Yeah..." Cloud replied... "And Miles just has to sit by and wait to see if his best friend will be safe...."
After a few moments, the Doctor came into Devin's room.
"Well?" Miles asked the doctor, "Is he gonna be okay?"
With a breath and nod of assurance, he replied, "Yes he will..."
Miles let out a sigh of relief...
"The hit only knocked him out for a bit. Remarkably, nothing was broken. His only problem is that his muscles are much weaker now than they were, and he'll need time for them to recover, but other than that, he'll be fine..."
"Thank you so much! You have no idea how relieved I am..." Miles said...
"No worries..." Doc replied, "I'll be nearby, and just holler out when he starts waking up..." He nodded, then left...
About 45 minutes later, Devin started groaning a little.
Miles hopped up and looked carefully. "Devin?" he said quietly...
"Urrrrrrrrgggghhh...M...M-Miles?" Devin said, still waking up...
"Oh thank god! Guys, he's up!!"
Bri, Cloud, and the Doctor came in as Devin started opening his eyes...
"So, how ya feel, Mr. Collins?" the doctor asked...
"Ugh, not too bad, honestly..." Devin replied...
"Well, that's good... I'll go get some forms signed. He should be out tomorrow..." The doctor nodded again, and left...
"Well, I'm alive!" Devin said jokingly.
"Yep, sure are..." Miles answered, "However, I still gotta battle R-Dev for the finals... Too bad you can't support me..."
"Yeah, that sucks..." Devin answered, "But hey, I need to rest my muscles. Don't want to start injuring stuff, y'know..."
"Yeah..." Cloud said, "Too many problems. Anyways, were heading back to the stadium, Miles. See ya there..."
After Cloud and Bri left, Miles began following after them.
"See ya soon, Devin!" He said enthusiastically...
"Wait, Miles!" Devin said quickly...
"Yes?"
"I need to tell you something..."
"What is it?"
"Come here..."
Miles walked back over to Devin. "What did you need to say?"
Devin just put his arms around Miles and gave him a hug. "Thank you so much for caring about me, Miles..."
Miles hugged as well and replied, "You too, Devin... I'll remember that during battle...."
Then Miles left, and walked out of the hospital, back towards the stadium...
"I'm coming for you, R-Dev..." Miles thought. "It's time to decide who's the champ, who's number one, who will reign champion... It WILL be me, and I will NOT be falling to you... Time for the worst battle of your lifetime, R-Dev... Be prepared..."
Jul. 05, 2012 7:50 PM
Epic! I can't wait for the last battle!
Jul. 09, 2012 1:34 AM
Chapter 20's done!!! This is gonna be a good chapter, I know it!! It's a little long, but deal with it...
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Miles continued heading to the stadium, thinking about Devin and what R-Dev did to him.
"He's gonna pay..." Miles thought, "He isn't getting away with hurting my best friend...
However, when Miles returned to the stadium, nobody was there except the DJ, who was apparently leaving to a place...
"Huh??" Miles said, confused.
"Ah, Miles!" DJ said, "Come with me..."
As they walked together, Miles asked the DJ about what was going on....
"Well, Miles..." DJ said, "Get in the elevator, we're doing the finals on the ROOF!!"
"T-T-T-The r-roof?!?!" Miles stammered...
"Something wrong, Miles?" DJ said concerned...
"N-No, not at all, hehe..." he nervously said...
Something was wrong, however. Miles stood on the elevator, having a flashback... He remembered his last battle on the roof of a building. He fell off and ended up in the hospital, almost premanently paralyzed from the neck down. The doctor said he would be lucky to beyblade if he was able to move again...
That battle was on a two story roof, no more than twenty-five feet tall. Now they're battling on top of the coliseum, almost as high as a skyscraper. There was no way that he was gonna survive this battle if he falls off. He hated battling on the roof, and never battled on one again...until now...
"I can't possibly battle on the roof!" Miles thought to himself, "I just can't! But...R-Dev...I can't let him win either..."
"MILES!!!" DJ screamed. Miles snapped out of his thought process. "You ready to go???"
"Um...yeah, sure..." Me said, walking out to the stadium...
Once they got completely outside, the crowd all cheered, standing on other buildings.
Miles looked over the edge, towards the ground. Pedestrians were walking all along the sidewalk.
He gulped, turned and walked towards the stadium. He looked across to R-Dev. He was grinning, and his left eye was white and bloodshot, just like in the battle with Devin...
"Everyone!" DJ screamed, now riding in a helicopter above the arena, "It's time for the finals! Miles VS R-Dev! Who will win? Time to find out!"
Miles readied his bey. So did R-Dev...
3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!
Pegasis and Impaler hit the stadium and collided with a large boom.
GO, Pegasis!!" Miles screamed...
"Impaler, demolish him..." R-Dev's voice had changed. It was no longer the scratchy, evil voice it was before. It was now a sinister, demonic, deep voice that would scare anybody...
After much clashing, Miles let out his special move. "Pegasis Special Move! Wing Starbreaker!!"
Pegasis struck directly, but after the smoke cleared, Impaler was spinning powerfully...
"No..." Miles thought. "My special move...did nothing...winning is...impossible..."
Then his thoughts were interrupted by R-Dev. "SPECIAL MOVE! INFINITE OBLITERATION!!!
Pegasis was smashed all the way to the edge, Impaler trying to push it off, then a giant spark from the clash sent Miles over the edge of the building...
The crowd gasped... They couldn't see. Did he fall?
"He's gonna pay..." Miles thought, "He isn't getting away with hurting my best friend...
However, when Miles returned to the stadium, nobody was there except the DJ, who was apparently leaving to a place...
"Huh??" Miles said, confused.
"Ah, Miles!" DJ said, "Come with me..."
As they walked together, Miles asked the DJ about what was going on....
"Well, Miles..." DJ said, "Get in the elevator, we're doing the finals on the ROOF!!"
"T-T-T-The r-roof?!?!" Miles stammered...
"Something wrong, Miles?" DJ said concerned...
"N-No, not at all, hehe..." he nervously said...
Something was wrong, however. Miles stood on the elevator, having a flashback... He remembered his last battle on the roof of a building. He fell off and ended up in the hospital, almost premanently paralyzed from the neck down. The doctor said he would be lucky to beyblade if he was able to move again...
That battle was on a two story roof, no more than twenty-five feet tall. Now they're battling on top of the coliseum, almost as high as a skyscraper. There was no way that he was gonna survive this battle if he falls off. He hated battling on the roof, and never battled on one again...until now...
"I can't possibly battle on the roof!" Miles thought to himself, "I just can't! But...R-Dev...I can't let him win either..."
"MILES!!!" DJ screamed. Miles snapped out of his thought process. "You ready to go???"
"Um...yeah, sure..." Me said, walking out to the stadium...
Once they got completely outside, the crowd all cheered, standing on other buildings.
Miles looked over the edge, towards the ground. Pedestrians were walking all along the sidewalk.
He gulped, turned and walked towards the stadium. He looked across to R-Dev. He was grinning, and his left eye was white and bloodshot, just like in the battle with Devin...
"Everyone!" DJ screamed, now riding in a helicopter above the arena, "It's time for the finals! Miles VS R-Dev! Who will win? Time to find out!"
Miles readied his bey. So did R-Dev...
3! 2! 1! LET IT RIP!!!
Pegasis and Impaler hit the stadium and collided with a large boom.
GO, Pegasis!!" Miles screamed...
"Impaler, demolish him..." R-Dev's voice had changed. It was no longer the scratchy, evil voice it was before. It was now a sinister, demonic, deep voice that would scare anybody...
After much clashing, Miles let out his special move. "Pegasis Special Move! Wing Starbreaker!!"
Pegasis struck directly, but after the smoke cleared, Impaler was spinning powerfully...
"No..." Miles thought. "My special move...did nothing...winning is...impossible..."
Then his thoughts were interrupted by R-Dev. "SPECIAL MOVE! INFINITE OBLITERATION!!!
Pegasis was smashed all the way to the edge, Impaler trying to push it off, then a giant spark from the clash sent Miles over the edge of the building...
The crowd gasped... They couldn't see. Did he fall?
Jul. 09, 2012 1:51 AM
Dude! That was amazing! What a cliff hanger! Oh look at my story's OP, real quick. I added a little something. XD This isn't meant to advertise in any way. Anyways, THAT WAS EPIC! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Jul. 11, 2012 8:46 PM
Hey Guys! Just wanting to let you know, July 14th...
Yep, July 14th. That's the day that I will post Chapter 21 (the last chapter!) and the Epilogue, which the Epilogue will introduce you to a cool secret!
But yeah, Mark it on your iPhone's calendar (LOL)! July 14th is the release date for the finale of Fight For Fame, Road to Success!!!
Yep, July 14th. That's the day that I will post Chapter 21 (the last chapter!) and the Epilogue, which the Epilogue will introduce you to a cool secret!
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The Epilogue will actually also be a slight introduction into my 3rd Story, which I plan on starting about a week after this finale! (don't wanna keep you guys waiting! )
But yeah, Mark it on your iPhone's calendar (LOL)! July 14th is the release date for the finale of Fight For Fame, Road to Success!!!
Jul. 13, 2012 4:51 PM
Sorry for Duoble-post, but I just want to say thank you to all of the people who saw and commented on this thread! This story is now the most popular thread I ever created, with almost 1000 views! Thank you!
Also, don't forget to look at the post above for info about the story! Tomorrow, the ending of the story arrives!
Also, don't forget to look at the post above for info about the story! Tomorrow, the ending of the story arrives!
Jul. 14, 2012 11:34 AM
Today's the big day... The last chapter...
Jul. 14, 2012 12:44 PM
Hey Guys, it is here!!! Check it out, Chapter 21, THE LAST CHAPTER!!!
EPILOGUE
So, that's the end!!! Tell me what you thought and how you think the next story's gonna go, now that you've got a sneak peek. Please leave any feedback on the story, and tell me what you think.
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"NO!" Bri shouted as Miles fell off the cliff, "He's...gone..." She turned to Cloud and cried...
Then she rose up when a kid yelled. "GUYS, HE'S HANGING ON!!"
Most of the crowd rushed carefully to the edge, and DJ flew around to see...
There he was. Miles, hanging on for dear life on top of the coliseum, several hundred feet off the ground.
He was thinking to himself silently. "So, this is it. I'm going to fall to R-Dev, just as he wanted, as my strength starts failing. I'm sorry, my friends...goodbye..."
Bri and Cloud fought through the crowd to see him. As soon as they see him, Bri yells out. "Come on, Miles!! You can get up!! Pegasis is still spinning. The battle is NOT over!!!"
Those words rang in his mind. "It isn't over?" He questioned himself. "Pegasis, is still fighting?" He slowly pulled up to look over the edge. It was hard to see, but Pegasis was still spinning fighting, right on the edge for survival.
Then Miles slipped, and was only holding on my one hand. "Pegasis, wants to battle to the very end. It doesn't want to give up yet. It....can win..."
Then, Miles let out a yelling command, "Come on, Pegasis!! Please, fight for me!!!"
With those words, Pegasis started slowly pushing Impaler away.
The crowd's hopes grew, and they started cheering.
"HOW?!?!" R-Dev yelled, still in a demonic voice, "IT CAN'T BE!! NO!! KILL HIM, IMPALER!!"
Impaler pushed Pegasis bbck again...
"Don't stop fighting, Pegasis!!!" Miles continued to yell. "We can do this! We WILL do this!!"
Pegasis once again pushed Impaler back, this time, not going back to the edge.
Bri and Cloud cheered with the crowd as Pegasis pushed Impaler back slowly.
Then, the cheer grew louder...
Miles was able to get his second hand on the ledge. He pulled himself up, slowly, but surely, and came back to the top of the building. In the Battle, Pegasis had now successfully pushed Impaler away, and was now standing in the stadium... Impaler was now completely defenseless...
The crowd erupted in cheers at what they saw...
Miles rose to his feet, and stared down R-Dev.
"NO!" R-Dev yelled "HOW? HOW DID YOU SURVIVE? IMPALER DO SOMETHING!!!"
Impaler just stood, open for attack...
"Y'see, R-Dev..." Miles said, "I don't use majestic powers or fancy tricks to win battles... I rely on only one thing, and it's one thing you'll never have..." He paused for a second. "That thing, is a Bey Spirit..."
With that, Miles let out a Special Move he had never released before...
"PEGASIS, OMEGA STAR NOVA!!!"
Pegasis flew up hundreds of feet high, and started quickly charging towards Impaler.
Within seconds, Pegasis hit, and several cracks were heard from Impaler... A large explosion occurred, and a smoke cloud formed. It cleared quickly, and in front of R-Dev, was a cracked and stressed Basalt Impaler 230CS. The face was split, the metal wheel stressed, and the clear wheel and track, cracked.
In the stadium, was one bey...Pegasis...
The crowd erupted in a large cheer.
"IT'S ALL OVER!!" DJ screamed from the copter, "MILES HAS WON THE ELITE TOURNAMENT!!!!"
Miles picked up Pegasis, glowing with energy.
"Thank you, Pegasis. Thank you..."
The crowd grew silent, and started heading down...
R-Dev, stood still...
"So R-Dev, how about that?" Miles replied...
No answer...
"Um, R-Dev..."
No answer again, he stumbled back once, towards the edge, then again, and again...
"R-Dev...No....NO, DON'T DO IT!!"
R-Dev wasn't trying to do it. He was, unconsciously, walking towards the edge, and was one step from falling.
Miles ran in a full sprint, and as R-Dev fell off, he jumped after him.
The crowd turned and gasped. "Oh my god..." Cloud said. "C'mon Bri, we gotta go to the bottom, quickly!!", so they did...
Falling, Miles caught up to R-Dev and held onto him...
"Well, this sucks." Miles thought. "Oh well, I won, and at least that's what I got..."
Then, Miles' thoughts were interrupted by screams.
"Don't worry, buddy, I gotcha!!"
"Who is that?" He thought, and he looked and was shocked...
It was DEVIN. His arms were bandaged, and legs quivering. He also had a bandage on his head.
"No...he couldn't possibly..." Miles thought, "He couldn't! He's crazy! He'll hurt himself!"
But before he could think, Devin, with unbelievable strength, caught both Miles and R-Dev, combined over 300 pounds, with his arms. Once he laid them down, Devin screamed in agonizing pain, and fell to the ground.
Miles got up, and ran to Devin's aid.
"DEVIN!" He yelled, "You okay??"
"My right arm...I...can't move it...."
"Devin..."
"No, don't worry about me. Are you and R-Dev okay?"
"Yeah, but, you just hurt yourself! You need medical help!"
"Not now though. You guys aren't hurt are you?"
"Nope..."
"Phew, then I did it..."
"Y'know, ya didn't have to go through all of this, just to save me and R-Dev..."
"But I couldn't let you die, Miles, or even get injured. You're....my friend..."
Miles was silent for a second. "Thanks Devin..."
"So, buddy, did ya win...?"
Miles looked at R-Dev, then with a nod of assurance, he said, "Yes...."
Bri and Cloud had finally reached the bottom, and ran towards the two.
"Miles, you're okay!!" Bri said as she jumped into his arms...
"Yep, Devin caught me! He'll need some help, but he saved my life..."
"He's such a hero. I'm just glad you're safe..." And she gave Miles a kiss on the lips. Miles blushed, but kissed as well...
"Ahh, so there it is!!" Devin remarked behind them. "Good thing I saw it myself!"
Miles and Bri once again fell into a laughter. Cloud called for an ambulance.
"C'mon, Winner..." Devin remarked to Miles, "Let's get me fixed up..."
With that, the four left for the hospital
Then she rose up when a kid yelled. "GUYS, HE'S HANGING ON!!"
Most of the crowd rushed carefully to the edge, and DJ flew around to see...
There he was. Miles, hanging on for dear life on top of the coliseum, several hundred feet off the ground.
He was thinking to himself silently. "So, this is it. I'm going to fall to R-Dev, just as he wanted, as my strength starts failing. I'm sorry, my friends...goodbye..."
Bri and Cloud fought through the crowd to see him. As soon as they see him, Bri yells out. "Come on, Miles!! You can get up!! Pegasis is still spinning. The battle is NOT over!!!"
Those words rang in his mind. "It isn't over?" He questioned himself. "Pegasis, is still fighting?" He slowly pulled up to look over the edge. It was hard to see, but Pegasis was still spinning fighting, right on the edge for survival.
Then Miles slipped, and was only holding on my one hand. "Pegasis, wants to battle to the very end. It doesn't want to give up yet. It....can win..."
Then, Miles let out a yelling command, "Come on, Pegasis!! Please, fight for me!!!"
With those words, Pegasis started slowly pushing Impaler away.
The crowd's hopes grew, and they started cheering.
"HOW?!?!" R-Dev yelled, still in a demonic voice, "IT CAN'T BE!! NO!! KILL HIM, IMPALER!!"
Impaler pushed Pegasis bbck again...
"Don't stop fighting, Pegasis!!!" Miles continued to yell. "We can do this! We WILL do this!!"
Pegasis once again pushed Impaler back, this time, not going back to the edge.
Bri and Cloud cheered with the crowd as Pegasis pushed Impaler back slowly.
Then, the cheer grew louder...
Miles was able to get his second hand on the ledge. He pulled himself up, slowly, but surely, and came back to the top of the building. In the Battle, Pegasis had now successfully pushed Impaler away, and was now standing in the stadium... Impaler was now completely defenseless...
The crowd erupted in cheers at what they saw...
Miles rose to his feet, and stared down R-Dev.
"NO!" R-Dev yelled "HOW? HOW DID YOU SURVIVE? IMPALER DO SOMETHING!!!"
Impaler just stood, open for attack...
"Y'see, R-Dev..." Miles said, "I don't use majestic powers or fancy tricks to win battles... I rely on only one thing, and it's one thing you'll never have..." He paused for a second. "That thing, is a Bey Spirit..."
With that, Miles let out a Special Move he had never released before...
"PEGASIS, OMEGA STAR NOVA!!!"
Pegasis flew up hundreds of feet high, and started quickly charging towards Impaler.
Within seconds, Pegasis hit, and several cracks were heard from Impaler... A large explosion occurred, and a smoke cloud formed. It cleared quickly, and in front of R-Dev, was a cracked and stressed Basalt Impaler 230CS. The face was split, the metal wheel stressed, and the clear wheel and track, cracked.
In the stadium, was one bey...Pegasis...
The crowd erupted in a large cheer.
"IT'S ALL OVER!!" DJ screamed from the copter, "MILES HAS WON THE ELITE TOURNAMENT!!!!"
Miles picked up Pegasis, glowing with energy.
"Thank you, Pegasis. Thank you..."
The crowd grew silent, and started heading down...
R-Dev, stood still...
"So R-Dev, how about that?" Miles replied...
No answer...
"Um, R-Dev..."
No answer again, he stumbled back once, towards the edge, then again, and again...
"R-Dev...No....NO, DON'T DO IT!!"
R-Dev wasn't trying to do it. He was, unconsciously, walking towards the edge, and was one step from falling.
Miles ran in a full sprint, and as R-Dev fell off, he jumped after him.
The crowd turned and gasped. "Oh my god..." Cloud said. "C'mon Bri, we gotta go to the bottom, quickly!!", so they did...
Falling, Miles caught up to R-Dev and held onto him...
"Well, this sucks." Miles thought. "Oh well, I won, and at least that's what I got..."
Then, Miles' thoughts were interrupted by screams.
"Don't worry, buddy, I gotcha!!"
"Who is that?" He thought, and he looked and was shocked...
It was DEVIN. His arms were bandaged, and legs quivering. He also had a bandage on his head.
"No...he couldn't possibly..." Miles thought, "He couldn't! He's crazy! He'll hurt himself!"
But before he could think, Devin, with unbelievable strength, caught both Miles and R-Dev, combined over 300 pounds, with his arms. Once he laid them down, Devin screamed in agonizing pain, and fell to the ground.
Miles got up, and ran to Devin's aid.
"DEVIN!" He yelled, "You okay??"
"My right arm...I...can't move it...."
"Devin..."
"No, don't worry about me. Are you and R-Dev okay?"
"Yeah, but, you just hurt yourself! You need medical help!"
"Not now though. You guys aren't hurt are you?"
"Nope..."
"Phew, then I did it..."
"Y'know, ya didn't have to go through all of this, just to save me and R-Dev..."
"But I couldn't let you die, Miles, or even get injured. You're....my friend..."
Miles was silent for a second. "Thanks Devin..."
"So, buddy, did ya win...?"
Miles looked at R-Dev, then with a nod of assurance, he said, "Yes...."
Bri and Cloud had finally reached the bottom, and ran towards the two.
"Miles, you're okay!!" Bri said as she jumped into his arms...
"Yep, Devin caught me! He'll need some help, but he saved my life..."
"He's such a hero. I'm just glad you're safe..." And she gave Miles a kiss on the lips. Miles blushed, but kissed as well...
"Ahh, so there it is!!" Devin remarked behind them. "Good thing I saw it myself!"
Miles and Bri once again fell into a laughter. Cloud called for an ambulance.
"C'mon, Winner..." Devin remarked to Miles, "Let's get me fixed up..."
With that, the four left for the hospital
EPILOGUE
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It had been 2 weeks since The tournament...
Miles, Devin, Bri, and Cloud, together, created a beyblade store and training center, where new bladers could come for parts and practice with each other...
Miles and Bri are now officially boyfriend and girlfriend. Miles works on maintenance, while Bri helps out with parts. Miles keeps his trophy from the tournament right beside him at all times... Bri also got herself a Bey, so she could play. She's improving quickly with her bey Meteo L-Drago CH120EWD...
Devin is better now. His arms had to be surgically removed and replaced with bioic arms, but they work for him. He helps train the new bladers, and teach them tricks... He lives with Miles and Bri, and acts kinda like a big bro...
What about Cloud? He's there too, helping out the new bladers, striving to be better. He ran into some financial problems, so Miles gladly took him in.
They all live like one big happy family...
One day, R-Dev walked into the place.
"Stop right there!" Miles shouted, holding a gun...
"Calm down, calm down, Miles, I'm not here to hurt you, steal anything, or whatever..."
Miles put the gun down...
"I came in for maintenance on Impaler. I want to battle, and I can't with this junk..." R-Dev said, holding out his broken Impaler...
"Hmmm....okay then..." Miles said, and he started working on Impaler... "So, have you switched your ways...?"
"For now, yes..." R-Dev replied. "I still hate you for a few weeks ago..."
"Of course..."
"But, also...I heard that you saved me, when I fell..."
"Well, I didn't really save you, but I did jump after you. Devin caught us...."
"Wow... Well, I guess I should thank him later..."
"Anyways, "Miles said, turning. "Here's your Basalt Impaler 230CS. I repaired it, and and painted it black, just for you..."
"Sweet..." R-Dev said, taking it. "Now, how much do I owe ya?"
"Nothing..."
"Nothing?" R-Dev questioned. "Are you sure?"
"Yeah, keep it all. It's free. So, now that it's fixed, what are you gonna do?"
"Well, I heard that the US is holding qualifiers for the US National team in a few months. You guys should try it. Each team gets 4 members, so You guys could fit perfectly.... I gotta go back to Russia so I can qualify, so, see ya in a few months?"
"Sure...." Miles said, smiling...
"Alright then, see ya..." And for the first time, R-Dev happily smiled as he walked out of the store....
Miles looked up and thought to himself...
"US National Team, huh? Well, looks like we need to get training. I'll see you then, R-Dev. I can't wait for our rematch..."
THE END.
Miles, Devin, Bri, and Cloud, together, created a beyblade store and training center, where new bladers could come for parts and practice with each other...
Miles and Bri are now officially boyfriend and girlfriend. Miles works on maintenance, while Bri helps out with parts. Miles keeps his trophy from the tournament right beside him at all times... Bri also got herself a Bey, so she could play. She's improving quickly with her bey Meteo L-Drago CH120EWD...
Devin is better now. His arms had to be surgically removed and replaced with bioic arms, but they work for him. He helps train the new bladers, and teach them tricks... He lives with Miles and Bri, and acts kinda like a big bro...
What about Cloud? He's there too, helping out the new bladers, striving to be better. He ran into some financial problems, so Miles gladly took him in.
They all live like one big happy family...
One day, R-Dev walked into the place.
"Stop right there!" Miles shouted, holding a gun...
"Calm down, calm down, Miles, I'm not here to hurt you, steal anything, or whatever..."
Miles put the gun down...
"I came in for maintenance on Impaler. I want to battle, and I can't with this junk..." R-Dev said, holding out his broken Impaler...
"Hmmm....okay then..." Miles said, and he started working on Impaler... "So, have you switched your ways...?"
"For now, yes..." R-Dev replied. "I still hate you for a few weeks ago..."
"Of course..."
"But, also...I heard that you saved me, when I fell..."
"Well, I didn't really save you, but I did jump after you. Devin caught us...."
"Wow... Well, I guess I should thank him later..."
"Anyways, "Miles said, turning. "Here's your Basalt Impaler 230CS. I repaired it, and and painted it black, just for you..."
"Sweet..." R-Dev said, taking it. "Now, how much do I owe ya?"
"Nothing..."
"Nothing?" R-Dev questioned. "Are you sure?"
"Yeah, keep it all. It's free. So, now that it's fixed, what are you gonna do?"
"Well, I heard that the US is holding qualifiers for the US National team in a few months. You guys should try it. Each team gets 4 members, so You guys could fit perfectly.... I gotta go back to Russia so I can qualify, so, see ya in a few months?"
"Sure...." Miles said, smiling...
"Alright then, see ya..." And for the first time, R-Dev happily smiled as he walked out of the store....
Miles looked up and thought to himself...
"US National Team, huh? Well, looks like we need to get training. I'll see you then, R-Dev. I can't wait for our rematch..."
THE END.
So, that's the end!!! Tell me what you thought and how you think the next story's gonna go, now that you've got a sneak peek. Please leave any feedback on the story, and tell me what you think.
Jul. 14, 2012 12:49 PM
SUPER DUPER EPIC BROTASTIC FINALE!
You are great at writing!
Can't wait for the next story!
You are great at writing!
Can't wait for the next story!
Jul. 14, 2012 12:51 PM
Wow. Thats it. Just wow. This story was AMAZING!!! I cant wait for the next one! You are awesome defstamina88!