World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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CHAPTER 1: How it All Began
Tip : Make the chapters longer. Remember, a chapter is not a paragraph.
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Very interesting... yes, you should make the chapters longer... your grammar is adequate and the plot has great potential... keep up the great writing!