World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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(Apr. 28, 2012  3:59 AM)Akio314 Wrote: [ -> ]Could you please review mine, check my avatar for the main character.

PM Fakir or me your story, please.
Akio your story was kinda hard to follow at first but it has its kinks and diologe goes like thi

"hey bill" rob said
"hey rob"bill said
You can seriously just write those reviews in the stories' respective threads. If you want to review so much, then you should take the responsibility of visiting people's story topics.
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