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Here is a little pilot for my (maybe) up-coming fan fiction based on beyblade, should i continue? Vote on the poll and leave feedback on the thread please!

Zinogami – The Cloaked Blader
Story Pilot
Written by Thomas Grayson

Zinogami was an average boy; he was an average height with short brown hair that was as spiky as a thorn bush. He had deep blue eyes, and wore casual clothes. Zinogami had never had too many friends; he wasn’t a people’s person. He was brutally beaten at school during bey-battles by bullies who forced him to battle, and afterwards, they pushed he and punched him to the ground, whilst he begged for mercy. The bullying was so persistent he even missed school and locked himself in his room for days and weeks on end like an animal hibernating. After the usual day at school of ferocious bullying, he came home to find his life at a complete stand still. He found his parents lying on the floor, dead. They had been victims of a burglary, and obviously the culprit was armed. Zinogami life was shattered right in-front of him, he couldn’t even feel emotion any more. He ran away, as far as he could so that no one could ever find him. He swore revenge that day on anyone who had caused him pain and suffering throughout his unbearable childhood.
It's pretty nice yeah. A bit short, so some description was left out, but a very nice start. A few grammatical errors though, I'll get around to editing eventually.
Might I ask, where did you get the character's name from? Or what does it mean? Just curious