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Accepting character requests, also accepting a main character(evil, Pm me for that one.)
Character form:
Blader Name:
Age:
Beyblade(made up or not w/ type and description):
Special Move(nothing to extreme please):
Personality:
History(optional):
Looks(be a bit descriptive):

My characters so far:

Blader Name: Masaru Hara
Age: 11
Beyblade: Hell Capricorn H125ES(Stamina Left-Spin)
Special Move: Demon Horn Bash, makes Angelic Capricorn darken to a pure black, and tilt, exposing it's spin track and smashes into the opponent, cause Capricorn to be exposed to a direct attack to the spin track.
Personality: Calm, can be hot-headed at times, hard to make friends with, has a little bit of a trust issue
History: Masaru grew up without the care and affection of a mother, and around the age of 5 he stumbled upon his fathers stash of beyblades, he found one amongst the many, it was red with black markings, the facebolt was red, it's energy ring a lava red with designs that seemed to represent horns colored black, it's fusion wheel that had ridges that somewhat seemed to represent wings, a normal silver color, it's spin track representing horns that inched out a bit from the metal wheel with an odd sharp tip. He trained himself, and over the years became better, but he had his weaknesses like any other blader, he had never entered a tournament, but did alot of street battling, building his skill. His father was catching onto his beyblade obssesion and told him one day they were moving, he didn't say where, but told him he'd enjoy it. When they got there, it was much cleaner than where they were before. He soon figured out that the town had loads of beycenters for beybladers and even the parks had stadiums. He soon met two of the best friends he'd ever had, Ace and Kenny. Ace was more of an attack type pro and Kenny was a balance pro.
Looks: Light skinned boy with white spiked hair with hazel eyes. He wears a black long sleeve button up that never buttoned up with a red short sleeve underneath with matching black jeans and white sneakers.

Blader Name: Ace
Age: 12
Beyblade: MF Wind Striker F:S(Attack Right-Spin) Wind striker has a green Metal Facebolt, and a regular green Striker energy ring, the wind fusion wheel is silver, hand looks alot like the Earth metal except it has spiked ridges, F:S(Final Strike), when low on stamina accelerates and hits opponent for a last resort.
Special Move: Acceleration Barrage, Wind Striker rapidly spins to amazing speed, moving so quickly it seems invisible and rapidly hitting the opponent.
Personality: hot headed, easily angered, and always looking for a fight.
Looks: Dark-skinned, and low cut black hair with brown eyes. He wears a green and white hat and green collared short sleeve shirt with blue jeans and green nikes.

Blader Name: Kenny Agusto
Age: 12
Beyblade:MF-H Gaia Aries GB170EWB(Defense Right spin)Gaia Aries has a Silver Heavy Metal Facebolt, and a silver aries facebolt. The Gaia fusion wheel is a bigger version of rock in a plain silver color, the WGB170 is a heightened and wider version of GB145 allowing to hold 4 metal balls instead of 2. EWB(ExtraWideBall) allows for greater hold on the stadium, making it harder to knock out.
Special Move: Defensive Stance, Gaia Aries stays in one spot , not being phased by any attack, but absorbs each hit and sends it back at the opponent in a wave of energy.
Personality: Carefree, always happy, hard to make angry, barely ever serious.
Looks: light skinned, and forward spiked black hair with brown eyes. He wears a red sweater with blue jeans and black sneakers.

Now for the story, enjoy!

Chapter 1

"You're on Kenny!" A dark skinned boy said enthusiastically, he stood in front of a huge stadium in a forest-like area, a crowd of kids arounds it. Kenny stood on the opposite side of the stadium.
"Heh, wish me luck, Masaru. Let's do this Ace." Kenny said, a white light launcher held in his hand with a silver bey attached to it.
"Good luck." Masaru said leaning on a tree near the stadium. Ace dug into his pocket, pulling out a green light launcher and attaching a green bey to it.
"3!" Ace shouted.
"2!" Kenny shouted with a smile.
"1!" The crowd of kids shouted.
"Go Shoot!" Kenny and Ace shouted in unison and launched their beys into the stadium. Kenny's bey, Gaia Aries immediately went for the center as Ace's, Wind Striker went in a flower patern, hitting Gaia Aries at the same time moving a bit but not alot.
"Alright Striker! Attack!" Ace shouted, his Striker going near the edge of the stadium and coming back at Aries at amazing speeds, it made contact and the two beys clashed, sparks flying amongst the arena. The two beys went flying to the edges of the stadium, and came back at eachother repeating the proccess. When they flew back again
Ace smirked.
"Now! Special attack! Acceleration Barrage!" Ace shouted, Striker began to glow and it dissapeared, suddenly, Aries began to get hit out of nowhere.
"I've seen this more than enough times to know how it works." Kenny chuckled. "Counter! Special move! Defensive Stance!" Aries stopped moving and stayed in one spot, then started emitting bursts of energy in all directions,you could see striker fly up in the air and land next to Ace.
"Aww man, almost had ya too." Ace said, picking his Striker as Aries flew back to Kenny's hands. The crowd began cheering and clapping.
"Not bad guys." Masaru said clapping with a grin on his face.
"Heh, too bad we didn't get to see Hell Capricorn at work." Kenny said.
"Well, I don't like using him for no reason." Masaru said. There was some commotion in the crowd and a random kid made his way to the front.
"Where's Masaru Hara!? I challenge you, if you aren't too chicken to come out and fight." The boy said.
"Who's asking?" Ace asked.
"Seth! Are you Masaru!?" Seth asked, he held up a yellow bey. "Me and Flame Sagittario will take you down." Masaru facepalmed and stood up, walking to the stadium flipping a red and black bey and catching it, attacking it to a black light launcher.
"You're not even really worth the time to be honest." Masaru said, readying his launcher. "It's not the least bit customized either, this'll be a quick match..." he thought.
"Grr, I'll show you!" Seth said getting irritated. "3!"
"2." Masaru said, not really caring.
"1!" The crowd shouted.
"Go Shoot!" Masaru and Seth shouted in unison, launching their beys.
"Capricorn shouldn't have much trouble." Masaru thought. "Go Capricorn, attack." The red and black bey went on a course towards the Saggitario, it was low enough to make contact with the Saggitario's C145, it then suddenly tilted and hit the Sharp tip, sending it flying in the air, it came down ablaze.
"Saggitario Flame Claw!" Seth shouted, it struck Capricon and it began to wobble, it rushed at the saggitario as it landed, it H125(Horn125) exposed, hitting saggitario with it, sending it out of the stadium.
"You put up a good fight, not bad." Masaru said, he looked back at capricorn and it seemed as it had never been hit, it wasn't wobbling anymore. It then flew back into Masaru's hand.
"What is up with that bey!?" Seth shouted with a dumbfounded look.
"That's a secret." Masaru said with a smirk. "Let's get going guys, let's head to a Beycenter maybe some good opponents."
"Yessir." Kenny said, putting it together and replacing the "s" with a "z". Jamesly nodding with a smirk and they walked off.

Character form:
Blader Name:Vereor Umbra
Age:Unknown(estimated 12-16)
Beyblade:Undead Spirit 145 X(treme)D(efence) (Defence type, L&R Spin)
Face bolt:Completely black except 2 scary eyes
F. wheel:Completly round and smooth.
C.wheel:2 spirits chasing each other.Black.
XD:Wide ball with hidden propertys.
Special MoveConfusedudden DeathGasppponent's bey just stoppes spinning
Personality:Wants to make everyone a 'lifeless zombie'.
History:Unknown
Looks:Wears a big black robe completly covering his face.
Really, don't use charactor requests iin a story. It just ruins it, and make people think you have no imagination. Plus, Hell Capricorn can't spin left, and Strikers called Unicorno, btw.
(Dec. 07, 2011  8:02 PM)qwertxj3 Wrote: [ -> ]Really, don't use charactor requests iin a story. It just ruins it, and make people think you have no imagination. Plus, Hell Capricorn can't spin left, and Strikers called Unicorno, btw.
Ok, thanks for the tip, I'm just usiing the english name because I like it better. XD and I'll was just trying to improvise for a fusion wheel until I came up with something else, how's Demonic Capricorn sound? Tongue_out
Yeah, pretty good, I guess. It fits in how capricorn changes into a demon like thing.
I actually stopped with this one, you should check out my other one(better)
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Untitled-Beyblade-Story
Oh, it's nice. Still using capricorn eh? But it's WAYYYYYYYYYYY better.
(Dec. 08, 2011  5:23 AM)qwertxj3 Wrote: [ -> ]Oh, it's nice. Still using capricorn eh? But it's WAYYYYYYYYYYY better.
Lol thanks, and yeah, I have a strange love for Kerbecs and Capricorn.
Character form:
Blader Name: Dino Sernos
Age:12
Beyblade: Night Unicorno GB145 JB
Special Move: Shining Belt- Bey creates a tornado that sucks in opposing bey then attacks opponent twice before striking it in the middle smashing it into stadium losing its balance.

Personality: Dino is super kind and generous but when blading he gets serious and loses his temper.

History(optional):
Looks(be a bit descriptive): Has a green glove and a Black glove a white coat and a nike tracksuit.
Didn't qwertxj3 said for Masaru Hara not to accept any character requests?
(Dec. 10, 2011  12:59 AM)Mephiles Dark Wrote: [ -> ]Character form:
Blader Name: Dino Sernos
Age:12
Beyblade: Night Unicorno GB145 JB
Special Move: Shining Belt- Bey creates a tornado that sucks in opposing bey then attacks opponent twice before striking it in the middle smashing it into stadium losing its balance.

Personality: Dino is super kind and generous but when blading he gets serious and loses his temper.

History(optional):
Looks(be a bit descriptive): Has a green glove and a Black glove a white coat and a nike tracksuit.

Sorry, this story's shut down
Why don't you ask the mods to close it?
...I had a character request...
I'll tell u anyway...

Character form:

Name: Jayden Hasata
Age:13
Bey name:Rock Libra BD145RS(Right spin Balance type)
Special move:Beam Inferno.A beam of light comes from the top of Libra,leaving the opposing bey with a stadium out.If opposing bey is launching a special move while this one occurs,Libra escapes the opposing move,leaving a different affect each time.Then the light fades.
Personality:Cool,popular,tough blader who is traveling to find and defeat bladers to become number one.Balance blader.
History:When Jayden was a baby,he accadentally swallowed a facebolt,which was his dad's bey face,which was from a weak bey.Jayden finds out about it,and tries his best even in present time,to become stronger,and keep the bolt swallow thing a secret.
Look:Wears Aeropostale short sleeve T-Shirt(purple),black jean coat,blue leather jeans,Adidas shoes that are coloured black,leather black gloves,and has light skin colour.
SERIOUSLY, READ THE THREAD. It's even less then one page...