CHAPTER ONE
One day,a blader named Jayden was at a Beyblade tournament."Let's go!"Jayden cried."Let's win this thing!"His Bey smashed at the opponent's Ray Zurafa M145DS.Zurafa ended up with a stadium out.Jayden said,"Yes!We won!"The other blader said,"You got lucky this time!Next time:I will beat you!"Jayden adds,"In your dreams!"As Jayden walks home,he sees a large beam come from the park.Nobody was there,then the beam faded.He saw a Beyblade spinning,then it stopped.Jayden picks up the bey.He then examines it.It was a Rock Libra BD145RS.After he found out it's name,he then said out,"Let's go Rock Libra!",then he tried it out.It had outstanding power!Power Jayden couldn't even control!
Bad punctuation. Horrible story.
>LET'S GO BEYBLADE
>YEAH WE WON
>OH LOOK A BEAM OF LIGHT FROM THE PARK
>COOL A BEYBLADE MADE FROM RANDOM PARTS
>YEAH LET'S GO!!!
End of story.
The Beyblade before he had the Rock Libra was like one of the beys that belongs to a weaker blader,only he was much stronger,like almost number 1,only he wasn't.
What was the character's name,bey,and bio?
I will post the bio of the main character sooner than later.
Like the story!
I have a character request:
Blader name:Michael
Bey name
arth Byxis 270B
Personality:Light,Mythology
Age:14
Bio:Has been studying mythology since he was like,7 years old.Recieved his Beyblade(Earth Byxis 270B)for his 10th birthday.Loves Beyblade.When he doesn't battle,he studies mythology(He LOVES,mythology like hell man!)
That is my request!Thank u!
Dude can my char be in it???????????
(Dec. 07, 2011 12:25 AM)Mephiles Dark Wrote: [ -> ]Dude can my char be in it???????????
Just be patient, repeating the same thing again just creates spam
Don't use the word,"hell" in posts,it could get you warned.You are almost BANNED.Anyway,thanks for the request!
I'l think about adding the character to the story.
I just told rydeatwon NOT,to use that word,so please don't report this post.
.I'm very nice.
Hell Kerbecs BD145DS.
Hell Herculeo S130RB.
Hell Aquario BD145F (Boost).
What the Hell?
HellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHellHell
(Dec. 07, 2011 12:29 AM)Raiderofawe Wrote: [ -> ]Don't use the word,"hell" in posts,it could get you warned.You are almost BANNED.Anyway,thanks for the request!
I'l think about adding the character to the story.
I just told rydeatwon NOT,to use that word,so please don't report this post..I'm very nice.
This is incredibly stupid. Hell is:
a) Not a bad word.
b) Used by TT, the Japanese Beyblade company, as the name of the metal wheel in 'HELL Kerbecs BD145DS'.
Plus, it's not really up to you who gets warned and how close they are to being banned. :\
Really,you can say "Hell",as in Hell Kerbecs,or any bey with that wheel,just NOT,in any other way!(I guess you can,IDK!)
Ok,I agree with you.End of the "Hell" conversation,let's just get back to the thread!Don't you agree?
(Dec. 07, 2011 12:40 AM)GaHooleone Wrote: [ -> ]Hell is:
a) Not a bad word.
Plus, it's not really up to you who gets warned and how close they are to being banned. :\
Also, you can't enforce language rules, especially on a simple word like 'Hell'. It's not up to you to decide, so please stop trying to act like a mod and pull your story out of its Mary-Sue, horrible quality stupor.
Reported. Read the rules and come back. You can say "hell" and even "damn." It is not against the rules, but it isn't recommended.
Ga'Hooleone wrote:
This is incredibly stupid.Hell is:
a)Not a bad word
b)Used by TT,the Japanese Beyblade company,as the name of the metal wheel in 'HELL Kerbecs BD145DS'.
Plus,it's really not up to you who gets warned and how close they are to being banned.
Whatever I honestly don't care anymore...
Kinda rushed, or is that just me? O.o
No, it's not you. Short chapter, bad punchuation, no paragraphs ect.
Dino Sunkera
Age:12
Bey: Night Unicorno GB145 JB
S.Move: Silent Strike- The bey strikes the opposing bey then feints appearing on top of bey, JB making opposing bey lose balance.
Dino's Personality: Dino's father died in a blading accident which took him hard and Dino has won many championships which makes him feel good and he is a very generous person
OK,I will try to get the next chapter thought up,and add the characters.
I also have a new character but I forgot it's description...
I'll remember eventually!
I'd like to change something:
Bey name
arth HOROGIUM,not earth BYXIS.
That's what i am going to change about the Bey name in my character request.
For my request,by 270 I mean 230.I forgot the special move,too.
The special move:Time Table Doom.Horogium goes around in a small circle in the center of the stadium,(or battlefield)and when the opponent tries to attack,Horogium strikes at the opponent causing a sleep out!
CHAPTER TWO
As Jayden arrives home,his parents ask,"How did it go?Who won?"Jayden says,"Awesome!I won!"His parents said,"good job!"Then Jayden showed his parents his brand new Rock Libra.Then he heard a sound."Stange.",he whispered to himself.Then another blader comes out!He launches a Beyblade.It was a Night Unicorno GB145JB.The blader calls,"My name is Dino Sunkera!I challenge you!"Jayden then cries,"Ok!"He launches his Rock Libra.The battle begins!
Libra!Unicorno!Both beys clash!Then Dino says,"How about we settle this outside!"Jayden nodds his head.As soon as they get outside,Dino launches his special move!"Night Unicorno!Silent Strike!Unicorno strikes Libra,and tries to feint the top of it!Unicorno hits,but then Libra starts to come under control of Jayden,then Jayden launches a special move!"Libra!Special move!Beam Inferno!A beam of light comes from the top of Libra,and escapes Unicorno's special move!As soon as the beam fades,both beys are found in a sleep out.It was a draw!They both pick up their beys,and then Dino asks Jayden if they could be friends.Jayden says,"Ok!",and they walk to the upcoming tournament.
It's done.I don't mean to be mean.It's done dude