World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Full Version: The Masked Blader (Story)
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This is a story of two bladers Ginka Hagane who now has set out on a new beyblade adventure and a masked blader named Shishi (Meaning Lion) Dogou (meaning Roar) Ginka and Shishi are rivals at first but become freinds when Ryuga comes back with Ultimate Rush Meteo L-Drago. Ginka has a new bey called Uiverse Pegasus and Shishi's bey is Rock Leone 145D. I can't give much more info so you'll have to wait untill next Saturday when chapter one is out, hope you enjoy.
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Dude, post the story.
Don't say "Wait until next saturady or sunday".
Put a prologue up, or something.
And don't use anime characters, try using only characters you come up with.
And you spelled universe wrong.
I can't say anymore, because there's no story to even comment on!
Never post a stoyr without a chapter 1 or prologue.
Ok then.
~X~
geez I'm turning into a story critique >,<
Make a thread when you have a story to post. Not before.