Nov. 03, 2011 9:25 AM
This is only an introduction to my story and my first creation for this website...XD
This is only to gain a feedback from the members whether or not you want me continue my writing and also to hear any suggestion or improvement that needs to be done.
Prologue
“Why would the Dragons want to capture me?â€
“Because descendants of the Blue Dragon are exceedingly rare,†Hades explained. “The Blue Dragon was a unique dragon that has a unique power depends on the person’s personality, and the skills that their descendants possess would be of great threat to the Dragons.â€
“Go On,†I prompted. “Because Blue Dragon’s descendants will probably going to take revenge concerning to what happened to their ancestors, the Dragons see them as a threat that needs to be eliminated. For centuries, they have haunted the Blue Dragon’s descendants. They kill all the adults and all the children over the age of five. They then took the children and raise those children themselves, indoctrinating them into their beliefs. If the children question the ‘natural order’ they are disposed of.â€
I sank down, my knees are weak at the images that Hades words brought to mind. “By disposed of, you mean killed.â€
thank you for taking your time to read this and please do leave some suggestions or comment. hope you guys like it..
the first chapter of this story will be up in next week or so... XD
This is only to gain a feedback from the members whether or not you want me continue my writing and also to hear any suggestion or improvement that needs to be done.
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Prologue
“Why would the Dragons want to capture me?â€
“Because descendants of the Blue Dragon are exceedingly rare,†Hades explained. “The Blue Dragon was a unique dragon that has a unique power depends on the person’s personality, and the skills that their descendants possess would be of great threat to the Dragons.â€
“Go On,†I prompted. “Because Blue Dragon’s descendants will probably going to take revenge concerning to what happened to their ancestors, the Dragons see them as a threat that needs to be eliminated. For centuries, they have haunted the Blue Dragon’s descendants. They kill all the adults and all the children over the age of five. They then took the children and raise those children themselves, indoctrinating them into their beliefs. If the children question the ‘natural order’ they are disposed of.â€
I sank down, my knees are weak at the images that Hades words brought to mind. “By disposed of, you mean killed.â€
thank you for taking your time to read this and please do leave some suggestions or comment. hope you guys like it..
the first chapter of this story will be up in next week or so... XD