Oct. 20, 2011 6:35 AM
Hi guys, I'm litlleboy92 and I am going to write a story. It is called "The Search". This is my first beystory. I hope you like it! I am also open to all criticism!
Chapter1
Chapter 2
Chapter1
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It was a warm, cool, crisp August day while I was shuffling through the leaves of the Ritlet Park. I had nothing to do but to just walk. Some people were staring at me as like I am homeless. I never had what all kids have, a beyblade. I have wanted a beyblade for my whole life. It looked fun to play with.
As I was walking, I heard laughter, shouting, and metal clanging together. If only my mom would buy me a beyblade. Just one.
I walked back home and opened the front door to my house.
"Hey mom," I said.
She asked," Why do you have a sad look on your face?"
"I just wanted to get a beyblade," I said.
She added,"Well okay then let's go!"
I exclaimed,"Really?"
We opened the garage while my mom turned on the car. We drove and drove to Target. We finally arrived. My mom and I walked through the sliding door. Once we passed the sliding doors I told my mom to run. She followed me around turns. Finally we reached the beyblade section.
"I only have 30 dollars.",she said. I looked at all the beyblades. Dark gasher, Flame libra, Storm pegasus, Burn Fireblaze, and Rock orso. I didn't know what to get.
I was at the Self checkout aisle while holding an L-Drago stadium, Rock orso, and Flame Libra.
When we finished the check out I had to wait until we reach home to open it.
I thought,"Oh I can't wait to open it."
When I got home, I rushed in the house forgetting to take off my shoes. I opened the beyblades as fast as I can. I remembered this Youtube video on how to straighten your ripcord. I went in the restroom to do it. When I was finished, I put my ripcord in the launcher, attached the bey, and launched Flame libra first. Then I launched Rock orso into the stadium.
I thought to myself while the beys were clashing,"I'll keep training them until I mastered their special moves and the bey itself. I'll try Flame libra first." I trained everyday until I knew I mastered it and that day was the first day of school.
"Perfect timing", I said. I then put my beyblades away except for Flame libra and his launcher, and got ready for school.
I then went to school,ate breakfast and talked to my friends until the bell rings for class. I was a normal 5th grader walking to class.
When school was over, I launched straight out of the classroom. I wasn't paying attention to where I was going so I bumped into a 6th grader.
"Watch where you are going, kid. Well I'm not letting you off the hook. Let's battle." he said.
"Okay," I said nervously.
As I was walking, I heard laughter, shouting, and metal clanging together. If only my mom would buy me a beyblade. Just one.
I walked back home and opened the front door to my house.
"Hey mom," I said.
She asked," Why do you have a sad look on your face?"
"I just wanted to get a beyblade," I said.
She added,"Well okay then let's go!"
I exclaimed,"Really?"
We opened the garage while my mom turned on the car. We drove and drove to Target. We finally arrived. My mom and I walked through the sliding door. Once we passed the sliding doors I told my mom to run. She followed me around turns. Finally we reached the beyblade section.
"I only have 30 dollars.",she said. I looked at all the beyblades. Dark gasher, Flame libra, Storm pegasus, Burn Fireblaze, and Rock orso. I didn't know what to get.
I was at the Self checkout aisle while holding an L-Drago stadium, Rock orso, and Flame Libra.
When we finished the check out I had to wait until we reach home to open it.
I thought,"Oh I can't wait to open it."
When I got home, I rushed in the house forgetting to take off my shoes. I opened the beyblades as fast as I can. I remembered this Youtube video on how to straighten your ripcord. I went in the restroom to do it. When I was finished, I put my ripcord in the launcher, attached the bey, and launched Flame libra first. Then I launched Rock orso into the stadium.
I thought to myself while the beys were clashing,"I'll keep training them until I mastered their special moves and the bey itself. I'll try Flame libra first." I trained everyday until I knew I mastered it and that day was the first day of school.
"Perfect timing", I said. I then put my beyblades away except for Flame libra and his launcher, and got ready for school.
I then went to school,ate breakfast and talked to my friends until the bell rings for class. I was a normal 5th grader walking to class.
When school was over, I launched straight out of the classroom. I wasn't paying attention to where I was going so I bumped into a 6th grader.
"Watch where you are going, kid. Well I'm not letting you off the hook. Let's battle." he said.
"Okay," I said nervously.
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I pulled out my launcher trembling with fear. I attached my bey as he attached his. I noticed how his was not a full bey. It was customized. Fighting the tears was hard for me as I had lost my dad and the bully looked like my dad.
"3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!", we both shouted. The beys were on a stadium that a kid had volunteered for us to use. A crowd started nearby. I noticed how his was circling around mine. My stamina type could outlast him if his is not an attack.
"Come on Striker, Go!", he yelled. Striker launched straight for me.
"Dodge it Libra", I said. Libra dodged the hit, and followed Striker. Libra was gaining on him. At last Libra hit Striker from the back.
I thought to myself,"This is my chance to do a special move like the one in the cartoon. Yu is my inspiration!"
"Special Move, Last Judgement Inferno!!!!",I shouted. A green yellow-ish color shaped like a tunnel came shooting up in the sky pulling his beyblade in. The power was so strong that before the bully's beyblade got close to Libra, it was flying out of the stadium. When the battle was over, the bully grabbed his bey as fast as he could and ran. The crowd cheered for me. I checked my watch and it was 2:57.
"Good", I said. I was supposed to be home by 3:00. I walked to the door, and unlocked it. I walked in and said Hi to my Mom while she was doing the dishes. I went upstairs and started to do my homework. I finished at 3:10. After I finished my homework I went searching for my beyblades.
"AHHH", I heard my mom yell. I ran downstairs as fast as I can.
"Sam I just lost my ring that your dad gave me! That was a precious ring. It was the key to a special place, Sam",she told me. "I was going to give it to you tomorrow. But now I have lost it.", she said.
"I can't breathe Sam", she said a few minutes later.
"Mom, NO!", I yelled.
"3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!", we both shouted. The beys were on a stadium that a kid had volunteered for us to use. A crowd started nearby. I noticed how his was circling around mine. My stamina type could outlast him if his is not an attack.
"Come on Striker, Go!", he yelled. Striker launched straight for me.
"Dodge it Libra", I said. Libra dodged the hit, and followed Striker. Libra was gaining on him. At last Libra hit Striker from the back.
I thought to myself,"This is my chance to do a special move like the one in the cartoon. Yu is my inspiration!"
"Special Move, Last Judgement Inferno!!!!",I shouted. A green yellow-ish color shaped like a tunnel came shooting up in the sky pulling his beyblade in. The power was so strong that before the bully's beyblade got close to Libra, it was flying out of the stadium. When the battle was over, the bully grabbed his bey as fast as he could and ran. The crowd cheered for me. I checked my watch and it was 2:57.
"Good", I said. I was supposed to be home by 3:00. I walked to the door, and unlocked it. I walked in and said Hi to my Mom while she was doing the dishes. I went upstairs and started to do my homework. I finished at 3:10. After I finished my homework I went searching for my beyblades.
"AHHH", I heard my mom yell. I ran downstairs as fast as I can.
"Sam I just lost my ring that your dad gave me! That was a precious ring. It was the key to a special place, Sam",she told me. "I was going to give it to you tomorrow. But now I have lost it.", she said.
"I can't breathe Sam", she said a few minutes later.
"Mom, NO!", I yelled.