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A gimmick of a gimmick..? Dranzer F went to SF though, not WB. I don't think it needs to be mentioned though?
No i dont think it needs to be .I was going to add it but i specifically left it out. Like you said, It's not the same bottoms and I don't even know if the gimmick works the exact same way.
I decided to add reall mostly everything SSJ dide add, found some formatting mistakes, but.

Will post these as soon as possible, however.
Wait, I don't understand that post?

Where did you add what I wrote then found mistakes?
He said he added them, then he said he would add them.

In that case assume he'll post it later. Somewhere.
[quote='Dan' pid='794009' dateline='1316746687']

[quote]

Face: Ares
The Face on this Beyblade depicts Ares, the Greek God of War.

Metal Wheel: VariAres
• Weight: 43.6 grams


VariAres is the second Metal Fight Beyblade Metal Wheel available with the gimmick of spinning in both directions: Left and Right. VariAres is a relatively thick and heavy wheel, with three outward protrusions, it produces massive recoil. The center indent is the largest and most exposed, There are six indents on VariAres, they are exposed enough to provide additional Spike Attack. Between each of these 'wings' are large gaps which work in tandem <- ? with the aforementioned indents to create powerful Smash Attack, but also cause significant recoil. Between each of the three metal protrusions is a yellow PC Frame, shaped as triangles that protrude outwards as far as the Metal Frame.
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About the Gravity Perseus, normally, it is not mentioned another bey in one article.

If you could, also please take a look at mine, it'd really help. I'm taking a lot of SSJ's edits in too, as <3 told me we have our own viewpoints and Kai-V was fine with that. Thanks!
So that's both your's and Dan's combined?

There's a couple of things I specifically edited out that are in there though. I'll show you:

(Sep. 25, 2011  1:55 AM)BeybladeStation Wrote: [ -> ]Metal Wheel: VariAres
• Weight: 43.6 grams


VariAres is the second Metal Fight Beyblade Metal Wheel available with the gimmick of spinning in both directions: Left and Right. VariAres is a relatively thick and heavy wheel, with three outward protrusions, [...]
I purposely mixed these two sentences, it was too much of a "it can spin in 2 directions. It is thick and heavy". That's too choppy. Plus with the end of the sentence (next quote), it is a really weird sentence, and I don't think it's even a grammatically proper sentence.

Quote:[...] it produces massive recoil.
purposely put that somewhere else.

Quote: The center indent is the largest and most exposed, There are six indents on VariAres, they are exposed enough to provide additional Spike Attack.
I think it's good to put that the middle one is the largest.

Quote: Between each of these 'wings' are large gaps which work in tandem <- ? with the aforementioned indents to create powerful Smash Attack, but also cause significant recoil.
in tandem with basically means they work together.

Quote:Between each of the three metal protrusions is a yellow PC Frame, shaped as triangles that protrude outwards as far as the Metal Frame.
Hmm, outwards protrusions? I like wings better. Outwards protrusions could mean a lot more things than wings.


I kinda like my edit better... But not in an arrogant way.

Not my choice though.
Okay, well hopefully Dan can look at it, thanks.
Oh hey, how about "outward, winged shaped protrusions" !
I do not think "wing" makes sense. Metal protrusions, yes, wing?

Sure, if it was actually a wing.. I would still call it "outward, indented metal protrusions" !
IDK I actually like where it is right now.
Dual spin is very specific, and not common so I think bringing up Gravity is fine. It's not like I call out every single right spinning bey because Vari can right-spin or vice-versa.
I dont see BD145 in attack customization...
(Sep. 23, 2011  3:58 AM)Dan Wrote: [ -> ]D:D is of a round shape with a translucent black colour, and is the approximate size of 145WD

Perhaps approximate height of 145WD would be more accurate?
The "Red and Blue" Corocoro Limited is called Variares Mars Red Ver. and Variares Phantom Blue Ver. I believe.
(Sep. 25, 2011  3:46 PM)MetalZoroark21 Wrote: [ -> ]The "Red and Blue" Corocoro Limited is called Variares Mars Red Ver. and Variares Phantom Blue Ver. I believe.

Yes that is right Dan add it to the draft you're all set almost
Thanks MetalZoroark, but it is already in there! :V
TehFez, you're right, that sounds better!


(Sep. 25, 2011  12:35 PM)® Wrote: [ -> ]I dont see BD145 in attack customization...
Oh-ho! You're a perceptive one, are you?! GrinJSHOCK:
Yeah, it isn't haha.
Quote:
1 Face: Ares
2 Metal Wheel: VariAres
•2.1 Use in Attack Customization
3 4D Bottom: D:D
•3.1 Use in Balance Customization
4 Gallery
5 Overall


Face: Ares
The Face on this Beyblade depicts Ares, the Greek God of War.

Metal Wheel: VariAres
• Weight: 43.6 grams


VariAres is unarguably the most aggressively designed Wheel ever released in MFB, and is the second Metal Wheel capable of spinning in both Left and Right Spin (the first being Gravity Perseus). It has a relatively thick, wide three-winged design. Each wing ends in an abrupt, sharp point that provides intense Smash Attack in both spin directions. In addition to this, along each wing there are six indents of varying size that provide Spike Attack which works in tandem with the sharp Smash Attack points on the ends of each wing. However, while VariAres' attack power may be high, because VariAres is so aggressively designed, it does suffer from huge amounts of recoil. This can make VariAres a risky Wheel to use in some respects, but as the game has evolved, lighter, more compact Attack Wheels such as Lightning have become harder and harder to use effectively without the assistance of something like BD145. VariAres can backfire due to its recoil, but it does not need the width and weight of BD145 to be effective.

Between each wing is a large gap. Fitted in between these gaps is a yellow PC Frame, that protrudes outwards in a triangular shape as far as the Metal Frame. Unlike other 4D Beyblades, VariAres' PC Frame is built in conjunction with the Metal Frame. On the bottom side of the Metal Wheel where the mechanism that controls the plastic wings release are located, there is cover of a hard plastic sheet.

When VariAres is spinning at high spin speeds, the PC Frame retracts towards the centre of VariAres, exposing more Metal, and therefore producing more Smash Attack. This is considered "Attack Mode". As VariAres' spin velocity lowers, the PC Frame extends out to it's full length, allowing for more Plastic contact in an attempt to reduce recoil. This is considered "Defense Mode".

Use in Attack customization:
Due to its relatively heavy weight, three gaps, and prominent indentations, VariAres produces incredibly potent Smash Attack. A Metal Face - Heavy and Rubber Flat variant in unison with VariAres' high rotational force reduces VariAres' recoil, and provides proficient Smash Attack in the top-tier attack customizations: MF/-H VariAres CH120R2F/LRF and MF/-H VariAres R145R2F/LRF.

Bottom: Delta Drive (D:D)
•Weight: 5.4 grams


D:D is of a round shape with a translucent black colour, and with a height comparable to 145WD. Like all 4D Bottoms, D:D's gimmick is mode change-related. Like Dranzer F's Flame Change Base from the Plastic generation, D:D has the gimmick of triple mode change. D:D features a Sharp Bottom, a Wide Ball Bottom, and a Flat Bottom all on one axis, which can be changed manually between battles. To change modes, the tip can be pulled out slightly, rotated on its axis, and then pushed back in on the new tip. D:D is evidently an incredibly versatile bottom, but this versatility is made useless by the fact that the Bottoms encased are all outclassed in one way or another; S is outclassed by WD, WB is outclassed by CS, and F is outclassed by RF.

Use in Balance Customization
Because each tip contained within D:D is outclassed, it has only found use in sub-par Balance combinations such as MF-H Basalt Kerbecs D:D.

Other Versions

VariAres D:D Mars Red Ver. – CoroCoro Magazine (Red)
VariAres D:D Phantom Blue Ver. - CoroCoro Magazine (Blue)


Overall
VariAres quickly found it's home in Smash Attack customs and is regarded by some to be superior to Lightning, which has held it's own position as the best Smash Attack Wheel since release. The mechanism within D:D is an improvement over the classic Flame Change Base, but like Flame Change Base, it is almost as useless competitively. VariAres alone makes this worth a purchase, though. Every Blader should own at least one of this Beyblade.

Made some huge edits content and formatting wise, but this was already really well done as a whole. Good job everyone! This should be ready to go as long as no one else finds any mistakes or any questionable statements. I may have made some mistakes, so please do read over it.
I am not sure it is correct to refer to the yellow wings as the PC Frame. "Frame" is only used by TAKARA-TOMY when it is a separate part.

Furthermore, it could be mentioned somewhere that the huge marketing point of this Beyblade is that it has twelve possible mode changes.


And if you really want to go with listing all the WBBA recolours for everything, it is available in a silver recolour with purple wings and transparent red D:D in some Japanese tournaments. Oddly, it cannot be seen on TAKARA-TOMY's site though.
(Sep. 28, 2011  6:25 AM)Kai-V Wrote: [ -> ]I am not sure it is correct to refer to the yellow wings as the PC Frame. "Frame" is only used by TAKARA-TOMY when it is a separate part.
hmm, this is what I've gone by the whole time :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-114-V...#pid711706


Quote:Furthermore, it could be mentioned somewhere that the huge marketing point of this Beyblade is that it has twelve possible mode changes.
I think that could be simply added in the overall section? I don't think it'd fit anywhere else.

(Sep. 28, 2011  3:31 PM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: [ -> ]
(Sep. 28, 2011  6:25 AM)Kai-V Wrote: [ -> ]I am not sure it is correct to refer to the yellow wings as the PC Frame. "Frame" is only used by TAKARA-TOMY when it is a separate part.
hmm, this is what I've gone by the whole time :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-114-V...#pid711706

Hm, so I forgot about that.
(Sep. 28, 2011  6:25 AM)Kai-V Wrote: [ -> ]Furthermore, it could be mentioned somewhere that the huge marketing point of this Beyblade is that it has twelve possible mode changes.


And if you really want to go with listing all the WBBA recolours for everything, it is available in a silver recolour with purple wings and transparent red D:D in some Japanese tournaments. Oddly, it cannot be seen on TAKARA-TOMY's site though.

Good idea. It would also be worth mentioning that it came with the L3R.

Did that recolour have a specific name?
WBBA event recolours never really have any special names.
Okay, I've added it. My first time with the whole formatting so take a look over it to see if I've made any mistakes!

Edit: My god Smash attack is mentioned so much, should I bother providing link to smash attack article for every single mention of it?
(Sep. 28, 2011  9:44 PM)Dan Wrote: [ -> ]Okay, I've added it. My first time with the whole formatting so take a look over it to see if I've made any mistakes!

Edit: My god Smash attack is mentioned so much, should I bother providing link to smash attack article for every single mention of it?

You have it on beywiki Great! Now if only Kei would look at mine, but you deserved it.
LOL Dan thanks for adding in the Dranzer part I suggested Smile
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