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Return of Dragoon!

Boom! Dragoon makes a super effective attack at Dranzer! Kai is not done yet! "Go Dranzer Grand Blast of The Griffon!,'' Yells Kai. Dranzer dissapears, and comes back to visability, and gives a super effective attack at Dragoon! Is this the end of Tysons 3 year Championship streak? '' Go Dragoon Dragon Fly X Strike!!!'', Shouts Tyson. Dranzer gets hit so hard that it comes apart! ''Tyson is the World Champion once again!'' Says Blader DJ.

Next time on Beyblade!
Tyson has won the championships again, but now we are going to turn our attention to the Metal Fight World! Where another championship is going on! So in the final battle who will win Gingka or Kyoya? Find out in Beyblade Ultimo Battles episode 2! The Final Battle of the Rivals!

Okay, but where is the description? Too much dialogue. And it's too short. Other than that, there are no glaring issues. Not too bad.
Beyblade Ultimo Battlers!
Ep.2 The Final Battle of the Rivals

Coming this Saturday!
Hrm, a little on the short side. Actually a lot. Maybe add some length by using some description?