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brazman

Sep. 04, 2011  5:12 AM
bruh this was cringe

Manicben

Sep. 04, 2011  12:53 PM
Lol, realistic but poor grammar and spelling...
Plus we cant tell who is speaking...

But seems like a story that echoes what happens in school life. I like it

brazman

Sep. 04, 2011  1:39 PM
read the spoilers cos i dont even know why i made this O.o someone close it

ControL_s SouL_

Sep. 04, 2011  2:46 PM
It's good but you need to improve your grammar and creativity. If you send me this chapter and the next then I will improve the grammar for you.

brazman

Sep. 04, 2011  9:19 PM
as i said it was 5 am and no sleep.....Tired

talhatariqm

Sep. 05, 2011  5:31 AM
If u need help pm me I have a bunch of great Ideas

Temporal

Sep. 05, 2011  2:28 PM
...Okay, let me say this. If you do PM someone for ideas, PM a member you know can write, not some guy who CLAIMS to have ideas. Everyone THINKS their ideas are great, and yet we have a bunch of crappy stories with terrible pretenses and are based on a bad idea in general.

Sparta

Sep. 05, 2011  2:29 PM
(Sep. 05, 2011  2:28 PM)Temporal Wrote: [ -> ]...Okay, let me say this. If you do PM someone for ideas, PM a member you know can write, not some guy who CLAIMS to have ideas. Everyone THINKS their ideas are great, and yet we have a bunch of crappy stories with terrible pretenses and are based on a bad idea in general.

^^^^^THIS is the guy you should PM Wink

Couldn't agree more with your post, Temporal.

Manicben

Sep. 06, 2011  10:33 PM
^^ Sorry to say, but I totally agree with those two.
They are like the masters of story writing (and criticism) on the WBO.
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