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(Oct. 16, 2011  1:36 AM)BeybladeStation Wrote: [ -> ]Why don't you damned point put the errors if you're so smart at it?

Are you using this editor for your posts too?


That would explain a lot..
Is your comeback not answering the question?

It so is evidently..

If there are edits, show me them before you say there are.
(Oct. 15, 2011  11:35 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: [ -> ]^How come it did not save?

OKAY! THIS IS THE FINAL DRAFT. I spent all day looking over this, editing and more of both mine, Shabala's. and Dan's edits. And I have to come:

Quote:Face: L-Drago

The Face on this Beyblade depicts a Dragon, Draco, one of the 88 constellations in space. This is the most current L-Drago Face, being the third of its type.

4D Metal Wheel: L-Drago Destroy

-Weight: 44.29 Grams

Unlike any other Metal Wheel, L-Drago Destroy is structured of both a Metal Frame and Core, these two combine to make one Metal Wheel. The Metal Frame is placed on the top and is normal in place of where the L-Drago Clear Wheel would normally be. Then similarly, the Core is placed on the bottom and takes the place of where the Metal Wheel would normally be. L Drago Destroy is shaped similarly to the previous Beyblades in the L Drago series; it is shaped of three Dragon heads. Though, it is is much wider, has large gaps between each head, and is significantly heavier than each of the former L Drago Beyblades.

L-Drago Destroy has two modes, which can be switched between exactly like the former Lightning L-Drago and Meteo L Drago: by disassembling the Face and Metal Wheel and rotating the Metal Frame. There are two modes, "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Attack Mode is in place when the plastic on the Core is visible amidst each dragon's head on the Metal Frame, and Absorb Mode is intact when the rubber on the Core is visible admist each dragon's head on the Metal Frame.

Like the L-Drago II Clear Wheel, L Drago Destroy is capable of equalizing rotations between itself and the opposing Beyblade; which must be in the opposite spin-direction. But to a lesser extent than that of Meteo LDrago, where the equalizing is much at large. Due to its width, large gaps, equalizing, and structure, L-Drago Destroy is considered as an effective Smash Attacker.

Use in Attack Customization
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With great Smash Attack and width, L-Drago Destroy is producing impressive results in the combination MF L-Drago Destroy BD145RF and MF L-Drago Destroy D125RF. It also works well with great speed and smash, MF L-Drago Destroy CH120XF.

L-Drago Destroy's Metal Frame

-Weight: 38.45 Grams

This Frame is characterized by its mid-weight, but high Smash Attack. The Metal Frame of L-Drago Destroy makes up most of the Metal Wheel's weight. It is a darker shade of gray than other metal parts in Beyblade, and its design is of three long Dragonheads, each of which has an identical flame design on them.

As mentioned before, there are two modes, "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Of the two available modes, though, it is widely considered and accepted that the ‘Attack Mode’ is superior to the lesser 'Absorb Mode'. Due to a small amount of recoil, it is easy for L-Drago Destroy to keep down with a Metal Flat (MF) and Rubber Flat (RF). If it is customized efficiently, it can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations.

Core

-Weight: 5.84 Grams

The Core is a part essential for mode change for this Beyblade. Made of polycarbonate material, it is not very light. The Cores protrusions lay beneath the dragon's heads when in "Absorb Mode". It is only compatible with the L-Drago Destroy Metal Frame. Because of the Core, there is an add on to L-Drago Destroy’s Attack and Spin Equalization.

As like the Metal Frame, rotating it 180 Degrees can change modes from "Attack Mode", to "Absorb Mode". Attack Mode was designed for attacking, seeing that the core is it not light. This mode is in use when plastic is protruding. On the other hand. Absorb Mode is for spin equalizing. Absorb Mode is intact when rubber is protruding.

The Core's protrusions lay beneath the dragon's heads when in Absorb Mode. This layering allows the rubber on the side of the Core to reach out, and therefore start a chain of spin-stealing or equalizing. But because the Metal Frame is on top, there will be much less prominent spin-stealing because the Metal Frame is much more exposed than the Core, unlike the previous Meteo L-Drago's reverse engineering.

Bottom: Final Survive

-Weight: 5.73 Grams

Final Survive, or FConfused, is a completely automatic bottom. Being the second 4D Bottom released, FConfused also has a dynamic change; Attack to Stamina. Determining high-speed velocity to low speed velocity, it can change modes from Hole Flat (HF), to a more Stamina based operation, Sharp (S). When at a low spin rate, F will change from HF to S, to preserve Stamina. The slots on the side of FConfused are able to retract to activate mode change. However, the change between causes a disruption in the Beyblade’s balance. Therefore, the change between HF and S is more negligible than it is useful.

In some cases, many believe to see that FConfused is the complete opposite of Final Drive, or FGrin. It works similar to Big Bang Pegasis’ FGrin bottom, where there are two tabs near the top that extend and retract depending on the spin speed of the Beyblade. In L-Drago Destroy's mechanism, there is a big difference. The Sharp (S) tip is pushed out, rather in FGrin where the Semi-Flat (SF) is pushed in. Because of FConfused's odd engineering, there is balance loss and could lead ultimately to some thinking that FConfused is not anything edgy. no need for 'a' balance loss

Even though it would seem as if the sharp would help preserve Stamina, there is too much of a balance loss for any benefit.

Other Versions

L-Drago Destroy DF105LRF Gold Armored Ver. – WBBA Exclusive (Gold)

Overall

-Weight: 50 Grams

Being the fourth installment in the L-Drago series, with no doubt L-Drago Destroy FConfused is very useful when Attacking as to its predecessors. The Metal Wheel and Frame’s weight and Smash Attack allow it to move opposing Beyblades around with ease. The Core able to both absorb shock and aid attack. While FConfused is seemed useless, the other parts make up for this Beyblade. Every blader should at least own one of this Beyblade.

Fixed some of it. You need to re read lol
(Oct. 16, 2011  1:45 AM)BeybladeStation Wrote: [ -> ]Is your comeback not answering the question?

It so is evidently..

If there are edits, show me them before you say there are.
My 'comeback' is a genuine question, plus you cannot answer a question with another question so no, it isn't answering a question. So answer my question.
To be honest BBS, some of these sentences doesn't make sense either. I beleive Dan only wanted you to re read as in reading out loud to yourself then edit.
Well yeah, anything but the editing program you're using which clearly doesn't work.
R, you added two edits. What are you talking about? (If that was to me)

Dan, if you see an error why don't you write it?
I can't speak for Dan, but your non-open, egotistical, "always right" attitude is making me not want to help edit...
If you really think you're going to deny something when you don't have the answer it is no matter.

I am clearly asking for something to help me, how in hell would that contribute to any "Always right" attitude.

EDIT: Just damned tell me the edits so we can stop this.
"As mentioned before, there are two modes: "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Of the two available modes, though, it is widely considered and accepted that the 'Attack Mode' is superior to the lesser 'Absorb Mode'. Due to a small amount of recoil, it is easy for L-Drago Destroy to keep down with a Metal Flat (MF) and Rubber Flat (RF). If it is customized efficiently, it can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations. "

What should I change "As mentioned before" too?
Hey BBS, i wanted to say that do you mean Metal Face (MF) instead of metal flat ? Coz im not sure whether a metal flat bottom reduces recoil...
Metal Flat doesn't reduce recoil. Metal Face does.
I think he means more in weight, though it could not be..
Shukla is right:
Quote:Due to a small amount of recoil, it is easy for L-Drago Destroy to keep down with a Metal Flat (MF) and Rubber Flat (RF). If it is customized efficiently, it can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations.
That 'and' proves that you meant/should have written Metal Face. You cannot have 2 bottoms on at the same time and the context would imply such.
So replace that RF with Metal Face? Or the Metal Flat with Metal Face?
Replace the words "metal flat" with "metal face".
- Make it like this -
Although L-Drago Destroy has some recoil, it can be reduced with the use of a Metal Face (MF) and a rubber bottom such as Rubber Flat (RF). If used with the correct parts, it can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations.
Hope this re-wording is correct because in my opinion, it sounds better than -
Due to a small amount of recoil, it is easy for L-Drago Destroy to keep down with a Metal Face (MF) and Rubber Flat (RF). If it is customized efficiently, it can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations.
Any further suggestions accepted.
Did both!

Looks great Smile
(Aug. 13, 2011  6:19 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: [ -> ]Face: L-Drago

The Face on this Beyblade depicts a Dragon, Draco, one of the 88 constellations in space. This is the most current L-Drago Face, being the third of its type.

4D Metal Wheel: L-Drago Destroy

-Weight: 44.29 Grams

L-Drago Destroy is structured of both a Metal Frame and Core, and these two parts combine to make one Metal Wheel. The Metal Frame is placed on the top and is located where the L-Drago Clear Wheel would normally be. Similarly, the Core is placed on the bottom and takes the place of where the Metal Wheel would be. L Drago Destroy is shaped similarly to the previous Beyblades in the L Drago series, in regards to having three Dragon heads. However, it is is much wider, has larger gaps between each head, and is significantly heavier than each of the former L Drago Beyblades.

L-Drago Destroy has two modes which can be switched between exactly like the former Lightning L-Drago and Meteo L Drago. By disassembling the Face and Metal Wheel, then rotating the Metal Frame, there are two modes, referred to as "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Attack Mode is when plastic on the Core is visible amidst each dragon head on the Metal Frame, while Absorb Mode is when rubber on the Core is visible admist each dragon head on the Metal Frame. It is widely considered and accepted that "Attack Mode" is superior to the lesser "Absorb Mode".

Like the L-Drago II Clear Wheel, L Drago Destroy is capable of equalizing rotations between itself and the opposing Beyblade, but to a lesser extent than that of Meteo LDrago.

Use in Attack Customization
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Due to its width, large gaps, equalizing, and structure, L-Drago Destroy is considered an excellent Smash Attacker. L-Drago Destroy produces impressive results in the combos MF L-Drago Destroy BD145RF, MF L-Drago Destroy D125RF and MF L-Drago Destroy CH120XF. L Drago Destroy works well with many parts, and each can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations.

Metal Frame

-Weight: 38.45 Grams

The Metal Frame of L-Drago Destroy makes up most of the Metal Wheel's weight. It is a darker shade of gray than other metal parts in Beyblade, and its design is of three long Dragonheads, each of which has an identical flame design on them.

Core

-Weight: 5.84 Grams

This Core is made of PC plastic, as well as PVC rubber, and is therefore very light. The Core's protrusions lay beneath the dragon heads at all times, and the rubber protrusions are what provide most of the Spin Stealing and Equalizing for the Metal Wheel.

Bottom: Final Survive

-Weight: 5.73 Grams

Final Survive, or F:S, is a completely automatic bottom, which goes from Attack to Stamina. It switches modes when the spin speed slows, and switches from Hole Flat to Sharp. The tabs on the side of F:S are what enable the Mode Change. The change between causes a disruption in the Beyblade’s balance, especially since the bottom being switched to is notorious for having bad balance.

This loss in balance, as well as the inability for this slightly wider HF to sustain a Sliding Shoot pattern, makes F:S a competitively useless part.

Other Versions

L-Drago Destroy DF105LRF Gold Armored Ver. – WBBA Exclusive (Gold)

Gallery

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Overall

-Weight: 50 Grams

The L Drago series is known for having powerful Attack, and L Drago Destroy lives up to this aspect, being commonly regarded as superior to Lightning L Drago. L Drago Destroy does not Spin Steal as well as Meteo L Drago, so the latter should be used for a Spin Stealing combo. F:S has no uses, but the 4D Metal Wheel makes up for this completely. Every Blader should own at least one of this Beyblade
Crossing my fingers
Thanks for the edits.

Thank you for the thank you Smile
lol made the whole damn thing
Nah, I actually chopped a couple repetitive things out of the first draft in the op and added a little more flow to a couple sentences.
Looks nice, thanks guys.
Send Kei a ring-a-ling. I PM him so much he probably looks at the link and says he'll edit it after he does the 20 000 other links I've sent him.
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