World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

DONE! Added the drafts

dude, put yours in a spoiler, remove the other carp in yours, and put all of them in quotes.

It's a mess the way it is.

I didn't put mine in spoilers because as the NEW RULES States, keep the original drafts in the OP, inferring that not all need spoilers.

EDIT: ADDED SPOILERS

I appreciate the thanks a lot, but for future endeavors it isn't needed: this is community run and many of us should play a part without needed praises, you know, just editing because you want to help! :V

What are you talking about?

"THE BLEND - THX DAN YOUR THE MAN"
in OP.

You don't like that?

I thought you would like it

(Oct. 15, 2011  5:24 PM)Dan Wrote: [ -> ]I appreciate the thanks a lot, but for future endeavors it isn't needed: this is community run and many of us should play a part without needed praises, you know, just editing because you want to help! :V

I thought you were reffering to something else.

Shabalabadoo, may I use your images?

.. I made it clear that was what I was talking about after you asked me. (See post #81, in response to post #80 which was a question directed at post #79.)

Of course you can use his photos.. This is a community bro: If he posts up photos intended for Beywiki, anyone can post it.. Usually after consent of Kei though..

I think it is nonsense to just make a draft in three pieces, so I will re format the fused draft to make it officially done.

Yo, why don't we just put the title as "L Drago Destroy F:S".

^How come it did not save?

OKAY! THIS IS THE FINAL DRAFT. I spent all day looking over this, editing and more of both mine, Shabala's. and Dan's edits. And I have to come:

Quote:Face: L-Drago

The Face on this Beyblade depicts a Dragon, Draco, one of the 88 constellations in space. This is the most current L-Drago Face, being the third of its type.

4D Metal Wheel: L-Drago Destroy

-Weight: 44.29 Grams

Unlike any other Metal Wheel, L-Drago Destroy is structured of both a Metal Frame and Core, these two combine to make one Metal Wheel. The Metal Frame is placed on the top and is normal in place of where the L-Drago Clear Wheel would normally be. Then similarly, the Core is placed on the bottom and takes the place of where the Metal Wheel would normally be. L Drago Destroy is shaped similarly to the previous Beyblades in the L Drago series; it is shaped of three Dragon heads. Though, it is is much wider, has large gaps between each head, and is significantly heavier than each of the former L Drago Beyblades.

L-Drago Destroy has two modes, which can be switched between exactly like the former Lightning L-Drago and Meteo L Drago: by disassembling the Face and Metal Wheel and rotating the Metal Frame. There are two modes, "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Attack Mode is in place when the plastic on the Core is visible amidst each dragon's head on the Metal Frame, and Absorb Mode is intact when the rubber on the Core is visible admist each dragon's head on the Metal Frame.

Like the L-Drago II Clear Wheel, L Drago Destroy is capable of equalizing rotations between itself and the opposing Beyblade; which must be in the opposite spin-direction. But to a lesser extent than that of Meteo LDrago, where the equalizing is much at large. Due to its width, large gaps, equalizing, and structure, L-Drago Destroy is considered as an effective Smash Attacker.

Use in Attack Customization
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With great Smash Attack and width, L-Drago Destroy is producing impressive results in the combination MF L-Drago Destroy BD145RF and MF L-Drago Destroy D125RF. It also works well with great speed and smash, MF L-Drago Destroy CH120XF.

L-Drago Destroy's Metal Frame

-Weight: 38.45 Grams

This Frame is characterized by its mid-weight, but high Smash Attack. The Metal Frame of L-Drago Destroy makes up most of the Metal Wheel's weight. It is a darker shade of gray than other metal parts in Beyblade, and its design is of three long Dragonheads, each of which has an identical flame design on them.

As mentioned before, there are two modes, "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Of the two available modes, though, it is widely considered and accepted that the ‘Attack Mode’ is superior to the lesser 'Absorb Mode'. Due to a small amount of recoil, it is easy for L-Drago Destroy to keep down with a Metal Flat (MF) and Rubber Flat (RF). If it is customized efficiently, it can be quite aggressive and effective against top-tier Defense customizations.

Core

-Weight: 5.84 Grams

The Core is a part essential for mode change for this Beyblade. Made of polycarbonate material, it is not very light. The Cores protrusions lay beneath the dragon's heads when in "Absorb Mode". It is only compatible with the L-Drago Destroy Metal Frame. Because of the Core, there is an add on to L-Drago Destroy’s Attack and Spin Equalization.

As like the Metal Frame, rotating it 180 Degrees can change modes from "Attack Mode", to "Absorb Mode". Attack Mode was designed for attacking, seeing that the core is it not light. This mode is in use when plastic is protruding. On the other hand. Absorb Mode is for sin equalizing. Absorb Mode is intact when rubber is protruding.

The Cores's protrusions lay beneath the dragon's heads when in Absorb Mode. This layering allows the rubber on the side of the Core to reach out, and therefore start a chain of spin-stealing or equalizing. But because the Metal Frame is on top, there will be much less prominent spin-stealing because the Metal Frame is much more exposed than the Core, unlike the previous Meteo L-Drago's reverse engineering.

Bottom: Final Survive

-Weight: 5.73 Grams

Final Survive, or F, is a completely automatic bottom. Being the second 4D Bottom released, F also has a dynamic change; Attack to Stamina. Determining high-speed velocity to low speed velocity, it can change modes from Hole Flat (HF), to a more Stamina based operation, Sharp (S). When at a low spin rate, F will change from HF to S, to preserve Stamina. The slots on the side of F are able to retract to activate mode change. However, the change between causes a disruption in the Beyblade’s balance. Therefore, the change between HF and S is more negligible than it is useful.

In some cases, many believe to see that F is the complete opposite of Final Drive, or F. It works similar to Big Bang Pegasis’ F bottom, where there are two tabs near the top that extend and retract depending on the spin speed of the Beyblade. In L-Drago Destroy's mechanism, there is a big difference. The Sharp (S) tip is pushed out, rather in F where the Semi-Flat (SF) is pushed in. Because of F's odd engineering, there is a balance loss and could led ultimately to some thinking that F is not anything edgy.

Even though it would seem as if the sharp would help preserve Stamina, there is too much of a balance loss for any benefit.

Other Versions

L-Drago Destroy DF105LRF Gold Armored Ver. – WBBA Exclusive (Gold)

Overall

-Weight: 50 Grams

Being the fourth installment in the L-Drago series, with no doubt L-Drago Destroy F is very useful when Attacking as to its predecessors. The Metal Wheel and Frame’s weight and Smash Attack allow it to move opposing Beyblades around with ease. The Core able to both absorb shock and aid attack. While F is deemed useless, the other parts make up for this Beyblade. Every blader should at least own one of this Beyblade.[/b]

Holy grammar batman.

I will take the draft to a grammar editor and spell editor.

EDIT: GRAMMAR Editor edits done.

Why do you constantly say "LDrago Destroy is good for Attacking" or "useful for Attacking"..?

You are not attacking your opponent, nor does LDrago Destroy make doing that any easier.

Can you please pin-point these so I can edit them. Also, I've nearly memorized the BeyWiki coding and will develop a BeyWiki Code for Kei!

I would not say this is done at all, it seems whenever you edit the edits it needs to be edited again: Taking 1 step forward, 2 steps back.

I'll edit the whole thing.

What are you talking about?

There is nothing that needs to be edited at all, I've re arranged everything and looked over other drafts, other than some minor work it is so.

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(Oct. 16, 2011  12:36 AM)Dan Wrote: [ -> ]I would not say this is done at all, it seems whenever you edit the edits it needs to be edited again: Taking 1 step forward, 2 steps back.

I'll edit the whole thing.

You shoud realize once again that ony in the FS and MW section are my input.
You have to look back for hours, like I did to realize the perfect order. This is the perfect order.

I realized that on NSK Bearing topic, that it would go last because of reader attention. I realized from Shabala's good edits that by mentioning mode change first, you can avoid hassle later. I took from Notco's edits of where correct placing is, and from Aurapeo's on proper detailing, and even from your edits on how things go together.

There's still grammar issues, and some false info as well.

Stop saying "it's perfect", "finished!", "Awaiting approval", and stuff like that. There's a lot of work that needs to be done still.

By the way, my username isn't Shabala.

Name a grammar edit. I took it to an editor, I took it to word, I took it with me everywhere. Prove it so.

I'm on an iPod right now...

]I removed those perfect things and when I do say them I mean I think they are ready.

And if you really had disdain for that, you would get mad at people who still call you "SSJ" "Shabaababalala" "Shabla".

I'm on an iPad too. I'm on an iPad every time I make edits, or even when I write full drafts.


You could put it through every grammar editor you can find, there's still errors.


Well it's not finished.

OK then what are the errors?

Mind sharing? Secrets are no fun until you tell everyone!

I mean if I want to stop saying its done, we might as well go after the mistakes, edit them, and tidy up.

(Oct. 16, 2011  1:21 AM)BeybladeStation Wrote: [ -> ]And if you really had disdain for that, you would get mad at people who still call you "SSJ" "Shabaababalala" "Shabla".

SSJ was his first username..
You should stop using this grammar editor of yours, just learn the damn grammar by yourself instead of having this automated thing do a sloppy job.

I did it myself too?

Why don't you damned point put the errors if you're so smart at it?