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Okay, same rules as usual.
Entry One
Entry 2
Okay, the rules are simple
First to Five votes wins.
Voting lasts until July 26th
Participants may NOT vote
Try to Elaborate, please.
Okay, let's get this thing underway!
Entry 2 had a dark ending, but it was definitely a great change. Besides, whoever the author was did a great job of describing the average life of teens Joyful_2

Entry 2.
Both are good,but Entry 2 is more interesting with lot of description.Entry 2
I'd agree, but I don't think I'm allowed to vote... Ah, well. 0-2, Entry 2.
I like the way that the author of entry 2 described the characters life and really let us understand the character. I also really liked the ending of it. I vote for entry 2!
Entry 2.
Entry 2.
Entry 2 leaves a clue behind, and thus become interesting.
Game. Entry 2 wins. Entry two was...NooDoo Soup! Congratulations! Now, go vote on Katsuya and my battle, it's been dead for a while now.
Well done NooDoo Soup. Congratulations.