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School is over, I have some spare time on my hands and since I post a lot in this forum these days, I thought about making and actual story. I have made a total of four which I wished to present to the public but they each have their doubts. So now that the introduction/back story is done, lets go start the story!

Chapter 1: Summer Beycation


Chapter 2: No more Knuckle Head




Ok, so if my graphics tablet ever comes, I will be making illustrations for the story, second chapter should be out VERY soon and until then, just give me feedback Grin
Hey do ya think there is something weird in your story?
That is, one part of the story does not involve any dialogues,
and there is only one person. You should make a balance between them.
I think this story sounds good.
Keep going and im sure it will turn out well!
(Like the PokeDex reference!)
Thanks guys, by the way, chapter two should be done by tonight Joyful_3!
check spelling and grammar.
RAW Wrote:The sound traveled down towards the chute, then suddenly out flew Hyper Gemios.
Surely that? ^
I know, the second chapter has many mistakes as it was rushed.

Changed the one you pointed out, finalizing the rest before posting the third.
sorry to be rude but beycation is my copyright so plz change your name thx
Na uh! I have been thinking of that name since May, it was planned to be a name for a Tournament but I changed it into being for the story.

Copyright Gasp
ok sorry to bother you