Jun. 07, 2011 9:55 PM
Chapter 1
The day it all started is hard to remember, but I will try.My name is Shikamaru Mizuhara on my birthday I recieved many things but one stuck out over them all. One gift was passed down from generation from generation just to be given to me on my 14th birthday. It was from my great great grand father, his name was Max Mizuhara. I was excited to see what it was but when I opened it it was just a spinning top. At first I was dissapointed, but that was before I knew its power. At first it was called Draciel but over time it started to change. One day at my best friend, Gohan Hiwatari's, 15th birthday party he also got a spinning top from his ancestor named Kai Hiwatari. He recieved a top named Dranzer. When he got that we began to battle right away. His power was much greater than mine. Overtime I had practised and had gotten stronger and the last time we battled it changed our lives forever. The final clash two giant beasts appeared from our tops. They explained to us that they were called beyblades and we must find the three other people who recieved beys. There is a war about to begin between good and evil. When the sky cleared there were two new beys lying there. There was mine RidgeTortuga WGB145 M:B and his Heatwave Alpha EBD145 M: S.
Please comment on my story. Here are the discriptions of the beys. Ridge is shaped like basalt but with out any gaps. Tortuga shaped like Draciels AR. Pc frame changes making rock shaped featers appear from the metal wheel. Wide Gravity Bowl is like a bd145 with the gb145 together. M:B is a tip stands for Morning Blast it switches from a defense to an attack bey.
Heatwave hell. When the pc frame is switched spikes come out like flame. The spintrack is a free spinning bd145 and M: S stands for Morning Shine which switches from defense to stamina. Alpha is shaped like DRANZERS AR
The day it all started is hard to remember, but I will try.My name is Shikamaru Mizuhara on my birthday I recieved many things but one stuck out over them all. One gift was passed down from generation from generation just to be given to me on my 14th birthday. It was from my great great grand father, his name was Max Mizuhara. I was excited to see what it was but when I opened it it was just a spinning top. At first I was dissapointed, but that was before I knew its power. At first it was called Draciel but over time it started to change. One day at my best friend, Gohan Hiwatari's, 15th birthday party he also got a spinning top from his ancestor named Kai Hiwatari. He recieved a top named Dranzer. When he got that we began to battle right away. His power was much greater than mine. Overtime I had practised and had gotten stronger and the last time we battled it changed our lives forever. The final clash two giant beasts appeared from our tops. They explained to us that they were called beyblades and we must find the three other people who recieved beys. There is a war about to begin between good and evil. When the sky cleared there were two new beys lying there. There was mine RidgeTortuga WGB145 M:B and his Heatwave Alpha EBD145 M: S.
Please comment on my story. Here are the discriptions of the beys. Ridge is shaped like basalt but with out any gaps. Tortuga shaped like Draciels AR. Pc frame changes making rock shaped featers appear from the metal wheel. Wide Gravity Bowl is like a bd145 with the gb145 together. M:B is a tip stands for Morning Blast it switches from a defense to an attack bey.
Heatwave hell. When the pc frame is switched spikes come out like flame. The spintrack is a free spinning bd145 and M: S stands for Morning Shine which switches from defense to stamina. Alpha is shaped like DRANZERS AR